Day 17

A Cliché Family
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A Cliché Family seventeen   Jonghyun is standing in the hall. He is dressed in a woolen sweater and a pair of jeans with a scarf completing his outfit. He's waiting for Kibum and Minho but Minho is so slow. Kibum has his troubles getting the 8-year-old dressed. Jinki comes into the hallway with Taemin on his arms.

“Don't you think it's too cold Jonghyun? It's January…” he says and Jonghyun shrugs.

“Dad says it's okay.”

Jinki doubts Kibum has allowed the boy to wear so little clothes but he says nothing. The soon-to-be-11 year old boy is not one Jinki wants to debate with. Definitely not when it comes to his clothes. That's Kibum's task. He just smiles instead and nods a little.

“Enjoy your shopping trip then.”

Jonghyun nods as an answer when Kibum finally drags a dressed Minho into the hallway. Kibum kisses Jinki and Taemin before he turns around and frowns, looking at Jonghyun's outfit.

“You need a jacket, Jonghyun,” Kibum says flatly and the boy shakes his head.

“It's not cold,” he argues back and Jinki can't help the chuckle that escapes him. Jonghyun hasn't been looking at the weather report so he has no chance of knowing whether or not it's cold. But Jinki says nothing and Kibum gives up and just dresses Minho in his warm jacket.

“I'll see you boys later,” Jinki says and he waves. Taemin just bites on the collar of Jinki's shirt. He's teething and he's dealing with it the exact same way Jonghyun was – on Jinki's clothes.



It is cold outside and Jonghyun starts shivering 10 minutes after they step out of the car. Minho snickers when Jonghyun says he's cold and Jonghyun shoves at Minho in revenge. Kibum heaves a sigh. He likes shopping with Jonghyun because Jonghyun seems to appreciate his fashion sense. The 8-year-old, on the other hand, is more of a nuisance but he needs new clothes so Kibum can't leave him alone. It would be easier if he could wear the clothes Jonghyun was wearing but his limbs are already longer than Jonghyun's so Kibum has to buy clothes for the both of them.

He's decided to buy clothes to Taemin as well now that they're shopping anyway. Their youngest is left at home with Jinki because he's a little ill. Plus he's teething. And okay, Kibum still doesn't think he's quite healthy. Jinki had him examined monthly by a trusted colleague and although he's been gaining weight he's still a little underweight. Jinki has tried to assure Kibum that he doesn't have to worry any more but Kibum feels weirdly worried about the youngest of their boys. It's not that he isn't worried about Jonghyun and Minh
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SHIN33ee
#1
Chapter 72: I still love this story so much!
_haneulee
#2
Chapter 72: I'm so inlove with this story and I really think you did a great job with this one. One of the tags mentioned of TaeKai tho... will Jongin and Taemin actually end up being together (Oh I would love that) lol. (≧∀≦) Hope that you're still gonna continue with this. Hwaiting!!!
taempteng
#3
Chapter 2: Ahhh, can I just say how much I love the father-son relationship between Jinki and Jonghyun?? Like, it’s so adorable seeing how attentative Jinki is towards Jonghyun. ;w; These two are just so cute, oorz-

Buttt, the OnKey scenes. :D I may or may not have died on multiple occasions:
1. The mere fact that Jinki just called Kibum ‘babe’ had me dying on my couch (not really, still-)
2. When Jinki asked Kibum to speak human or else Jonghyun will continue learning his ‘weird noises’. X’D Duuude, that’s so funny. :’D
3. Jinki pecking Kibum on the cheek. I can’t, okay? I know it’s small and simple, but you made me fall in love with small and simple. (QvQ)
4. Jinki laughing at Jonghyun hitting Kibum, and the pout on Kibum afterwards. X’D Ahhh, poor Kibum. ;v;
5. Kibum complaining about not getting enough kisses, and Jinki’s promise to give him some later. [wiggle brows] Okay, I’m sorry, I’ll stop-
6. Jinki comforting Kibum after what happened between Jonghyun and Comme Des. (QAQ) Aww, it’s okay, Kibum. With time, I’m sure Jonghyun would also feel safe around you. <3
7. The kisses that Jinki promised Kibum. X’D Period.

Seriously, this family (can we call it one yet?) of three is just adorable, I dare anyone to say otherwise! (O^O)
taempteng
#4
Chapter 1: I was squealing over Jonghyun at first. He’s so adorable! It’s so cute to see how Jinki is so soft towards Jonghyun and how he can’t deny Jonghyun anything. Aha, he could be a great father if he wasn’t giving his son ice cream to eat. (^^”) Still, an awesome father with an adorable kid and the interaction is just so heart fluttering! <3

And then, Kibum came into the picture, and I may or may not have fainted. I mean, I can’t don’t, okay? I really like how Kibum is fond of Jonghyun and how honest he is about wanting to date Jinki. X’D His reactions are just golden and I love every bit of the OnKey moment.

Ahhh, I’m already loving this! CX
taempteng
#5
Hey yooo it’s me again! X’D Back again for some more of your OnKey fics bc honestly they’re the best romance fics I’ve ever seen in my life. (QuQ)b So, yeyyyy, I’m excited to know what goes down in here! CX
Janu666
#6
I just can't believe that it took me this long to find this. Maybe because I don't read chaptered ones so oftenly. But I'm more than glad I started reading this one. It's just so cute!!! TT TT And yes, I read all the chapters. When I finished reading the last one (Q/A) I didn't realize it was the last so I was looking for the 'Next' option and there was no such a thing and I felt like crying for real TT TT This is just so beautiful. I love it so so soooo much!! I can't describe in words how much I love your story. Seriously, this is the most beautiful story I've ever read. You made me really really happy with this. I love you!!! And you're not going to end it, right? It's not completed yet, right? Hope you'll update soon. You did a really great job authornim. Clap clap clap!! Hehe...
Cereal_Shipper #7
Chapter 67: OMG Minji this is so cute !
Grandparents!onkey taking care of their granddaughter ♥
And uncle Taemin taking care of his niece ♥ that's just so cute !
Poor onkey are getting old... but they still take care of and love their family with all their hearts ♥
I will never get over how realistic fic seems (;-;) I love it ♥
rddenthusiast #8
I love this so much, it's such a great concept!
SHIN33ee
#9
Chapter 22: omg- the train ride. Too real XD
Cereal_Shipper #10
Chapter 22: Aaawww this is so cute *w*
I feel so tired for them lmao, especially onkey ! How do they even manage to handle those kids... Having kids is tiring (>.<)
Toddler Taemin walking up and down the aisle with his dads (;-;) my weak heart... That's so adorable ♥
For a moment I expected Jinki and Minho to race for real... Guess we'll never know who'd win (Minho would, wouldn't he)
SHINee sleeping on each other's shoulders is one of my favorite concepts ♥
Yaaah ! Why do kids never listen when you tell them something ? Tsk...
I agree with them, they shouldn't take the train again... It's too burdensome with the kids
Thank you for the update, Minji ! :D It was cute ♥ I liked it !