Day 39

A Cliché Family
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A Cliché Family Thirtynine   Minho is playing on his laptop in the living room when Taemin finds him. The 9-year-old boy plops down on the couch beside him and drags the blanket around him. He doesn't look well and Minho automatically scoots a little away. He doesn't want to catch whatever disease it is Taemin has. He cannot afford to be ill. Not now when they have summer vacation. Minho knows he should be spending his vacation doing something productive but what is vacation if he can't relax. Jonghyun comes home just when Taemin tells Minho that he feels really really horrible. He has a headache and his neck hurts so bad. He also feels nauseous. Minho scoots further away from the boy. Jonghyun looks at them and when he sees Taemin he furrows his brows.

"Are you sick?" he asks and Taemin shrugs and drags the blanket closer around himself. He guesses he is. "Get some sleep," Jonghyun says and thinks he's helping his brother. When Taemin stands up, though, his nausea takes over and he pukes on the living room floor. Minho scrunches up his nose and mutters an 'ew'. Taemin starts crying because he feels so uncomfortable. Jonghyun places the boy on the couch again and asks Minho to call Jinki while he cleans up. Jonghyun is close to vomiting as well when he cleans it up. Jinki finally picks up on the second call.

"Hey dad," says Minho. "Taemin just vomited and Jonghyun wanted me to call you, so - huh, how do we deal with him?" They're home alone because both their fathers are working. "Uh-huh, I don't know, hang on." He turns to Taemin, who is now looking really pale. "What are your symptoms, Taem?" he asks and Taemin opens his eyes drowsily.

"My head is hurting and my neck is hurting and ..." He doesn't get to say anymore before Jonghyun places his hand on Taemin's forehead and concludes that the boy has a high fever as well. Minho relays everything to his father on the phone and the man suddenly turns serious.

Minho furrows his brows when Jinki asks him whether or not Taemin can look at his chest. He asks the boy and Taemin tries but he can't because his neck is hurting and stiff. This bit of information has Jinki asking Minho to tell Jonghyun to immediately call an ambulance. All three boys look at each other confused (Taemin not so much as the other two) when Minho says this out loud.

"Why?" Jonghyun asks, but Jinki is not going to tell them anything. Jonghyun does call an ambulance, though. Minho hangs up on Jinki. Jonghyun talks to the emergency operator and tells her Taemin's symptoms. The ambulance arrives around 10 minutes later. The two teenagers look at each other while the paramedics help Taemin on the stretcher.

"Where are your parents?" one paramedic asks and Jonghyun tells them that they're still at work.

Minho is left at home while Jonghyun is allowed to drive to the hospital with Taemin. Taemin has his eye
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SHIN33ee
#1
Chapter 72: I still love this story so much!
_haneulee
#2
Chapter 72: I'm so inlove with this story and I really think you did a great job with this one. One of the tags mentioned of TaeKai tho... will Jongin and Taemin actually end up being together (Oh I would love that) lol. (≧∀≦) Hope that you're still gonna continue with this. Hwaiting!!!
taempteng
#3
Chapter 2: Ahhh, can I just say how much I love the father-son relationship between Jinki and Jonghyun?? Like, it’s so adorable seeing how attentative Jinki is towards Jonghyun. ;w; These two are just so cute, oorz-

Buttt, the OnKey scenes. :D I may or may not have died on multiple occasions:
1. The mere fact that Jinki just called Kibum ‘babe’ had me dying on my couch (not really, still-)
2. When Jinki asked Kibum to speak human or else Jonghyun will continue learning his ‘weird noises’. X’D Duuude, that’s so funny. :’D
3. Jinki pecking Kibum on the cheek. I can’t, okay? I know it’s small and simple, but you made me fall in love with small and simple. (QvQ)
4. Jinki laughing at Jonghyun hitting Kibum, and the pout on Kibum afterwards. X’D Ahhh, poor Kibum. ;v;
5. Kibum complaining about not getting enough kisses, and Jinki’s promise to give him some later. [wiggle brows] Okay, I’m sorry, I’ll stop-
6. Jinki comforting Kibum after what happened between Jonghyun and Comme Des. (QAQ) Aww, it’s okay, Kibum. With time, I’m sure Jonghyun would also feel safe around you. <3
7. The kisses that Jinki promised Kibum. X’D Period.

Seriously, this family (can we call it one yet?) of three is just adorable, I dare anyone to say otherwise! (O^O)
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: I was squealing over Jonghyun at first. He’s so adorable! It’s so cute to see how Jinki is so soft towards Jonghyun and how he can’t deny Jonghyun anything. Aha, he could be a great father if he wasn’t giving his son ice cream to eat. (^^”) Still, an awesome father with an adorable kid and the interaction is just so heart fluttering! <3

And then, Kibum came into the picture, and I may or may not have fainted. I mean, I can’t don’t, okay? I really like how Kibum is fond of Jonghyun and how honest he is about wanting to date Jinki. X’D His reactions are just golden and I love every bit of the OnKey moment.

Ahhh, I’m already loving this! CX
taempteng
#5
Hey yooo it’s me again! X’D Back again for some more of your OnKey fics bc honestly they’re the best romance fics I’ve ever seen in my life. (QuQ)b So, yeyyyy, I’m excited to know what goes down in here! CX
Janu666
#6
I just can't believe that it took me this long to find this. Maybe because I don't read chaptered ones so oftenly. But I'm more than glad I started reading this one. It's just so cute!!! TT TT And yes, I read all the chapters. When I finished reading the last one (Q/A) I didn't realize it was the last so I was looking for the 'Next' option and there was no such a thing and I felt like crying for real TT TT This is just so beautiful. I love it so so soooo much!! I can't describe in words how much I love your story. Seriously, this is the most beautiful story I've ever read. You made me really really happy with this. I love you!!! And you're not going to end it, right? It's not completed yet, right? Hope you'll update soon. You did a really great job authornim. Clap clap clap!! Hehe...
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 67: OMG Minji this is so cute !
Grandparents!onkey taking care of their granddaughter ♥
And uncle Taemin taking care of his niece ♥ that's just so cute !
Poor onkey are getting old... but they still take care of and love their family with all their hearts ♥
I will never get over how realistic fic seems (;-;) I love it ♥
rddenthusiast #8
I love this so much, it's such a great concept!
SHIN33ee
#9
Chapter 22: omg- the train ride. Too real XD
Cereal_Shipper #10
Chapter 22: Aaawww this is so cute *w*
I feel so tired for them lmao, especially onkey ! How do they even manage to handle those kids... Having kids is tiring (>.<)
Toddler Taemin walking up and down the aisle with his dads (;-;) my weak heart... That's so adorable ♥
For a moment I expected Jinki and Minho to race for real... Guess we'll never know who'd win (Minho would, wouldn't he)
SHINee sleeping on each other's shoulders is one of my favorite concepts ♥
Yaaah ! Why do kids never listen when you tell them something ? Tsk...
I agree with them, they shouldn't take the train again... It's too burdensome with the kids
Thank you for the update, Minji ! :D It was cute ♥ I liked it !