Day 16

A Cliché Family
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A Cliché Family sixteen   “I want a baby brother.” Jinki almost chokes on his coffee, Kibum gapes and Jonghyun rolls his eyes.

“You … What?” Kibum asks and Minho nods once to confirm his words. He's very sure of this.

“I want a baby brother. I don't want to be the youngest of us anymore.” He says and exchanges a glance with Jonghyun neither of the two adults can decipher.

“Minho, you can't just get a brother.” Jinki tries but Minho is sure of this.

“Why not? Jonghyun got a brother when he was three. I'm 7 now, don't you think it's on time?” Kibum regrets a little that the boy is so smart. How did he even become that good at math at the age of 7? It's definitely not his influence, it must be Jinki. Jinki still looks a little dumbstruck.

“I … We… Minho, it's not that easy.” The boy snorts but leaves the kitchen table without having finished his piece of cake. Jonghyun just shrugs and eats another piece.

That night when they go to bed Kibum opens the topic again.

“Do you think we could adopt another boy?” he asks silently. Ever since Minho demanded a baby brother in the kitchen earlier in the day, the thought had stuck with Kibum. They're 33 and 35, not very old compared to other parents and maybe they could. How would their family be if they had three sons and not only two? Would it be different? Would Jonghyun and Minho watch out for a brother that much younger than them? Kibum doesn't know but he can't help the curiosity. Jinki drapes the blanket around him.

“I don't know. I don’t know if we'll be too old to raise a baby.” Kibum pushes at Jinki's hidden shoulder.

“Don't say that, we're not that old.” Jinki just shrugs below the blanket. “I sort of want to adopt a third son,” Kibum continues in mutters and Jinki sighs and turns around to meet Kibums gaze.

“Let's sleep on it, honey.” Kibum notices the unwillingness to talk about it so he crawls under the blanket as well and cuddles closer to Jinki.



Minho never forgets his request. He tells them daily. He wants a baby brother. Four weeks in and Kibum considers adopting a son just to get Minho to shut up, but he knows it's not that easy. Jinki, however, seems unfazed by his son's request.

That is until he comes home one November day. Jinki backhugs Kibum in the kitchen while Kibum cooks their dinner. It's been a while since he's gotten a backhug like this so he enjoys it. Jinki's warm lips on Kibums warm skin makes Kibum close his eyes and just lean back into the warm embrace.

“Let's adopt a third son,” Jinki murmurs into his neck and Kibum wakes from his bliss.

“What?”
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SHIN33ee
#1
Chapter 72: I still love this story so much!
_haneulee
#2
Chapter 72: I'm so inlove with this story and I really think you did a great job with this one. One of the tags mentioned of TaeKai tho... will Jongin and Taemin actually end up being together (Oh I would love that) lol. (≧∀≦) Hope that you're still gonna continue with this. Hwaiting!!!
taempteng
#3
Chapter 2: Ahhh, can I just say how much I love the father-son relationship between Jinki and Jonghyun?? Like, it’s so adorable seeing how attentative Jinki is towards Jonghyun. ;w; These two are just so cute, oorz-

Buttt, the OnKey scenes. :D I may or may not have died on multiple occasions:
1. The mere fact that Jinki just called Kibum ‘babe’ had me dying on my couch (not really, still-)
2. When Jinki asked Kibum to speak human or else Jonghyun will continue learning his ‘weird noises’. X’D Duuude, that’s so funny. :’D
3. Jinki pecking Kibum on the cheek. I can’t, okay? I know it’s small and simple, but you made me fall in love with small and simple. (QvQ)
4. Jinki laughing at Jonghyun hitting Kibum, and the pout on Kibum afterwards. X’D Ahhh, poor Kibum. ;v;
5. Kibum complaining about not getting enough kisses, and Jinki’s promise to give him some later. [wiggle brows] Okay, I’m sorry, I’ll stop-
6. Jinki comforting Kibum after what happened between Jonghyun and Comme Des. (QAQ) Aww, it’s okay, Kibum. With time, I’m sure Jonghyun would also feel safe around you. <3
7. The kisses that Jinki promised Kibum. X’D Period.

Seriously, this family (can we call it one yet?) of three is just adorable, I dare anyone to say otherwise! (O^O)
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: I was squealing over Jonghyun at first. He’s so adorable! It’s so cute to see how Jinki is so soft towards Jonghyun and how he can’t deny Jonghyun anything. Aha, he could be a great father if he wasn’t giving his son ice cream to eat. (^^”) Still, an awesome father with an adorable kid and the interaction is just so heart fluttering! <3

And then, Kibum came into the picture, and I may or may not have fainted. I mean, I can’t don’t, okay? I really like how Kibum is fond of Jonghyun and how honest he is about wanting to date Jinki. X’D His reactions are just golden and I love every bit of the OnKey moment.

Ahhh, I’m already loving this! CX
taempteng
#5
Hey yooo it’s me again! X’D Back again for some more of your OnKey fics bc honestly they’re the best romance fics I’ve ever seen in my life. (QuQ)b So, yeyyyy, I’m excited to know what goes down in here! CX
Janu666
#6
I just can't believe that it took me this long to find this. Maybe because I don't read chaptered ones so oftenly. But I'm more than glad I started reading this one. It's just so cute!!! TT TT And yes, I read all the chapters. When I finished reading the last one (Q/A) I didn't realize it was the last so I was looking for the 'Next' option and there was no such a thing and I felt like crying for real TT TT This is just so beautiful. I love it so so soooo much!! I can't describe in words how much I love your story. Seriously, this is the most beautiful story I've ever read. You made me really really happy with this. I love you!!! And you're not going to end it, right? It's not completed yet, right? Hope you'll update soon. You did a really great job authornim. Clap clap clap!! Hehe...
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 67: OMG Minji this is so cute !
Grandparents!onkey taking care of their granddaughter ♥
And uncle Taemin taking care of his niece ♥ that's just so cute !
Poor onkey are getting old... but they still take care of and love their family with all their hearts ♥
I will never get over how realistic fic seems (;-;) I love it ♥
rddenthusiast #8
I love this so much, it's such a great concept!
SHIN33ee
#9
Chapter 22: omg- the train ride. Too real XD
Cereal_Shipper #10
Chapter 22: Aaawww this is so cute *w*
I feel so tired for them lmao, especially onkey ! How do they even manage to handle those kids... Having kids is tiring (>.<)
Toddler Taemin walking up and down the aisle with his dads (;-;) my weak heart... That's so adorable ♥
For a moment I expected Jinki and Minho to race for real... Guess we'll never know who'd win (Minho would, wouldn't he)
SHINee sleeping on each other's shoulders is one of my favorite concepts ♥
Yaaah ! Why do kids never listen when you tell them something ? Tsk...
I agree with them, they shouldn't take the train again... It's too burdensome with the kids
Thank you for the update, Minji ! :D It was cute ♥ I liked it !