Surprise

Is this fate or a dream ?

 

I quickly got out of the bed and tiptoed to the door until it flung open, making me flinch back

"Oh Hae mi you’re awake already?" Donghae asked surprised 

"Nae..." I replied, taken aback 

"Why am I..." I asked 

"First get dressed then come out" he said pointing to the bathroom and then the closet. 

He left the room after I picked out what to wear, surprisingly all of my clothes were there... Strange... Did I lose my memory or something? I don't remember ever being here.... 

I went the bathroom and took a quick warm shower then I came out dressed. 

I walked out of the room and I looked both ways and saw nothing but an endless number of rooms. 

Did we go to a hotel? Why am I here? What is this place? So fancy and Where is Donghae???!!! 

Aish this Namja always disappears when I need him -.- 

I walked to the left then I turned around and started walking again 

I got lost quickly, AISH my poor sense of direction~ 

 

DONGHAE POV 

 

I woke up with my head hurting for some odd reason, it was throbbing so much. I looked around in the unfamiliar place 

Where am I? 

I looked to my side and saw Hae mi 

What in the... 

I didn't bother waking her up, she looked so delicate sleeping like an angel, I just stared at her until I realized that I was still in an unfamiliar place. 

I regrettably got out of bed, fighting the urge to go back to sleep. I found my clothes in a closet and went to the bathroom inside the room. 

Strange... I don't remember putting them here, or ever being here...

I stepped out of the room and found myself in a familiar yet unfamiliar place. There were so many doors I lost count after the 14th one 

I walked to my left, hoping to find someo- 

'THUMP' 

I landed on the floor along with the person I bumped into. 

"Aish" Eunhyuk said as he got off of me 

"Hyukkie where are we?" I asked 

"Noe! Ya! Why are you awake?" he asked surprised 

"It’s 8:15 why wouldn't I be awake" I replied 

"... I'll explain it to you soon"

"Is everyone here?" I asked

"Hae wait until Hae mi wakes up okay? I'll be downstairs. Remember my words. DO NOT COME DOWN STAIRS UNTIL HAE MI WAKES UP unless you want ghosts to attack you and bada" 

"NO NOT BADA!" I panicked 

"Good boy then stay here and here work on this while she wakes up okay" Eunhyuk said leading me to a table in one of the rooms 

IT’S A COLORING BOOK WITH FISH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  

 

~ A few minutes later 

 

(After Haemi and I talked in the room) 

I was back in the room Hyukjae took me to

I heard faint footsteps grow louder and louder 

I opened the door slowly (in fear that there was a ghost or something) and saw a panicking Hae mi

"Hae mi waegure" I asked surprising her

She began to laugh nervously 

"Waegure?" I asked again

"Ani, I just um just got lost" she said quietly 

I walked over to her side and we walked quietly to the end of the hallway we were in. 

We stopped when we saw stairs. A lot of them. 

"Donghae. This is impossible for me, I can't do this" Hae mi whined to me for like the first time ever 

"My feet already hurt so much after walking for five minutes" she pouted 

Ah it’s the foot pain Alex was telling me about a couple of days ago

I saw a little sticky note on the side 

'There's an elevator on the left side

My left or you’re left? Which left? 

"Hae mi there's an elevator over... THAT WAY" I said as I found the elevator 

"Donghae do you know where we are?” she asked as we entered 

"Nope but this place had a familiar feel to it...” 

"... It’s so weird I’m pretty sure I went to bed in the dorm so what am I doing here" she asked herself 

"I guess we'll find out soon" I said as the elevator doors slowly opened 

Donghae POV 

Where are we? This is just so suspicious... Why were all my clothes there? Along with all of my other stuff? And why was Eunhyuk here earlier? The handwriting was familiar too.... 

The elevator door opened and I looked up

"SURPRISE" everyone said 

"Noona come over here sit down" Ryeowook said pointing to the sofa in front of us 

We all sat down, still surprised

"Remember, last time we talked about moving?" Siwon asked

"Uhuh" We replied

 "Tada!" Siwon said in a super excited voice 

"Wait this is Siwon's mansion?!?!?" 

"Yep!" 

"But..." 

"No buts" Siwon cut me off 

"Oh by the way unnie, your real room is set up downstairs, on this level because we didn't want your feet to be tired" Alex said 

"Awe Kumawo" she said Hugging Alex I wish I was Alex right now. Hae mi hug me too

"Is everything moved in here or...?"

“While you and Donghae were out, we moved 2/3 of the stuff (that we all planned to bring here) and at night Kangin and Siwon carefully carried you to the mansion" Leeteuk said 

“We set it up yesterday” Uki said pointing to Alex and Sammy

HAE MI POV 

Ohh that makes sense... 

“I’ll show you around” Kibum said

"Sure Thanks" I said 

"Me too me too" Sungmin jumped up and down waving his hand in the air like a child 

"What about me?" Donghae asked 

"Oh yea we forgot about Donghae... He gets lost so easily" Kangin said

"Hyung" Donghae whined 

So cute

"Siwon show us all around most of us don't know since this is only our second time coming here" Heechul said 

"Hyung we came here before?" Donghae asked 

"Yea it was during the summer, we came here for a one week vacation" Heechul replied 

"Ohh now I remember" Donghae said 

"Hae mi you’re not a mother of two but a mother of three" Alex said shaking her head 

"You’re having triplets?" the guys asked 

"I lied not a mother of three but a mother of 17, Aigoo these pabo’s will never grow up" 

Everyone laughed and we started the tour 

"This is the living room"

"Where were we just now?" 

"The center room" Siwon replied 

"Whoa so big so roomy" 

"Specially designed for a large family like ours" 

We moved on 

"This is the kitchen" 

"Damn this isn't a kitchen it's like one of those professional cooking areas!" Kangin said 

"Hyung!!! All my dreams are coming true!!" Ryeowook said running into the kitchen with his hands in the air 

"Eternal maknae have you found your happiness" 

"Since the minute I saw this" Ryeowook exclaimed coming back 

"Let’s move on" Siwon said taking us to another large room 

"This is the study room; it has over 20,000 books already" 

"Comics!! Are comics included?" Yesung asked 

"Nae Hyung" Siwon said 

Yesung’s eyes grew bigger 

"YES! Finally" Yesung said 

We went upstairs and went through all the rooms and chose who got which room after we went through them all, after that we went downstairs and looked at the game room, play room, dance studio, karaoke room exercise room. 

(a/n prepare to be jealous) 

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overall it was a REALLY big house


i hope u guys liked the pics 

i wont do a spam since i need to sleep (its 1 in the morning, im dying) im sorry for not updating earlier, i just didnt have time 

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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)