Day 56

A Cliché Family
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A Cliché Family Fiftysix "Push!" someone says beside her and places a hand on her shoulder. "Just a little more, I can see the head. Come on. Push again when I say it ... Now, push!" Gwiboon wants to cry and at the same time smash Jonghyun's head into the table beside her for bringing her so much pain.

There's a little monster that's trying to crawl out of her and she is not liking this one bit. Not at all. Jonghyun isn't in the room, the doctor told him not to be. Another 'push' reaches her and she pushes the best she can to get the baby out of her. She's certain that she's going to love the child the minute it's out of her but right now she swears she is never-ever getting pregnant again. Never.

The pain lessens a little and then she hears the doctor and a heartbreaking scream fills the room. Except instead of breaking Gwiboon's heart it fills her with love and affection. See, she knew it. The nurse wiggles a blanket around the baby before she gets beside Gwiboon and lets the child rest against Gwiboon's chest.

"It's a girl," she says and smiles. "Do you want me to get your husband?" Gwiboon looks at the nurse a little confused before she remembers that the hospital doesn't know she and Jonghyun aren't married yet.

"Oh yeah, please do." She's distracted by the small baby with her closed eyes and small hands and the way her black hair is wet is a little unsettling. But she's beautiful, she's so beautiful and Gwiboon almost wants to cry again for the second time. When Jonghyun enters all she hears are his sobs. She lifts her head to look at her boyfriend. "Crybaby," she says but Jonghyun ignores her and the little girl on her head.

"You're so beautiful, my little princess." He kisses the baby's forehead and returns his attention to his girlfriend before he pecks her lips. "She's beautiful." And then he cries some more.



Kibum is awakened at 4 am when his phone rings. He reaches out groggily and takes it. The first thing that meets him is a 'It's a girl' and it takes him 30 seconds before he realizes that it's Jonghyun and he's talking about his grandchild. When it finally sinks in, he smiles.

The conversation is short but there's not a lot to say. Kibum also ushers Jonghyun back in to Gwiboon and his daughter instead of talking to him. They can talk another time. Before they hang up Jonghyun agrees that they can come visit and see the baby when they get back home to their own apartment. When Kibum puts his phone back on the table he feels a hand wrap around his waist and pulls him closer.

"Who was it?" Jinki murmurs into the warm skin of his neck and Kibum chuckles and turns around in the others hold.
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SHIN33ee
#1
Chapter 72: I still love this story so much!
_haneulee
#2
Chapter 72: I'm so inlove with this story and I really think you did a great job with this one. One of the tags mentioned of TaeKai tho... will Jongin and Taemin actually end up being together (Oh I would love that) lol. (≧∀≦) Hope that you're still gonna continue with this. Hwaiting!!!
taempteng
#3
Chapter 2: Ahhh, can I just say how much I love the father-son relationship between Jinki and Jonghyun?? Like, it’s so adorable seeing how attentative Jinki is towards Jonghyun. ;w; These two are just so cute, oorz-

Buttt, the OnKey scenes. :D I may or may not have died on multiple occasions:
1. The mere fact that Jinki just called Kibum ‘babe’ had me dying on my couch (not really, still-)
2. When Jinki asked Kibum to speak human or else Jonghyun will continue learning his ‘weird noises’. X’D Duuude, that’s so funny. :’D
3. Jinki pecking Kibum on the cheek. I can’t, okay? I know it’s small and simple, but you made me fall in love with small and simple. (QvQ)
4. Jinki laughing at Jonghyun hitting Kibum, and the pout on Kibum afterwards. X’D Ahhh, poor Kibum. ;v;
5. Kibum complaining about not getting enough kisses, and Jinki’s promise to give him some later. [wiggle brows] Okay, I’m sorry, I’ll stop-
6. Jinki comforting Kibum after what happened between Jonghyun and Comme Des. (QAQ) Aww, it’s okay, Kibum. With time, I’m sure Jonghyun would also feel safe around you. <3
7. The kisses that Jinki promised Kibum. X’D Period.

Seriously, this family (can we call it one yet?) of three is just adorable, I dare anyone to say otherwise! (O^O)
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: I was squealing over Jonghyun at first. He’s so adorable! It’s so cute to see how Jinki is so soft towards Jonghyun and how he can’t deny Jonghyun anything. Aha, he could be a great father if he wasn’t giving his son ice cream to eat. (^^”) Still, an awesome father with an adorable kid and the interaction is just so heart fluttering! <3

And then, Kibum came into the picture, and I may or may not have fainted. I mean, I can’t don’t, okay? I really like how Kibum is fond of Jonghyun and how honest he is about wanting to date Jinki. X’D His reactions are just golden and I love every bit of the OnKey moment.

Ahhh, I’m already loving this! CX
taempteng
#5
Hey yooo it’s me again! X’D Back again for some more of your OnKey fics bc honestly they’re the best romance fics I’ve ever seen in my life. (QuQ)b So, yeyyyy, I’m excited to know what goes down in here! CX
Janu666
#6
I just can't believe that it took me this long to find this. Maybe because I don't read chaptered ones so oftenly. But I'm more than glad I started reading this one. It's just so cute!!! TT TT And yes, I read all the chapters. When I finished reading the last one (Q/A) I didn't realize it was the last so I was looking for the 'Next' option and there was no such a thing and I felt like crying for real TT TT This is just so beautiful. I love it so so soooo much!! I can't describe in words how much I love your story. Seriously, this is the most beautiful story I've ever read. You made me really really happy with this. I love you!!! And you're not going to end it, right? It's not completed yet, right? Hope you'll update soon. You did a really great job authornim. Clap clap clap!! Hehe...
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 67: OMG Minji this is so cute !
Grandparents!onkey taking care of their granddaughter ♥
And uncle Taemin taking care of his niece ♥ that's just so cute !
Poor onkey are getting old... but they still take care of and love their family with all their hearts ♥
I will never get over how realistic fic seems (;-;) I love it ♥
rddenthusiast #8
I love this so much, it's such a great concept!
SHIN33ee
#9
Chapter 22: omg- the train ride. Too real XD
Cereal_Shipper #10
Chapter 22: Aaawww this is so cute *w*
I feel so tired for them lmao, especially onkey ! How do they even manage to handle those kids... Having kids is tiring (>.<)
Toddler Taemin walking up and down the aisle with his dads (;-;) my weak heart... That's so adorable ♥
For a moment I expected Jinki and Minho to race for real... Guess we'll never know who'd win (Minho would, wouldn't he)
SHINee sleeping on each other's shoulders is one of my favorite concepts ♥
Yaaah ! Why do kids never listen when you tell them something ? Tsk...
I agree with them, they shouldn't take the train again... It's too burdensome with the kids
Thank you for the update, Minji ! :D It was cute ♥ I liked it !