Day 15

A Cliché Family
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A Cliché Family fifteen   Comme Des and Garçons are no longer small puppies. They're adorable dogs nonetheless but with age comes laziness and being in a house with two lively boys aren't always a hit. So when Jinki turns to Kibum one evening and tells him he thinks they should adopt another puppy, Kibum's eyes widen.

“Are you sure that's a good idea?” he asks worried before he turns to look at the toy poodles who are currently sleeping on the couch. Jinki shrugs. He doesn't know what is a good idea anymore but he knows that having a 9-year-old and a 6-year-old is a lot of work. He also knows that he's getting busier at the hospital now that he's soon to be a senior despite his young age and he knows that Kibum is getting busier as well. It's true that Jonghyun is in school most of the day and Minho just started grade 1 but Jinki wants to do more for his boys.

Jonghyun has been speaking of animals ever since his friend Baekhyun told him he was getting his own hamster. Comme Des and Garçons are family dogs so Jonghyun doesn't really count them as his. Honestly, they're more Kibum's than anybody else's. It's been like that ever since Kibum moved into the apartment those 8 years ago.

“Maybe,” Jinki answers honestly. Kibum sighs. It's not the answer he wanted but it's typical Jinki to be unsure of such things.

“I'll look into it,” he says and Jinki sends him one of those signature smiles that has his heart beating after 8 years. Kibum thinks it's unfair that Jinki still affects him like that when it's been so many years, but he can't really say he dislikes it either. Jinki nods before he leaves to find Minho so he can help the boy read and Kibum stands in the living room. Maybe they should consider buying something bigger to live in before they get another puppy. He doesn't say this to Jinki.



Two weeks later and Kibum wonders when he got so weak. They're at a farm outside of the city and small dachshund puppies are running around their feet. Jonghyun has instantly fallen in love, carrying one puppy after the other. Minho is more shy, hiding behind Jinki while Kibum tries to talk to the owner. He needs to know who the mother is, how they're raised, what they eat, if they're trained, if they're clean. There's so much more to adopting a dog. Jonghyun runs up to him with the smallest dachshund puppy Kibum has ever seen in his arms.

“Is she not the cutest, dad??” Jonghyun asks and Kibum has to nod because that is a very cute puppy. Jonghyun cuddles the puppy bef
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SHIN33ee
#1
Chapter 72: I still love this story so much!
_haneulee
#2
Chapter 72: I'm so inlove with this story and I really think you did a great job with this one. One of the tags mentioned of TaeKai tho... will Jongin and Taemin actually end up being together (Oh I would love that) lol. (≧∀≦) Hope that you're still gonna continue with this. Hwaiting!!!
taempteng
#3
Chapter 2: Ahhh, can I just say how much I love the father-son relationship between Jinki and Jonghyun?? Like, it’s so adorable seeing how attentative Jinki is towards Jonghyun. ;w; These two are just so cute, oorz-

Buttt, the OnKey scenes. :D I may or may not have died on multiple occasions:
1. The mere fact that Jinki just called Kibum ‘babe’ had me dying on my couch (not really, still-)
2. When Jinki asked Kibum to speak human or else Jonghyun will continue learning his ‘weird noises’. X’D Duuude, that’s so funny. :’D
3. Jinki pecking Kibum on the cheek. I can’t, okay? I know it’s small and simple, but you made me fall in love with small and simple. (QvQ)
4. Jinki laughing at Jonghyun hitting Kibum, and the pout on Kibum afterwards. X’D Ahhh, poor Kibum. ;v;
5. Kibum complaining about not getting enough kisses, and Jinki’s promise to give him some later. [wiggle brows] Okay, I’m sorry, I’ll stop-
6. Jinki comforting Kibum after what happened between Jonghyun and Comme Des. (QAQ) Aww, it’s okay, Kibum. With time, I’m sure Jonghyun would also feel safe around you. <3
7. The kisses that Jinki promised Kibum. X’D Period.

Seriously, this family (can we call it one yet?) of three is just adorable, I dare anyone to say otherwise! (O^O)
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: I was squealing over Jonghyun at first. He’s so adorable! It’s so cute to see how Jinki is so soft towards Jonghyun and how he can’t deny Jonghyun anything. Aha, he could be a great father if he wasn’t giving his son ice cream to eat. (^^”) Still, an awesome father with an adorable kid and the interaction is just so heart fluttering! <3

And then, Kibum came into the picture, and I may or may not have fainted. I mean, I can’t don’t, okay? I really like how Kibum is fond of Jonghyun and how honest he is about wanting to date Jinki. X’D His reactions are just golden and I love every bit of the OnKey moment.

Ahhh, I’m already loving this! CX
taempteng
#5
Hey yooo it’s me again! X’D Back again for some more of your OnKey fics bc honestly they’re the best romance fics I’ve ever seen in my life. (QuQ)b So, yeyyyy, I’m excited to know what goes down in here! CX
Janu666
#6
I just can't believe that it took me this long to find this. Maybe because I don't read chaptered ones so oftenly. But I'm more than glad I started reading this one. It's just so cute!!! TT TT And yes, I read all the chapters. When I finished reading the last one (Q/A) I didn't realize it was the last so I was looking for the 'Next' option and there was no such a thing and I felt like crying for real TT TT This is just so beautiful. I love it so so soooo much!! I can't describe in words how much I love your story. Seriously, this is the most beautiful story I've ever read. You made me really really happy with this. I love you!!! And you're not going to end it, right? It's not completed yet, right? Hope you'll update soon. You did a really great job authornim. Clap clap clap!! Hehe...
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 67: OMG Minji this is so cute !
Grandparents!onkey taking care of their granddaughter ♥
And uncle Taemin taking care of his niece ♥ that's just so cute !
Poor onkey are getting old... but they still take care of and love their family with all their hearts ♥
I will never get over how realistic fic seems (;-;) I love it ♥
rddenthusiast #8
I love this so much, it's such a great concept!
SHIN33ee
#9
Chapter 22: omg- the train ride. Too real XD
Cereal_Shipper #10
Chapter 22: Aaawww this is so cute *w*
I feel so tired for them lmao, especially onkey ! How do they even manage to handle those kids... Having kids is tiring (>.<)
Toddler Taemin walking up and down the aisle with his dads (;-;) my weak heart... That's so adorable ♥
For a moment I expected Jinki and Minho to race for real... Guess we'll never know who'd win (Minho would, wouldn't he)
SHINee sleeping on each other's shoulders is one of my favorite concepts ♥
Yaaah ! Why do kids never listen when you tell them something ? Tsk...
I agree with them, they shouldn't take the train again... It's too burdensome with the kids
Thank you for the update, Minji ! :D It was cute ♥ I liked it !