Competition?

I Was Completely Okay... Until I Met the Choi Brothers

Siwon's POV

"So, we're doing No Other on Saturday, right?" I asked the guys as we sat down in my living room. Even thought there was a spot next to Kyuhyun on the couch, I chose the floor. I was still irritated he said he was taking Emma on Saturday. Why couldn't be have helped me out and said I would take her?

As far as I knew, Minho was in his room, and Seunghyun was out at YG, so neither of them would bother us.

Donghae nodded. "I think we should. The topic is love, anyway. What costumes?"

"I think our more western ones, with the jeans and boots." I suggested.

Sungmin looked at me. "Wait a minute, we're about to sing to Emma, aren't we?"

Well it didn't take him long to catch on. "Is it that obvious?" I winced.

"Not really," Shindong shook his head. "You just have PATHETIC written on your forehead."

"Why don't you just ask her out already?!" Kyuhyun exclaimed.

"Because... I think she may like Seunghyun."

"So? Who gives a ." Eunhyuk shrugged. "He snoozed, he lost. If you don't act soon, he or someone else will."

"But I think she likes Seunghyun, too."

"So?! You are Choi Siwon! Captain of every freaking athletic you are in, and class president! You are better than Seunghyun. Taller, better looking, better body. Why wouldn't she go out with you?"

I shrugged. "I really don't know. I just think she thinks I'm... Rude."

"Because of that day we ragged on Big Bang? That wasn't even that bad! And you didn't even say anything." Ryeowook pointed out.

Donghae groaned. "Okay, if you don't ask her out to the dance at least, you know what? I will."

We all looked at Donghae. What?!

"Since when do you want to date her?!" I exclaimed.

"Since I saw her with Seungri her first day. She's hot, and I think I could get her if I wanted."

"What gives you the right to go after her? Maybe I wanted a shot." Shindong nudged Donghae. "Maybe she likes a guy with a little more meat on his bones."

"Or maybe she wants a college student. I've met her once and hey, I'd do her." Yesung shrugged.

"No one is doing anything to Emma, okay?" I finally exclaimed. I couldn't take it. She didn't deserve to be talked about in that manner.

"What I want to know, is why do you see Seunghyun as such a threat but not Minho? Keep in mind Minho wanted to take her to the idol-off too." Sungmin pointed out.

I scoffed. "I love him and he's my little brother, but I mean, come on! Minho is a sophomore! Emma is a junior. Would she rather date an underclassmen, or an upper classmen? And, I kissed her on the cheek. Minho is too timid to even touch her."

"Good point." Donghae nodded. "I still think she'd go for me, though. My flower trick really worked its magic."

"Really , Hae? You think she remembers that? It was three, four weeks ago." I sighed.

Donghae smirked. "Hey, anyone remembers when Donghae looks at them a second time."

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CrayOnVIP #1
Chapter 62: Aww, the epiloge is so sweet.
TypicalAuthornim
#2
Chapter 34: Im not talking about this chappie but till this extent..... from reading this story, id really like your method of writing. Maybe if I could co author your tories. But I dont know anything about YG groups and most of all.. I only know SHINee and SNSD aka Girls generation... so if you are writing stories with them as main charecters ill be glad to co author those!!!
qiqisone #3
Chapter 62: Omg! I actually cried... yes im an emotional reader but hey i like it though :)
taeyangsfuturewife #4
this was such a good read :)
ajzelda17
#5
Chapter 62: Whelp. I haven't been on Asianfanfics for so long, but now I finish up what is actually one of my favorite fics on this site. Thank you. Great way of ending it. Keep writing okay? -A fan
sayurimei
#6
Chapter 62: so you manage to caught me with this story coz i read it in one go... and i love it, 1st u manage to.put ALL my bias as a love interest (except se7en but lol)... my friends tease me calling me Ms Choi for them being my bias... but u ended up pairing with my number one, my ultimate and i love u.for.that author-nim
Ok leaving the fangirl on the side, i trully liked how you kept giving turns on the story, it didnt felt rushed and the pace was perfect. You describe the scenes and the characters emotions so well that you could truly feel it, im happy you decide.to share this story, keep it up :D
EXOTICELFVIP_ #7
I love it. it's great.
sinaelee99 #8
Chapter 62: I can die happily now. <3