Day 31

A Cliché Family
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A Cliché Family ThirtyOne   Jonghyun is in his own room, headphones playing soft music into his ears while he tries to write lyrics in his notebook. He's been having a lot of inspiration lately and he has a feeling that this one is going to be really really great. He might even record it and upload it to youtube if it turns out the way he wants it to.

Downstairs Taemin is playing with his dancing friend Jongin. Jonghyun was supposed to watch them and "babysit" them because Jinki and Kibum had both gone with Minho for his football game but really - Taemin is 7 years old so Jonghyun believes he can take care of himself. Jonghyun doesn't want to babysit his brother either, what 17-year-old does that?

He's focused on the music and his lyrics and it isn't until his door slams open and Taemin taps his shoulder with a whiny 'hyung' that Jonghyun realizes that something is wrong.



"Please," Minho begs and looks at both his fathers from the backseat. "Please, please, please."

He settles his gaze on Jinki who is behind the wheel and pleads once again.

"It's been so long! And we can just get it from the drive-thru, it'll be easy and quick and we'll be home in no time! Dad, please!"

Eventually, Jinki gives up and agrees. Kibum rolls his eyes at Minho's wide smile. They rarely buy unhealthy fast food because Kibum likes cooking. It does happen from time to time, of course, it does, but it's definitely not that often. He's not really sure either why Minho of all people wants fast food after his football game but he does and so he gets it.

Jinki takes the next road to the left and gets off the freeway to find whatever fast food store Minho is in the mood for.



When Jonghyun follows Taemin into the living room it's to find a flustered 6-year-old Jongin and Kibum's glass vase from Japan broken on the floor.

"," he hisses and turns to face Taemin. The other boy looks at the floor but he doesn't exactly look apologetic either. "What the were you doing?! You know dad loves that thing!"

Taemin glares at Jonghyun then.

"We were just dancing! It's not our fault. Just clean it up, hyung! Dad's going to be mad!"

"Clean it up yourself!" Jonghyun spits and Taemin whines. He takes another look at the shattered glass on the floor before he sighs. "Okay, I'll help you. Go get the broom in the closet."

Taemin drags Jongin with him to find the broom and Jonghyun sits on the floor and starts to collect the pieces. It's broken into what seems like thousands of pieces and there's no chance whatsoever that Jonghyun will be able to fix it. They'll just have to pray to some heavenly god that Kibum doesn't notice it. Taemin and Jongin come back with the broom 2 minutes later and help Jonghyun sweep up the mess on the wooden floor.

"You should tell dad, though," Jonghyun says and Taemin shakes his head.

"No! Please don't tell dad either!" It becomes some sort of agreement after that.



Jinki groans and taps his fingers on the steering wheel. In front of them is at least 5 cars and it takes forever. Isn't drive thru supposed to be the quick way to get your food? Jinki is pretty sure it would have been faster to park and go inside.

If it wasn't for the fact that there are at least 2 cars behind them as well, he would have backed out of the queue and told Minho he was not getting his dinner from Burger King. But now they're stuck so they just have to continue and wait in line.

Kibum's patience seems to be running thin as well and Minho is starting to sulk on the backseat.

"It takes so long," he whines and Kibum turns around in the passenger seat to look at him.

"You're the one who wanted to eat Burger King, so you'll just have to be patient. You're not eating in the car anyway, I won't allow it."

His voice is stern but it has Jinki smiling. Ever since they bought the Audi his husband has been very strict with food in the car. It's not that Jinki wants anyone to eat in the Audi either, but Kibum is really really
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SHIN33ee
#1
Chapter 72: I still love this story so much!
_haneulee
#2
Chapter 72: I'm so inlove with this story and I really think you did a great job with this one. One of the tags mentioned of TaeKai tho... will Jongin and Taemin actually end up being together (Oh I would love that) lol. (≧∀≦) Hope that you're still gonna continue with this. Hwaiting!!!
taempteng
#3
Chapter 2: Ahhh, can I just say how much I love the father-son relationship between Jinki and Jonghyun?? Like, it’s so adorable seeing how attentative Jinki is towards Jonghyun. ;w; These two are just so cute, oorz-

Buttt, the OnKey scenes. :D I may or may not have died on multiple occasions:
1. The mere fact that Jinki just called Kibum ‘babe’ had me dying on my couch (not really, still-)
2. When Jinki asked Kibum to speak human or else Jonghyun will continue learning his ‘weird noises’. X’D Duuude, that’s so funny. :’D
3. Jinki pecking Kibum on the cheek. I can’t, okay? I know it’s small and simple, but you made me fall in love with small and simple. (QvQ)
4. Jinki laughing at Jonghyun hitting Kibum, and the pout on Kibum afterwards. X’D Ahhh, poor Kibum. ;v;
5. Kibum complaining about not getting enough kisses, and Jinki’s promise to give him some later. [wiggle brows] Okay, I’m sorry, I’ll stop-
6. Jinki comforting Kibum after what happened between Jonghyun and Comme Des. (QAQ) Aww, it’s okay, Kibum. With time, I’m sure Jonghyun would also feel safe around you. <3
7. The kisses that Jinki promised Kibum. X’D Period.

Seriously, this family (can we call it one yet?) of three is just adorable, I dare anyone to say otherwise! (O^O)
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: I was squealing over Jonghyun at first. He’s so adorable! It’s so cute to see how Jinki is so soft towards Jonghyun and how he can’t deny Jonghyun anything. Aha, he could be a great father if he wasn’t giving his son ice cream to eat. (^^”) Still, an awesome father with an adorable kid and the interaction is just so heart fluttering! <3

And then, Kibum came into the picture, and I may or may not have fainted. I mean, I can’t don’t, okay? I really like how Kibum is fond of Jonghyun and how honest he is about wanting to date Jinki. X’D His reactions are just golden and I love every bit of the OnKey moment.

Ahhh, I’m already loving this! CX
taempteng
#5
Hey yooo it’s me again! X’D Back again for some more of your OnKey fics bc honestly they’re the best romance fics I’ve ever seen in my life. (QuQ)b So, yeyyyy, I’m excited to know what goes down in here! CX
Janu666
#6
I just can't believe that it took me this long to find this. Maybe because I don't read chaptered ones so oftenly. But I'm more than glad I started reading this one. It's just so cute!!! TT TT And yes, I read all the chapters. When I finished reading the last one (Q/A) I didn't realize it was the last so I was looking for the 'Next' option and there was no such a thing and I felt like crying for real TT TT This is just so beautiful. I love it so so soooo much!! I can't describe in words how much I love your story. Seriously, this is the most beautiful story I've ever read. You made me really really happy with this. I love you!!! And you're not going to end it, right? It's not completed yet, right? Hope you'll update soon. You did a really great job authornim. Clap clap clap!! Hehe...
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 67: OMG Minji this is so cute !
Grandparents!onkey taking care of their granddaughter ♥
And uncle Taemin taking care of his niece ♥ that's just so cute !
Poor onkey are getting old... but they still take care of and love their family with all their hearts ♥
I will never get over how realistic fic seems (;-;) I love it ♥
rddenthusiast #8
I love this so much, it's such a great concept!
SHIN33ee
#9
Chapter 22: omg- the train ride. Too real XD
Cereal_Shipper #10
Chapter 22: Aaawww this is so cute *w*
I feel so tired for them lmao, especially onkey ! How do they even manage to handle those kids... Having kids is tiring (>.<)
Toddler Taemin walking up and down the aisle with his dads (;-;) my weak heart... That's so adorable ♥
For a moment I expected Jinki and Minho to race for real... Guess we'll never know who'd win (Minho would, wouldn't he)
SHINee sleeping on each other's shoulders is one of my favorite concepts ♥
Yaaah ! Why do kids never listen when you tell them something ? Tsk...
I agree with them, they shouldn't take the train again... It's too burdensome with the kids
Thank you for the update, Minji ! :D It was cute ♥ I liked it !