Weird morning huh?

Is this fate or a dream ?

 

I woke up, finding myself on the bed, alone. 
"... Oh you're awake" Donghae said as he walked in I turned and saw a half Donghae whose hair and body was wet and looked so y! (a/n sorry fangirling moment)
 "Mhmm" I said shyly . 
"Hey in front of my mom and all the guys call me oppa" Donghae bluntly stated 
"Wae?" I asked. *Why does he want me to call him oppa? I didn't call anyone oppa, not even my ex.*  
"Because that's what girlfriends and boyfriends do.." Donghae said. 
*Oh..... Well that's a bit awkward, since I'm not used to it. *  
"oh... Okay Dongh... Op...opp...oppa" I could feel my cheeks burning. My heart was beating so fast, I thought it was about to run away. 
"o..oppa can... You" I turned around and pointed in his direction 
"put some clothes on?" He looked down, and ran to the bathroom, saying sorry.
 Donghae's POV "Umma!" I yelled from the bathroom
* ahit i just embarresed my self infront of her* 
" I'm making breakfast, ask Haemi.  I think she's up" she yelled back 
"H-Haemiii!" I yelled. 
"Nae?" she came to the bathroom. 
"I-I need clothes." I said, peeking from the bathroom. 
"Which ones?" she asked, looking around.  
"The red checked shirt and my jeans" I said 
"Okay... are they in your bag?" she asked 
"no I took them out earlier but I forgot them,"  I said 
"Alright." ...... 
"Here" she said, while a hand popped out through the small space between the door and wall.  
"Thanks" I said 
"No problem." 
...... Breakfast..... Haemi's POV
 I went downstairs and to the dining room, and was shocked at the amount of food on the table. 
"Good morning" Donghae's mom said cheerfully.  
"Good morning" we said in unison 
"I made this all for you guys, so don't hold back" 
"Nae!" we said in unison again.  
"Omo, you guys are such a perfect couple!" his mom said 
We both remained silent, 
*How do I respond to that..* 
"Thanks mom" Donghae finally said We sat down and started to eat. 
"How's the food?" his mom asked 
"It's great"donghae said 
"not you, Haemi" 
"Umma" 
"Wae~ you always say that, I wanna know my daughter-in-law's opinion" she whined.  
"It's delicious" I said, truthfully. 
"Really?" she asked 
"Yep" I nodded We cleaned up and we sat in the living room 
"Donghae, Haemi" 
"Nae?" we both said 
"since you to are already this far in your relationship, I hope you've thought about marriage." his mom said 
"We told you that yesterday" Donghae said 
"I wasn't in a serious mood yesterday" she said and then paused "Anyways, think about it and tell me okay" she said 
"Umma we already decided, we want to get married" Donghae said.  
"Are you sure?" she asked 
"Of course" we said 
"what about divorce ? Donghae, Haemi, aren't you guys afraid of divorce?" she asked. 
"We'll stick together like glue," I quickly said 
She made a face then sighed, and then said,  "I believe you, and please take care of each other." 
"Nae" we both said in unison 
"then shall we pick a date for th..." she was about to finish but was cut off 
"Wait what about the public ?" Donghae asked impatiently
"Oh yea.." I said 
"I know we could announce that you've been engaged for a while but let's say that  Haemi didn't want to burden you so you didn't tell anyone" his mom said 
"... I hope that's enough to trick the E.L.F.s " he said 
"I hope so too, those girls are scary" she said 
"... Not always" he replied, defending his fans.  
"nooo we had this talk last time, Donghae please don't go on and on about how great fans they are and how loyal they are and everything I've heard it from you like 8749 times " said whinied 
*Oh crap morning sickness is kicking in, I need to find the bathroom ASAP* (for those who don't know - it means as soon as possible) 
I ran upstairs and found the bathroom and started throwing up. During that time I felt someones hand rubbing my back, it was Donghae's mom. 
"Here" she said as she handed me a towel to clean my mouth. 
"Sorry, its morning sickness" 
"I've been through it three times. I understand" she said, I nodded and cleaned up the bathroom when she left. I rubbed my stomach 
"Well thanks to you I got to meet some good people, maybe I even met my soulmate but who knows" 
"Kwenchana?" Donghae said as I walked out of the bathroom 
"... I'm.. kind of... used to it" I replied 
"..." 
"I'll ask you som thing on our way back to Seoul" I said 
".... Okay" 
"DONGHAE WE STILL NEED TO FINISH TALKING ABOUT YOUR MARRIAGE WITH HAEMI!" his mom yelled from the kitchen  
"Nae" he said 
~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~_~~_~ On  our way to Seoul ~_~_~~_~_~_~_ 
"So what did you want to say?"  he asked I thought for a minute....and then it came to me 
"Oh yea, what I wanted to ask was, what's this whole marriage thing? As far as I remember, I'm pretty sure that we didn't talk about getting married"
 ".... I planned on telling you but I forgot because of the busy schedule and all." he replied 
"Oh" oh was all I could say 
"Yea, thanks for going along with it in front of my mom” he said with a big smile on his face 
“You're welcome” I said as I blushed 
*He looks cute when he smiles (///O\\\)* 
“Oh yea, what was the end result of the talk about our marriage?” 
“Okay, so in public we'll say that we are engaged and getting married in 3 weeks” 
“3? Just three weeks? Is that enough time?” 
“This is my first time getting married so I just went along with what my mom said.” 
“Oh, okay” 
“Yea” 
“Well I'm only going to do whats best for my baby” he smiled as he looked straight at the road. 
Donghae's POV 
*Okay... I need to think for a while. 
Good, she's asleep (why do I sound like a kidnapper?) 
Anyways, as I was thinking, is getting married what's best for us? Is it really, I mean,  I don't even know her, what if I hurt her and my baby? what if E.L.F.'s hate me? what if I cant sing anymore? 
Appa? Is marriage really the best option for me?* 
'Oh my god!' my heart beat accelerated and my face felt hot as I looked at Haemi. 'How can anyone be this cute when they are sleeping ?????' 
'wait, Donghae get a hold of yourself' 
'The world's ending... Whats happening? Am I gonna die? this never happened to me before. Should I go to a doctor?
' hae mi turned and opened her eyes “Aish, so noisy”she muttered but I heard her but she closed her eyes again and made a very pissed off face. 
“Are we in Seoul?” 
“Yea” 
“.... Good” … Whats up with her? I got out of the car and got our things out. I went back to the front of the car 
"Ha..." I silently took out my phone and started taking a couple of pictures of her sleeping face. Haha, I can use this against her and a huge smirk appeared on my face.  
"personal space" she said with her eyes closed I backed out and said sorry 
"I know you did something, just what did you do?" 
"What do you mean?"
 "Did you..... By any chance.. Take pictures of me while I was sleeping?" 
"..... No of course not" 
"Can I see your phone" 
"Sure" I have a passcode on so I'm all good. Plus she doesn't even know me that well she'll never guess. 
"Hmm passcode huh?" 
"Don't worry my daddy thought me some things, he was once a hacker" 
"...." 
* I'm screwed* 
"Let me guess... Your birthday?" 
"..." Again? How did she know ??? "I know it's coming up pretty soon. I'll just search it up online" 'Lee donghae' She typed into her iPhone4S. 
"Ah so it's 1015 ?" 
*She got it... This is awkward* 
"You lied!!! You said you didn't take any pictures of me sleeping!" she pouted. I smirked and stuck my tongue out at her , haha  
*Her pouting face looks so cute >.<* 
"I'm deleting this" 
"Andwae!" I took my phone out of her hand 
"Waee!! It's my picture" 
"It's my phone" i said and she pouted cutely. 
Haemi's POV 
 I tried to open my eyes but I didn't have energy to completely open them, they were like 2/3 closed and 1/3 open. 
*Omfg what the hell? Why is his face so close to mine?* 
......
Now, my eyes were wide open. (A/N: the whole convo above happens) 
*I know I'll use aegyo, hope It works on him* 
"Oppa,  please" I said as I pouted, I knew I was blushing but my heart was pounding super fast is really weird since it's usually silent. 
*I'm afraid he can hear my abnormally fast heart beat.*  
"......." He turned around 
*Was I that bad ? I knew I could never do aegyo, but seriously was it that bad?* 
 "D...donghae?" I said weakly 
"are you okay ?"
"... Yea?" I got out of the car and went closer to Donghae. 
*Is he laughing? Why is his face so red?* 
"Let's go back" 
"Ne" I just followed. 
*Why is he acting so weird?*
Donghae and I got out of the elevator, and he unlocked the house 
"We're home" he said with a smile. A bunch of familiar faces turned to look at us. 
"East sea, What did umma say?" 
"I'll tell you In a few minutes" We went inside and we all sat in like a circle and we were about to tell them what happened and what our final decision was. That is, before I fainted.
 
 
 A/N Hey guys thanks for subscribing but I wouldn't mind If you commented too. Anyway sorry I haven't been able to update because I've been given an overwhelming amount of homework this week and was super busy last weekend. Well enough with my excuses, I just wanted to address that the more people that comment and actually tell me how I'm doing rather then me writing and then getting no response and not knowing how it's going. Umm I also wanted to say that I plan on doing a double update and I might be putting my other story on haitus :) :P comment and subscribe please
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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)