First of all, congratulations on your first fanfic!!! I really love this story and I like how you portrayed the characters and their developments throughout the story. Jessica was really innocent in this story. She was straightforward and wasn’t thinking about what she’s saying sometimes. But as the time went by, I realized that she was just being honest. It was also nice to see that she became cheerful when she met Yoona.

She’s so kindhearted to think about being the brightest star to light up the people in the dark despite knowing that it would be faster. And I really admire her feelings towards Yoona. But I wished that she should’ve told Yoona about her condition earlier so she won’t be hurt too much. I also like her character development because she was once selfish because she was too focused on her studies but I’m glad that she gave time for herself to fall in love.

I understand her frustrations and jealousy before because she’s really clueless with everything. And I also admired her bravery on facing Jessica’s family and loved ones. Her decision on not forcing Jessica to remember her as her lover is really a big sacrifice for her. But it still them in the end <3  I really like how Donghae protects Jessica in any way possible. I also became really sad when he sacrificed his love for Irene just to protect Jessica.

He was a bit harsh on Yoona before but I understand that he was just doing what he thought was right. Irene is really kind and strong just like how I see her in real life. She’s a sweet dongsaeng to her unnie. I actually think that she was acting more mature than Yoona lol. I really didn’t expect that role of Taeyeon. I just really thought that was just observant. And I’m more shocked that she liked Jessica romantically.

But anyway, I like how she knocks some senses on Yoona. She’s actually the one who changes Yoona’s decisions. That’s all fo