Day 20A

A Cliché Family
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A Cliché Family Twenty A   Jinki grabs Minho’s hand and stops him from running on the platform. Jonghyun yawns and Kibum is holding onto the stroller in which Taemin is humming a melody in an unknown language. Kibum’s parents stand beside them and look toward the slowly approaching train.



They have been on a long weekend in Daegu to visit Kibum’s parents and now they’re on their way home. Minho has a ridiculous amount of energy, Taemin just woke up after his afternoon nap and Jonghyun is getting increasingly annoyed with the waiting time. For God knows what reasons, Kibum and Jinki had decided to take the train instead of driving but they’re regretting that decision right now. Driving with the boys is easy and although it takes about an hour more to drive, it is slowly becoming Jinki’s favorite way to get to and from Daegu.

Minho jumps in place and looks up at his father.

“Daaaaaad,” he says and swings their intertwined hands. Jonghyun clings to Kibum’s side and leans his head against his chest.

“I want to go home,” Jonghyun says and Taemin whines a little when Kibum momentarily forgets to push the stroller forward and backwards slowly.

“We have to wait for the train to stand still, Jonghyun,” Kibum says and Jinki stops Minho from lurching forward towards a pigeon on the platform. The train finally reaches the platform and when the door opens, Jinki has to let go of Minho’s hand so he can help Kibum with the stroller. Minho hurries into the train and Jonghyun follows his brother.

“Minho!” Jinki shouts after him. Minho looks back at them and points to the right, into the train wagon.

“Is it this way?” he asks. They get the stroller inside and Kibum reaches into his pocket so he can find their tickets and their seats.

“73, 75, 77, 79,” Kibum reads off of the tickets and Jonghyun and Minho dashes inside to find the seats. Jinki pushes past Kibum and the stroller so he can follow their sons. Kibum turns around in the doorway and sends his parents a smile. “Thanks! I’ll call you.”

Kibum waves at them as the doors close and he watches them get smaller when the train starts moving again. When he pushes the stroller inside the wagon, he finds Jinki and the boys at their seats.

Jonghyun and Minho have the window seats while Jinki sits closer to the aisle. Kibum parks the stroller and grabs the bag. He slings the bag over his shoulder while Taemin starts whining before he looks at his youngest son and unbuckles him. Jinki takes the bag from Kibum when they get close and puts it in the overhead bin and Kibum sits down next to Jonghyun.



They're only 10 minutes into the ride when Jonghyun leans against the window and sighs loudly.

“Dad, I’m hungry,” he says.

“Dad, I have to pee,” Minho says right after. Kibum shifts Taemin on his lap and the toddler frowns a little. Jinki stands and grabs the bag and places it on the table so Kibum can rummage through it with difficulty to find their packed lunches while he helps Minho to the toilet.

Minho can go to the bathroom himself but Jinki has an inkling that the boy is going to run throughout the entire train if he isn’t there to catch him when he finishes and Jinki really doesn’t want Minho to go missing.

Jonghyun is eating when Jinki and Minho returns and Minho crawls into his seat again. He reaches towards the bag and finds his gameboy, although his leg is still bouncing with unus
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SHIN33ee
#1
Chapter 72: I still love this story so much!
_haneulee
#2
Chapter 72: I'm so inlove with this story and I really think you did a great job with this one. One of the tags mentioned of TaeKai tho... will Jongin and Taemin actually end up being together (Oh I would love that) lol. (≧∀≦) Hope that you're still gonna continue with this. Hwaiting!!!
taempteng
#3
Chapter 2: Ahhh, can I just say how much I love the father-son relationship between Jinki and Jonghyun?? Like, it’s so adorable seeing how attentative Jinki is towards Jonghyun. ;w; These two are just so cute, oorz-

Buttt, the OnKey scenes. :D I may or may not have died on multiple occasions:
1. The mere fact that Jinki just called Kibum ‘babe’ had me dying on my couch (not really, still-)
2. When Jinki asked Kibum to speak human or else Jonghyun will continue learning his ‘weird noises’. X’D Duuude, that’s so funny. :’D
3. Jinki pecking Kibum on the cheek. I can’t, okay? I know it’s small and simple, but you made me fall in love with small and simple. (QvQ)
4. Jinki laughing at Jonghyun hitting Kibum, and the pout on Kibum afterwards. X’D Ahhh, poor Kibum. ;v;
5. Kibum complaining about not getting enough kisses, and Jinki’s promise to give him some later. [wiggle brows] Okay, I’m sorry, I’ll stop-
6. Jinki comforting Kibum after what happened between Jonghyun and Comme Des. (QAQ) Aww, it’s okay, Kibum. With time, I’m sure Jonghyun would also feel safe around you. <3
7. The kisses that Jinki promised Kibum. X’D Period.

Seriously, this family (can we call it one yet?) of three is just adorable, I dare anyone to say otherwise! (O^O)
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: I was squealing over Jonghyun at first. He’s so adorable! It’s so cute to see how Jinki is so soft towards Jonghyun and how he can’t deny Jonghyun anything. Aha, he could be a great father if he wasn’t giving his son ice cream to eat. (^^”) Still, an awesome father with an adorable kid and the interaction is just so heart fluttering! <3

And then, Kibum came into the picture, and I may or may not have fainted. I mean, I can’t don’t, okay? I really like how Kibum is fond of Jonghyun and how honest he is about wanting to date Jinki. X’D His reactions are just golden and I love every bit of the OnKey moment.

Ahhh, I’m already loving this! CX
taempteng
#5
Hey yooo it’s me again! X’D Back again for some more of your OnKey fics bc honestly they’re the best romance fics I’ve ever seen in my life. (QuQ)b So, yeyyyy, I’m excited to know what goes down in here! CX
Janu666
#6
I just can't believe that it took me this long to find this. Maybe because I don't read chaptered ones so oftenly. But I'm more than glad I started reading this one. It's just so cute!!! TT TT And yes, I read all the chapters. When I finished reading the last one (Q/A) I didn't realize it was the last so I was looking for the 'Next' option and there was no such a thing and I felt like crying for real TT TT This is just so beautiful. I love it so so soooo much!! I can't describe in words how much I love your story. Seriously, this is the most beautiful story I've ever read. You made me really really happy with this. I love you!!! And you're not going to end it, right? It's not completed yet, right? Hope you'll update soon. You did a really great job authornim. Clap clap clap!! Hehe...
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 67: OMG Minji this is so cute !
Grandparents!onkey taking care of their granddaughter ♥
And uncle Taemin taking care of his niece ♥ that's just so cute !
Poor onkey are getting old... but they still take care of and love their family with all their hearts ♥
I will never get over how realistic fic seems (;-;) I love it ♥
rddenthusiast #8
I love this so much, it's such a great concept!
SHIN33ee
#9
Chapter 22: omg- the train ride. Too real XD
Cereal_Shipper #10
Chapter 22: Aaawww this is so cute *w*
I feel so tired for them lmao, especially onkey ! How do they even manage to handle those kids... Having kids is tiring (>.<)
Toddler Taemin walking up and down the aisle with his dads (;-;) my weak heart... That's so adorable ♥
For a moment I expected Jinki and Minho to race for real... Guess we'll never know who'd win (Minho would, wouldn't he)
SHINee sleeping on each other's shoulders is one of my favorite concepts ♥
Yaaah ! Why do kids never listen when you tell them something ? Tsk...
I agree with them, they shouldn't take the train again... It's too burdensome with the kids
Thank you for the update, Minji ! :D It was cute ♥ I liked it !