Day 55

A Cliché Family
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A Cliché Family Fiftyfive   It's the usual cold December morning when Jinki wakes up on December 14th. There is nothing to indicate that today is the day he turns 50. Kibum is sleeping next to him and Jinki turns to look at the alarm clock on the nightstand. It's 6.34 and Jinki can't help the chuckle that escapes him when he realizes that he's woken up far too early. Kibum turns in his sleep and cuddles closer to Jinki.

The older man smiles at his husband and wraps an arm around Kibum's waist. Time ticks by as Jinki lies awake in bed and thinks about the time that has passed by.

25 years ago he was a single father who had just met Kibum. He had been nervous and fidgety on their first date but Jonghyun had been nothing but a treasure when they had taken a walk in the park. Kibum talked a lot back then. He doesn't anymore. It's like their conversations have grown quiet, as if they know what the other thinks without words. Jinki hopes it's a good sign. He remembers awkward hugs and incredibly awkward confessions. He remembers Kibum almost panicking when Jinki had asked him to look after a sleeping Jonghyun for 30 minutes in March. He'd fallen in love with the other fairly quickly, it was impossible not to love 23-year-old Kibum, but he had been rather hesitant with asking him out.

Jinki presses a kiss to Kibum's temple when he hears some rustling outside the door. He hears hushed voices and closes his eyes to pretend he's asleep. It sounds like a lot of people when someone sneaks into the room but Jinki guesses it's only three.

"Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you, happy birthday dear father, happy birthday to you."

Jinki yawns and fakes being awakened by the song while Kibum opens his eyes groggily and looks around in the room. In the doorway stands four people, three boys and one pregnant girl and they all smile at him. Jonghyun has an arm protectively around his pregnant girlfriend, Minho holds a cake with lit candles and a wide smile painting his features and Taemin uncrosses his arms and tries not to seem too happy. Teenagers, Jinki chuckles to himself before Kibum finally catches his attention when he intertwines their fingers.

"Happy birthday, honey," he says, voice laced with sleep and Jinki just smiles and presses a quick peck to Kibum's sleepy lips. Then he turns his attention back to his sons and his daughter-in-law and urges them inside the master bedroom.

"Thank you!" he says and takes the cake from Minho when they all get around to sit on the bed as well. There's not a lot of space but Jinki likes it just like this. Gwiboon looks at him a little apologetical.

"I tried to tell him he shouldn't bring me, but Jonghyun is overprotective, didn't think I could handle being alone." She sighs and Jinki laughs. He grabs her hand and squeezes
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SHIN33ee
#1
Chapter 72: I still love this story so much!
_haneulee
#2
Chapter 72: I'm so inlove with this story and I really think you did a great job with this one. One of the tags mentioned of TaeKai tho... will Jongin and Taemin actually end up being together (Oh I would love that) lol. (≧∀≦) Hope that you're still gonna continue with this. Hwaiting!!!
taempteng
#3
Chapter 2: Ahhh, can I just say how much I love the father-son relationship between Jinki and Jonghyun?? Like, it’s so adorable seeing how attentative Jinki is towards Jonghyun. ;w; These two are just so cute, oorz-

Buttt, the OnKey scenes. :D I may or may not have died on multiple occasions:
1. The mere fact that Jinki just called Kibum ‘babe’ had me dying on my couch (not really, still-)
2. When Jinki asked Kibum to speak human or else Jonghyun will continue learning his ‘weird noises’. X’D Duuude, that’s so funny. :’D
3. Jinki pecking Kibum on the cheek. I can’t, okay? I know it’s small and simple, but you made me fall in love with small and simple. (QvQ)
4. Jinki laughing at Jonghyun hitting Kibum, and the pout on Kibum afterwards. X’D Ahhh, poor Kibum. ;v;
5. Kibum complaining about not getting enough kisses, and Jinki’s promise to give him some later. [wiggle brows] Okay, I’m sorry, I’ll stop-
6. Jinki comforting Kibum after what happened between Jonghyun and Comme Des. (QAQ) Aww, it’s okay, Kibum. With time, I’m sure Jonghyun would also feel safe around you. <3
7. The kisses that Jinki promised Kibum. X’D Period.

Seriously, this family (can we call it one yet?) of three is just adorable, I dare anyone to say otherwise! (O^O)
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: I was squealing over Jonghyun at first. He’s so adorable! It’s so cute to see how Jinki is so soft towards Jonghyun and how he can’t deny Jonghyun anything. Aha, he could be a great father if he wasn’t giving his son ice cream to eat. (^^”) Still, an awesome father with an adorable kid and the interaction is just so heart fluttering! <3

And then, Kibum came into the picture, and I may or may not have fainted. I mean, I can’t don’t, okay? I really like how Kibum is fond of Jonghyun and how honest he is about wanting to date Jinki. X’D His reactions are just golden and I love every bit of the OnKey moment.

Ahhh, I’m already loving this! CX
taempteng
#5
Hey yooo it’s me again! X’D Back again for some more of your OnKey fics bc honestly they’re the best romance fics I’ve ever seen in my life. (QuQ)b So, yeyyyy, I’m excited to know what goes down in here! CX
Janu666
#6
I just can't believe that it took me this long to find this. Maybe because I don't read chaptered ones so oftenly. But I'm more than glad I started reading this one. It's just so cute!!! TT TT And yes, I read all the chapters. When I finished reading the last one (Q/A) I didn't realize it was the last so I was looking for the 'Next' option and there was no such a thing and I felt like crying for real TT TT This is just so beautiful. I love it so so soooo much!! I can't describe in words how much I love your story. Seriously, this is the most beautiful story I've ever read. You made me really really happy with this. I love you!!! And you're not going to end it, right? It's not completed yet, right? Hope you'll update soon. You did a really great job authornim. Clap clap clap!! Hehe...
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 67: OMG Minji this is so cute !
Grandparents!onkey taking care of their granddaughter ♥
And uncle Taemin taking care of his niece ♥ that's just so cute !
Poor onkey are getting old... but they still take care of and love their family with all their hearts ♥
I will never get over how realistic fic seems (;-;) I love it ♥
rddenthusiast #8
I love this so much, it's such a great concept!
SHIN33ee
#9
Chapter 22: omg- the train ride. Too real XD
Cereal_Shipper #10
Chapter 22: Aaawww this is so cute *w*
I feel so tired for them lmao, especially onkey ! How do they even manage to handle those kids... Having kids is tiring (>.<)
Toddler Taemin walking up and down the aisle with his dads (;-;) my weak heart... That's so adorable ♥
For a moment I expected Jinki and Minho to race for real... Guess we'll never know who'd win (Minho would, wouldn't he)
SHINee sleeping on each other's shoulders is one of my favorite concepts ♥
Yaaah ! Why do kids never listen when you tell them something ? Tsk...
I agree with them, they shouldn't take the train again... It's too burdensome with the kids
Thank you for the update, Minji ! :D It was cute ♥ I liked it !