calling threecheers
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Story: The Thing About Twists in Life
Author: threecheers
Genre: Romance
Reviewer: baekyeols
Story Title {4/5}:
The title of the story didn't leave a deep impression in me at first and it seems a bit long. But later on I started to really like it. The title didn't connect to the story much though
Appearance {8/10}:
The poster is really nice, the colors are beautiful, but I suggest to take out or resize all the quotes so it doesn't look messy. Posters can add a large amount of first impression points, and first impressions decide whether the readers wants to read your story or not.
I loved the way you bolded the first letter of each section, it gave the story an unique touch
Description/Foreword {8/10}:
The glimpse was a bit confusing for me since I didn't get the repetitive ‘yes he knows’. It also seems as if you threw a few parts of the story together and some parts just don't transition to the next smoothly. But it does make me curious and want to click the next button.
I would suggest to organize the description and foreword a bit differently.
So here’s the typical Do Kyungsoo: cold, big eyed, white-s
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