The birth of two angels

Is this fate or a dream ?

Ch 38 of FOD 

It’s my last month of pregnancy a couple more days/ hours ‘till I finally get to see my babies 

The other day we went shopping, and even though Uki had left for Cambridge a while ago, she said she would come back before the babies are born 

We bought a lot of things, such as bribes, blankets, clothes, shoes, toys, books, dressers and just about everything that makes a baby room a baby room 

They even helped set it up 

I was at the mall with Donghae, both of us were just walking around talking about a bunch of random things while Minhyuk was happily sitting on Siwon’s shoulders near an ice-cream stand 

We were walking, shyly holding hands, until I felt a trickle of fluid run down my thighs 

"Donghae" I said 

"Hmm?" he said turning around 

"My water broke" I said 

We made it to the hospital in time; I was now preparing to go into labor 

"Okay I want you to held her hand and ma'am go HEE HOO HEE HOO" the nurse said 

I was tired before we even began 

"HEEHOO HEEHOO HEEHOO come on Hae mi you can do this!" Donghae said 

I squeezed his hand 

I yelled out in pain as soon as my first child came out

"One more time Hae mi" Donghae said 

I took a deep breath, knowing the pain that was coming 

I held my breath and squeezed his hand until I had given birth, finally collapsed onto the hospital bed, panting.

I lay there with Donghae on my side. He was crying 

"Ya I was the one that gave birth why are you crying?" I asked him weakly 

"Because... I’m so happy" he said 

The nurses came in with the twins, one wrapped in pink the other in blue I held the blue clothed baby in my arms while Donghae held the pink clothed baby in his 

"Donghae" 

"Hmm?" he said looking at our babies

"I'm glad I got to meet you" I said 

"Me too" He said leaving over to kiss me 

I was shocked at first but kissed back nonetheless 

"Saranghae" he said 

"Nado Saranghae" I replied 

"Let’s name her Sarang" he suggested 

"Let’s name him Jihoon" I suggested 

The members came in 

"Finally guys! It took you nine months to realize your feelings for each other" Uki said 

"When did..." I began to ask 

"I have my ways" she smiled "I'm Uki remember?" she continued 

This feels too true to be real. Is this a dream? Or was it fate?

It’s been three years since then

“Minhyuk-ah you’re going to be late if you don’t wake up” I said

“Umma can’t I not go to school? Kyuhyun samchon and I were playing games all night” he said sleepily

“No wake up now or else ill have monsters wake you up” I seriously need to tell Kyu to stop

I helped him get ready for school, and drove him to school

“Bye bye” he waved at me as he ran towards the entrance

“Bye” I said

Dear Shisus, let’s just pray that Sarang and Jihoon haven’t woken up yet

Every single morning was hectic, except the days the guys were in another country, or a holiday.

Nari moved in with us too, Shindong and her got married two years ago

I entered the house, and found it, hectic as usual

“You guys forgot your keys” I said

Leeteuk grabbed them and said ‘im driving’

Everyone in the room said “Oh hell no you’re not!”

Sungmin took the keys from Leeteuk “sorry hyung but everyone value’s their life you know”

We all nodded our heads in agreement

Before Donghae left he gave me a kiss like we usually do, along with the other couples

My life may be hectic and all but I love it the way it is 

Is this fate or is this a dream ? 


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Please also read my other stories 

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/336131/shades-of-purple-eunhyuk-kattun-romance-superjunior-you-love-kame (Shades of Purple) 

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/259807/so-what-happens-if-you-fall-in-love-with-an-idol-bigbang-heechul-jiyoung-you-romancecomedy-superjunior15 (So what happens if you fall in love with an idol?) *complete 

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/478539/meeting-this-pabo-again-heechul-romancecomedy-superjunior15 (Meeting this pabo again) *sequel to 'So what happens if you fall in love with an idol?'


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bye bye guys 

this was the end ^^ 

i really hope you enjoyed 

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i honestly feel like the next chapter is boring.... (ch 29)

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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)