Day 51

A Cliché Family
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A Cliché Family FiftyOne Kibum wanted this family trip to be memorable. Maybe it is going to be but he didn't want it to be memorable like this. The car is completely broken, there is no way to they're going to be able to drive home. Taemin and Minho sit inside the car, frowns very present on their faces. He stands beside his husband and stares at their Audi with the hood open. It's stupid. The car is only a couple of years old, it shouldn't have broken down like this, but it has. Kibum huffs and brings his arms around his chest in order to save a little heat in the cold February.

"Tell me again why we took this weekend trip and ended up with a broken car in February?" he asks Jinki and Jinki turns around to look at his husband instead of the car.

"You wanted to go to the mountains to show our boys the beauty of it," he reminds the other and Kibum bites his lower lip. Maybe it was his fault that they ended up on this desolate road in the middle of nowhere. It wasn't his idea though, he'd read somewhere in a magazine that bonding with your family over nature would strengthen the bond and while Kibum adores his family and thinks they're close, there's always room for improvement.

When he had proposed the idea to the family all of them had protested thus he had taken the safe solution and just decided for all of them. Well, not Jonghyun because the 22-year-old had declined, saying he wasn't coming home. Even Gwiboon didn't want to join them. So here they were and none of them were quite happy about it.

"Can't you call someone to help us?" Kibum asks and Jinki sighs and closes the hood of the car.

"I don't know. Who should I call?" That is a great question. Jinki's mother can't possibly pick them up in her small car and Kibum's parents are too far away to even be an option. Jonghyun doesn't own a car and their friends are all unavailable or don't own a car big enough for 5 people. The car door opens and Minho peeks out.

"Are we stuck?" he asks and when Jinki nods, he groans and slams the door again. Kibum leans into his husband to teleport a thought of 'I'm sorry' to the other.

"Let's get inside the car as well, we're going to freeze out here," he says instead and Jinki just sighs again and gets into the car. Taemin is playing a game on his game boy and looks up when his parents get in. Minho just turns to look out the window, refusing to look at the two men in front. His attitude annoys Jinki who turns around in his seat and looks at his 20-year-old son.

"Minho, being mad doesn't help." Minho glares at his father but loses his anger shortly after. The car is getting cold without the engine on and all of them are starting to freeze despite their warm clothes.

"I guess we have to hitchhike," says Minho suddenly and Kibum turns around in his seat to look at the boy.

"No." All three men look at Kibum when he utters his disagreement. "Hitchhiking is dangerous, we are not doing it!" He's not going to change his
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SHIN33ee
#1
Chapter 72: I still love this story so much!
_haneulee
#2
Chapter 72: I'm so inlove with this story and I really think you did a great job with this one. One of the tags mentioned of TaeKai tho... will Jongin and Taemin actually end up being together (Oh I would love that) lol. (≧∀≦) Hope that you're still gonna continue with this. Hwaiting!!!
taempteng
#3
Chapter 2: Ahhh, can I just say how much I love the father-son relationship between Jinki and Jonghyun?? Like, it’s so adorable seeing how attentative Jinki is towards Jonghyun. ;w; These two are just so cute, oorz-

Buttt, the OnKey scenes. :D I may or may not have died on multiple occasions:
1. The mere fact that Jinki just called Kibum ‘babe’ had me dying on my couch (not really, still-)
2. When Jinki asked Kibum to speak human or else Jonghyun will continue learning his ‘weird noises’. X’D Duuude, that’s so funny. :’D
3. Jinki pecking Kibum on the cheek. I can’t, okay? I know it’s small and simple, but you made me fall in love with small and simple. (QvQ)
4. Jinki laughing at Jonghyun hitting Kibum, and the pout on Kibum afterwards. X’D Ahhh, poor Kibum. ;v;
5. Kibum complaining about not getting enough kisses, and Jinki’s promise to give him some later. [wiggle brows] Okay, I’m sorry, I’ll stop-
6. Jinki comforting Kibum after what happened between Jonghyun and Comme Des. (QAQ) Aww, it’s okay, Kibum. With time, I’m sure Jonghyun would also feel safe around you. <3
7. The kisses that Jinki promised Kibum. X’D Period.

Seriously, this family (can we call it one yet?) of three is just adorable, I dare anyone to say otherwise! (O^O)
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: I was squealing over Jonghyun at first. He’s so adorable! It’s so cute to see how Jinki is so soft towards Jonghyun and how he can’t deny Jonghyun anything. Aha, he could be a great father if he wasn’t giving his son ice cream to eat. (^^”) Still, an awesome father with an adorable kid and the interaction is just so heart fluttering! <3

And then, Kibum came into the picture, and I may or may not have fainted. I mean, I can’t don’t, okay? I really like how Kibum is fond of Jonghyun and how honest he is about wanting to date Jinki. X’D His reactions are just golden and I love every bit of the OnKey moment.

Ahhh, I’m already loving this! CX
taempteng
#5
Hey yooo it’s me again! X’D Back again for some more of your OnKey fics bc honestly they’re the best romance fics I’ve ever seen in my life. (QuQ)b So, yeyyyy, I’m excited to know what goes down in here! CX
Janu666
#6
I just can't believe that it took me this long to find this. Maybe because I don't read chaptered ones so oftenly. But I'm more than glad I started reading this one. It's just so cute!!! TT TT And yes, I read all the chapters. When I finished reading the last one (Q/A) I didn't realize it was the last so I was looking for the 'Next' option and there was no such a thing and I felt like crying for real TT TT This is just so beautiful. I love it so so soooo much!! I can't describe in words how much I love your story. Seriously, this is the most beautiful story I've ever read. You made me really really happy with this. I love you!!! And you're not going to end it, right? It's not completed yet, right? Hope you'll update soon. You did a really great job authornim. Clap clap clap!! Hehe...
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 67: OMG Minji this is so cute !
Grandparents!onkey taking care of their granddaughter ♥
And uncle Taemin taking care of his niece ♥ that's just so cute !
Poor onkey are getting old... but they still take care of and love their family with all their hearts ♥
I will never get over how realistic fic seems (;-;) I love it ♥
rddenthusiast #8
I love this so much, it's such a great concept!
SHIN33ee
#9
Chapter 22: omg- the train ride. Too real XD
Cereal_Shipper #10
Chapter 22: Aaawww this is so cute *w*
I feel so tired for them lmao, especially onkey ! How do they even manage to handle those kids... Having kids is tiring (>.<)
Toddler Taemin walking up and down the aisle with his dads (;-;) my weak heart... That's so adorable ♥
For a moment I expected Jinki and Minho to race for real... Guess we'll never know who'd win (Minho would, wouldn't he)
SHINee sleeping on each other's shoulders is one of my favorite concepts ♥
Yaaah ! Why do kids never listen when you tell them something ? Tsk...
I agree with them, they shouldn't take the train again... It's too burdensome with the kids
Thank you for the update, Minji ! :D It was cute ♥ I liked it !