KEY!!!!!!!

Is this fate or a dream ?

 

we ran until we count see the fan girls anymore

Flashback no one’s POV

Hae mi was walking down the hallways when suddenly someone bumped into her and she dropped all of her stuff, the person continues running while yelling SORRY without faceing her

“What kind of person says sorry without looking at the other persons face" she said to herself

She picked up her books and her friends surrounded her in a circle

"Omg he's like the hottest guy here" ji ah said

"I know right" danbi said

"Definitely" miso said

"Isn’t it obvious?" hyomin said

"Who" haemi said, interrupting their fan girling conversation

"What do you mean who?  Were obviously Talking about Kim Kibum, the hottest guy in this school" Min ah said

"Oh....I don't know who that is" hae mi replied

"How do you not know the hottest guy here?" hyomin said

"Because I don't pay attention to guys" hae me answered

"You need to"

"I don't care about them"

"Very heartless! I want my old hae mi back!! “Danbi said as she hugged min ah

"Old hae mi? Ya There's only one hae mi in this school and that's me!" hae mi said

"You’re not hae mi! I never had a heartless uncaring friend like you" ji ah said

"........" hae mi was silent

*whispers* " yah you’re not supposed to say stuff like that, her parents dies like 2 months ago" hyomin said

", I didn't know that!! I'm so sorry" ji ah said

"You know I can hear you right?"  Hae mi said

"I'm so sorry I didn't know" ji ah said

"It’s fine, I don't mind “hae mi replied, as she fake smiled

"Oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!" A bunch of girls screamed

“what’s going on" hae mi asked danbi

"I think it's Kibum!!!!!" danbi replied

“Hae mi....." danbi said as she pointed behind hae mi

Hae mi turned around

"Omo, Aish! WHY IS THIS GUY SO CLOSE TO ME AND WHY... Does he have me math note book"

"You fell and your stuff was everywhere"

“So you stole it"

“Why would I want to steal a useless note book, plus I did this like a year ago!”

“Anyway thank you” I said looking down

He smiled

That started our friendship

A year later

“Kibum….” I said getting his attention

“Hmm?” he smiled

“I’m moving….”

“To…?”

“America…”

“Ame….. AMERICA!!!!!!!”

“Y…yea”

“Andwae you can’t leave me” he said grabbing on to my arm

“I’m leaving tomorrow”

His eyes got watery

“Why” he said in a weak voice.

“My aunt want me to start anew, she doesn’t want me to live here anymore”

“You… you can live with me”

“Not possible, she already paid for everything in America”

He hugged me and saw me at the airport the next day. Since I didn’t have a phone I gave him my address. But I moved a lot and he just couldn’t keep up.

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! END OF FLASHBACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What Should I do!?!?!?

I haven't seen this guy in Years and my feelings are coming back. I felt a rush of mixed emotions, I could feel the tears form I my eyes. The first thing that came to my mind. Hug him. My signature hug. (a/n hae mi has a signature hug and she only hugged key like that)
"key!!!!!" I hugged him

"hammy??!!!!!!" he questioned pulling me us apart

" it is you!!!!" he exclaimed as he hugged me.

"I haven’t seen you since I moved!" He said

" me neither" I said

"I missed you so much I thought you forgot about me" key said

"how could I ever forget you ? You're like my best  friend" I said

""""""""""""""""""" key POV""""""""""""""""
"key" she exclaimed!!!

I turned round and someone hugged me.

'There’s only one person I let hug me, and that's hammy, wait didn't she move to America? What I she moved back? Wait there’s only one person u know who hugs me like that, I think this really is hammy'

"hammy??!!!!!!!!!!" I asked as I pulled her away from me.

I looked closely at her face. It really was Hammy!!!! She just looks a little bit older.

"I haven’t seen you since I moved!" i said

" me neither" she said

"I missed you so much I thought you forgot about me" I said

"how could I ever forget you? You're like my best  friend" she replied

"hammy let's go to the cafe after school"

"okay"

--------- after school, still keys point of view-----------

We caught up and chatted fit about three hours until I realized I has dance practice. I already told her I'm a singer, she didn’t believe me, and now I have the choice to show it to her.

"hammy let's go to my dace practice room"

"sure but I have to leave within a few hours"

"really"

"yea"

"key can I tell you something in the car?"

"Sure"

----------in the car.... hae mi's POV -----------

"key, I need to tell you something"

"what is it? “He asked curiously

"I'm......" I looked over

"pregnant" I finished

" ha-ha that's a good one, I haven't heard that one yet."

"No I'm serious, like dead serious"

"you swear" he looked at me seriously

"Kibum, do you think I would lie to you"

"you did before, why won’t you know?" he joked

"ya!!! I’m in the middle of telling you something serious and that's what you tell me???? I'm leaving" I said in anger as I tried to open the door.

"It’s locked" he laughed

"I figured" I said as I rolled my eyes

"aigo, you’re so funny" he said.

I unlocked the door and he locked it. -___-

"stop your pissing me off"

"I'm just kidding, don't take a joke to seriously"

I hit his head

"you messed up my hair"

"drive"

"ne~~~ Agassi." he smirked

Aish this boy pisses me off

"so where were you?"

"I just wanted to tell you in pregnant."

"Wait like legit pregnant"

"yes!"

"How? I mean who? When!!!!?????" he exclaimed

"about a few weeks ago, it was an accident but I keeping the baby. And I don't know the daddy"

"WHY ARE YOU SO CAREFREE ABOUT IT!?!????"

"Cuz he's taking responsibility, he's giving me shelter, food money and clothing "

"Aish!!!!!"

"Oh and his name is lee donghae"

"what!??"

"lee donghae"

"Where is he from"

"I don’t know, he's always busy with work"

"what kind of work"

"he says he's a singer"

"lee donghae I will kill you how dare you harm hammy"

"key calm down"

"oh look where here" bipolar much?

He dragged me to the second floor and we went towards donghae.

Suddenly key became, kind of cold, his hand was freezing so was his facial expressions and speech

" can I talk to you "

"sure" donghae said not noticing me. (I was hiding behind key)

"how did this happen" key said to donghae

"what?"

"Ham... I mean hae mi!! How did you get her pregnant?"

"Oh... Wait how do you know?????"

"We are best friends! How wouldn't I know"

"can we talk somewhere else?" I said nudging keys shirt

"no, we have to talk now!!"

"Reporters" Donghae whispered in key's ear

"Aish!!! Fine but we go I my car"

We went his car and I sat in the back, and like an umma, he questioned us.

"Aish umma calm down" I joked trying to make the mood lighter.

"Umma? “Key looked at me weirdly

"key, we like each other!" donghae said

"Bwoh!!" key said

"we like each other" I held Donghae's hand

"key umma, you didn't even listen to me"

"DONT YOU DARE LIE TO YOUR UMMA!!! TELL ME THE TRUTH NOW" he glared

Donghae looked at me and I looked at donghae, we explained everything, all of it because we knew key knew that we were lying.

"... And so now she's living with me, and super junior thinks that she's my girlfriend"

".....all because you made her pregnant and you want to take responsibility?"

"Yea..."

"Don’t yea me, what if hae mi gets killed because of you?? "

"What do you mean killed?"

"Fans. Not only them but child birth could kill her..."

We sat there, the three of us, it was super quiet....

'I don't want to die!' I thought

'but I don’t want to kill someone either'

"I'll...” donghae began to say as tears began to form

', I said the word' key thought

"donghae?" I whispered

"I don’t want to kill her or the baby, what can I do?"

"Donghae its okay, we'll think of a way" I said as I grabbed his hands

"are you guys sure you’re not a couple?"

I glared at key, Aish your so stupid key!!! How could you ask us that at a time like this? I didn’t know donghae was this sensitive.

"I'm fine, and I won't let either of them get hurt" donghae said as the  tears slid down his face. 

He looked so sad, so lonely I just couldn't help but hug him, I started thinking about mom and dad and what they went through because of me and started crying.

"Pass"

donghae and I pulled away from each other and looked at key strangely.

"What do you mean?"

"I was testing you too; I can't believe it, but donghae I leave hae mi to you..... Yea right, donghae stop your act and hae mi please tell me you didn't fall for him"

I shot up with my eyes wide open

"like him???? Never"

Donghae's face made an 'o' shape and it was funny, but I didn't laugh.

"Chincha?"

"Chincha."

----------- Donghae's point of view-----------

"like him?????? Never!" she said

'never???' my mouth formed an 'O' shape, okay, calm down donghae. Its okay, not how can this be okay. I accepted the idea of a baby but I never asked her and I was planning on marring her if I liked her and she liked me. My plan was to get her to like me!!!!! Gahh I failed.... Again I can’t believe this though!!!! How can someone not like me??????' I thought

"key!!!" she pouted

She looks so cu... I mean nice.....

"Hammy If he makes you cry or feel hurt...” he looked at me, eyes me head to toe

"I'm going to kill him" key said and then mouthed you are so dead next time I see you.

"Andwae you can't kill him" she said

"then keep him far away from my sight"

She hugged him...

Aish, I looked away. I think I have heart burn, my chest feels tight.

"Bye, see you later" she said as she grabbed my hand and we went out the door. I think my heart stopped, I think I should go see a doctor. We went home after my dance practice and she started cooking.

I stared at her, how can a person look so pretty while they're cooking? My heart was beating abnormally

She tried to reach something high but couldn't get it.

"Want help?" I said

"thanks"

"no problem"

She turned around and I reached over her and got the thing she needed. I felt a pair of eyes on us. We both looked to our sides and saw......

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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)