Day 2

A Cliché Family
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Jinki comes home to the pitter-patter of footsteps on the wooden floor when his son comes running out to greet him on wobbly legs. He's now 17 months old and he has a crazy amount of energy. Jonghyun stretches his arms out towards his father.

"Up-py!" he says, then he giggles, repeats himself and stomps his little foot on the floor when Jinki doesn't immediately lift him. Jinki just smiles at his son. He puts his bag down and takes his shoes off before he lifts the impatient toddler from the floor. Jonghyun lights up. "Dada!" he greets Jinki and Jinki laughs. He kisses the boy and points to his own cheek so Jonghyun can smooch his wet lips against soft skin.

"What did you do today? Did you eat some good food?" he asks his son and Jonghyun starts babbling. Most of it is still words without meaning, his vocabulary isn't all that large yet, but Jinki smiles anyway while he listens to his son talking.

"Doggie!" Jonghyun then says excitedly and points into the living room and Jinki walks in. Kibum is sitting on the couch, his two dogs on the couch beside him and Jinki sighs.

"You know I don't like the dogs on the couch, babe." Kibum ignores his comment and smiles at him.

"Oh, hello, had a great day?" He then returns to whatever it is he's doing and Jinki is about to fall when he trips on something on the floor. Jonghyun clings to him and Jinki steadies himself before they both end up on the floor.

Jinki and Kibum's relationship had been a long time coming, they had been seeing each other 6 months without really making anything official. However, it's been 5 months since they became an official couple and Kibum is in Jinki's apartment more than he is in his own. And with Kibum comes the two toy poodles, Comme Des and Garcons, who are now on the couch, sleeping.

Jinki sets Jonghyun down and the boy runs to the couch, only to grab the edge and steady himself before he places his hand on Garcons' black fur. Kibum turns to look at the boy and the dog and he coos, unable to contain his love for the smaller boy. Jinki ruins the moment.

"Kibum, we have talked about it. You have to speak properly, otherwise he'll learn your weird noises." Kibum scoffs at that and grabs the small hand when it starts hitting the dog instead of petting it.

"Jonghyun-ah.." The boy peeks up at him, interest removed from the soft black fur to the male and Kibum releases his hold on the small hand. "You can't hit the dog. You have to pet the dog." Jonghyun starts hitting the dog lightly again and Kibum grabs his hand again. "Don't hit it. Pet it." He shows Jonghyun how to pet Garcons with his own hand and when Jonghyun starts petting the dog Kibum lights up. "Yes, ex

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SHIN33ee
#1
Chapter 72: I still love this story so much!
_haneulee
#2
Chapter 72: I'm so inlove with this story and I really think you did a great job with this one. One of the tags mentioned of TaeKai tho... will Jongin and Taemin actually end up being together (Oh I would love that) lol. (≧∀≦) Hope that you're still gonna continue with this. Hwaiting!!!
taempteng
#3
Chapter 2: Ahhh, can I just say how much I love the father-son relationship between Jinki and Jonghyun?? Like, it’s so adorable seeing how attentative Jinki is towards Jonghyun. ;w; These two are just so cute, oorz-

Buttt, the OnKey scenes. :D I may or may not have died on multiple occasions:
1. The mere fact that Jinki just called Kibum ‘babe’ had me dying on my couch (not really, still-)
2. When Jinki asked Kibum to speak human or else Jonghyun will continue learning his ‘weird noises’. X’D Duuude, that’s so funny. :’D
3. Jinki pecking Kibum on the cheek. I can’t, okay? I know it’s small and simple, but you made me fall in love with small and simple. (QvQ)
4. Jinki laughing at Jonghyun hitting Kibum, and the pout on Kibum afterwards. X’D Ahhh, poor Kibum. ;v;
5. Kibum complaining about not getting enough kisses, and Jinki’s promise to give him some later. [wiggle brows] Okay, I’m sorry, I’ll stop-
6. Jinki comforting Kibum after what happened between Jonghyun and Comme Des. (QAQ) Aww, it’s okay, Kibum. With time, I’m sure Jonghyun would also feel safe around you. <3
7. The kisses that Jinki promised Kibum. X’D Period.

Seriously, this family (can we call it one yet?) of three is just adorable, I dare anyone to say otherwise! (O^O)
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: I was squealing over Jonghyun at first. He’s so adorable! It’s so cute to see how Jinki is so soft towards Jonghyun and how he can’t deny Jonghyun anything. Aha, he could be a great father if he wasn’t giving his son ice cream to eat. (^^”) Still, an awesome father with an adorable kid and the interaction is just so heart fluttering! <3

And then, Kibum came into the picture, and I may or may not have fainted. I mean, I can’t don’t, okay? I really like how Kibum is fond of Jonghyun and how honest he is about wanting to date Jinki. X’D His reactions are just golden and I love every bit of the OnKey moment.

Ahhh, I’m already loving this! CX
taempteng
#5
Hey yooo it’s me again! X’D Back again for some more of your OnKey fics bc honestly they’re the best romance fics I’ve ever seen in my life. (QuQ)b So, yeyyyy, I’m excited to know what goes down in here! CX
Janu666
#6
I just can't believe that it took me this long to find this. Maybe because I don't read chaptered ones so oftenly. But I'm more than glad I started reading this one. It's just so cute!!! TT TT And yes, I read all the chapters. When I finished reading the last one (Q/A) I didn't realize it was the last so I was looking for the 'Next' option and there was no such a thing and I felt like crying for real TT TT This is just so beautiful. I love it so so soooo much!! I can't describe in words how much I love your story. Seriously, this is the most beautiful story I've ever read. You made me really really happy with this. I love you!!! And you're not going to end it, right? It's not completed yet, right? Hope you'll update soon. You did a really great job authornim. Clap clap clap!! Hehe...
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 67: OMG Minji this is so cute !
Grandparents!onkey taking care of their granddaughter ♥
And uncle Taemin taking care of his niece ♥ that's just so cute !
Poor onkey are getting old... but they still take care of and love their family with all their hearts ♥
I will never get over how realistic fic seems (;-;) I love it ♥
rddenthusiast #8
I love this so much, it's such a great concept!
SHIN33ee
#9
Chapter 22: omg- the train ride. Too real XD
Cereal_Shipper #10
Chapter 22: Aaawww this is so cute *w*
I feel so tired for them lmao, especially onkey ! How do they even manage to handle those kids... Having kids is tiring (>.<)
Toddler Taemin walking up and down the aisle with his dads (;-;) my weak heart... That's so adorable ♥
For a moment I expected Jinki and Minho to race for real... Guess we'll never know who'd win (Minho would, wouldn't he)
SHINee sleeping on each other's shoulders is one of my favorite concepts ♥
Yaaah ! Why do kids never listen when you tell them something ? Tsk...
I agree with them, they shouldn't take the train again... It's too burdensome with the kids
Thank you for the update, Minji ! :D It was cute ♥ I liked it !