Day 10

A Cliché Family
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A Cliché Family ten   "Kibum, it'll be fine!" Jinki says and looks at the other man. Kibum doesn't seem to agree but he says nothing. Jinki just laughs a little at him. "Hey, babe, it's only for a couple of days, they'll be fine!"

Jinki stresses the last part of his sentence, but Kibum still seems to disagree.

"But Jinki, it's not just an hour or two! They'll have to sleep here, I don't like it. I'll cancel my business trip, we can wait until you return home from Tokyo."

Kibum bites his lips nervously. Jinki just shakes his head.

"No, stop it. I'll go to Tokyo and you will be in Taipei. It's a huge deal for your company, this advertisement is the biggest job you've ever had. You're not allowed to run away because you're afraid of leaving our sons." Kibum still doesn't completely agree with Jinki but he doesn't say anything so Jinki continues. "Jonghyun is 4 and Minho is 18 months - my mother is perfectly capable of taking care of them for the few days we'll be gone."

Kibum huffs and Jinki sighs before he turns to find Jonghyun in the doorway.

"Hey superman," he greets the boy and Jonghyun sends him a smile.

"Is we going to grandma now?" he asks and looks towards the wall clock. He can't read it yet but he has been obsessed with time the past weeks. Jinki finds reassurance in that, Kibum is convinced he can teach Jonghyun the clock long before other kids. Jinki doesn't care much for it as long as the boy is curious. He's been a healthy boy so Jinki sees no reason to hurry his development. Kibum sends Jinki a glare but the older man ignores his boyfriend.

"In a few minutes. Say your goodbyes to your father."

With those words, he leaves Kibum and Jonghyun in the room. Jonghyun looks at Kibum expectantly and Kibum deflates, his worry slowly dissipating as he says his goodbyes to Jonghyun.



Jonghyun is staring into the living room through the small crack in the door. His grandmother is playing with his baby brother and although Minho is sort of cute, Jonghyun is getting a little annoyed with the other boy. Mainly because he feels forgotten. It's not that his grandmother doesn't love him but it's just that she's gushing all over the smaller boy. And Jonghyun knows that Minho needs more than he does
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SHIN33ee
#1
Chapter 72: I still love this story so much!
_haneulee
#2
Chapter 72: I'm so inlove with this story and I really think you did a great job with this one. One of the tags mentioned of TaeKai tho... will Jongin and Taemin actually end up being together (Oh I would love that) lol. (≧∀≦) Hope that you're still gonna continue with this. Hwaiting!!!
taempteng
#3
Chapter 2: Ahhh, can I just say how much I love the father-son relationship between Jinki and Jonghyun?? Like, it’s so adorable seeing how attentative Jinki is towards Jonghyun. ;w; These two are just so cute, oorz-

Buttt, the OnKey scenes. :D I may or may not have died on multiple occasions:
1. The mere fact that Jinki just called Kibum ‘babe’ had me dying on my couch (not really, still-)
2. When Jinki asked Kibum to speak human or else Jonghyun will continue learning his ‘weird noises’. X’D Duuude, that’s so funny. :’D
3. Jinki pecking Kibum on the cheek. I can’t, okay? I know it’s small and simple, but you made me fall in love with small and simple. (QvQ)
4. Jinki laughing at Jonghyun hitting Kibum, and the pout on Kibum afterwards. X’D Ahhh, poor Kibum. ;v;
5. Kibum complaining about not getting enough kisses, and Jinki’s promise to give him some later. [wiggle brows] Okay, I’m sorry, I’ll stop-
6. Jinki comforting Kibum after what happened between Jonghyun and Comme Des. (QAQ) Aww, it’s okay, Kibum. With time, I’m sure Jonghyun would also feel safe around you. <3
7. The kisses that Jinki promised Kibum. X’D Period.

Seriously, this family (can we call it one yet?) of three is just adorable, I dare anyone to say otherwise! (O^O)
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: I was squealing over Jonghyun at first. He’s so adorable! It’s so cute to see how Jinki is so soft towards Jonghyun and how he can’t deny Jonghyun anything. Aha, he could be a great father if he wasn’t giving his son ice cream to eat. (^^”) Still, an awesome father with an adorable kid and the interaction is just so heart fluttering! <3

And then, Kibum came into the picture, and I may or may not have fainted. I mean, I can’t don’t, okay? I really like how Kibum is fond of Jonghyun and how honest he is about wanting to date Jinki. X’D His reactions are just golden and I love every bit of the OnKey moment.

Ahhh, I’m already loving this! CX
taempteng
#5
Hey yooo it’s me again! X’D Back again for some more of your OnKey fics bc honestly they’re the best romance fics I’ve ever seen in my life. (QuQ)b So, yeyyyy, I’m excited to know what goes down in here! CX
Janu666
#6
I just can't believe that it took me this long to find this. Maybe because I don't read chaptered ones so oftenly. But I'm more than glad I started reading this one. It's just so cute!!! TT TT And yes, I read all the chapters. When I finished reading the last one (Q/A) I didn't realize it was the last so I was looking for the 'Next' option and there was no such a thing and I felt like crying for real TT TT This is just so beautiful. I love it so so soooo much!! I can't describe in words how much I love your story. Seriously, this is the most beautiful story I've ever read. You made me really really happy with this. I love you!!! And you're not going to end it, right? It's not completed yet, right? Hope you'll update soon. You did a really great job authornim. Clap clap clap!! Hehe...
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 67: OMG Minji this is so cute !
Grandparents!onkey taking care of their granddaughter ♥
And uncle Taemin taking care of his niece ♥ that's just so cute !
Poor onkey are getting old... but they still take care of and love their family with all their hearts ♥
I will never get over how realistic fic seems (;-;) I love it ♥
rddenthusiast #8
I love this so much, it's such a great concept!
SHIN33ee
#9
Chapter 22: omg- the train ride. Too real XD
Cereal_Shipper #10
Chapter 22: Aaawww this is so cute *w*
I feel so tired for them lmao, especially onkey ! How do they even manage to handle those kids... Having kids is tiring (>.<)
Toddler Taemin walking up and down the aisle with his dads (;-;) my weak heart... That's so adorable ♥
For a moment I expected Jinki and Minho to race for real... Guess we'll never know who'd win (Minho would, wouldn't he)
SHINee sleeping on each other's shoulders is one of my favorite concepts ♥
Yaaah ! Why do kids never listen when you tell them something ? Tsk...
I agree with them, they shouldn't take the train again... It's too burdensome with the kids
Thank you for the update, Minji ! :D It was cute ♥ I liked it !