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Is this fate or a dream ?

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Hae-mi POV~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I woke up thanks to Eunhyuk’s loud voice. What’s going on and why is Heechul moving me? Why is Donghae giving Heechul the look? Wait what’s up with this atmosphere?

 

"Hyung we know how much you like her, let this slide" Kyuhyun said. 

 

Before that sentence sinked into Donghae, Heechul decided to tease Donghae

 

This might be fun. I'm guessing Donghae is jealous. Wait. He's jealous for me? Nah! Can't be true? Wait but if it is then does it mean that I won the bet?

 

I quickly came up with a plan 

 

PLAN A 

 

If Donghae is really jealous then he will have a bizarre reaction to what Heechul says or does to me (no not in that way

 

PLAN B

 

If nothing goes right, then I pretend to wake up.

 

So my only way to find out is if Heechul doesn't realize that I'm awake and if Donghae doesn't know that this is fake. 

 

I hugged Heechul’s arm like it was a pillow. I could hear Donghae’s breathing get louder wait why do I hear a heartbeat? 

 

Ba-dum ba-dum ba-dum 

 

Is that Heechul? 

 

. Donghae was now glaring at Heechul, with steam coming out of his nose and Heechul looked like a tomato, he was so red and his heart beat could be heard from miles away.

 

"So H-han-geng how was today?" Heechul said diverting his attention to Hangeng

 

"Fine... Why" Hangeng said looking concerned

 

"Oh no reason" Heechul denied

 

“AH- HYUNG!!!!!! Heechul HYUNG YOU STUTTERED! GUYS HE STUTTERED!!!!! THE WORLD IS GOING TO END. WHEN DOES Heechul HYUNG EVER STUTTER?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?” Kyuhyun panicked

 

“Wait what! Hyung did what? What’s ending” Sungmin panicked in confusion

 

“Guys will you shut up” Eunhyuk said in an annoyed tone

 

“Is that something you say to your hyung?” Sungmin rebuked

 

“Never mind that” Eunhyuk said

 

"Are you okay?" Hangeng asked ignoring the background noise

 

"Y-yea why?" Heechul asked

 

"You… you look constipated" Hangeng said in his broken Korean

 

"I... What??!?!" Heechul asked

 

"Ahahahahaha" the other guys started laughing. I peeked to look at Donghae who was still glaring at Heechul (through the mirror thing)  

 

"Aish Donghae you’re going to kill us all! Never letting you drive again" Eunhyuk complained 

 

"It’s not my fault Heechul hyung keeps distracting me" Donghae complained back 

 

"It’s not my fault I'm the beautiful" Heechul defended himself 

 

"Aish so loud" I finally said breaking away from Heechul, slowly opening my eyes. 

 

"Omo. Jisonghaeyo it wasn’t on purpose" I said, faking it obviously.  

 

"A-ani its okay you must’ve been tired" he said giving me a smile. As much as this guy scares me, he also gives me this charming feeling. Especially when he smiles, he looks cute. 

 

"My head was heavy right? I'll massage you" I suggested 

 

"Right now" Heechul asked

 

"Where here" Donghae said interrupting us  

 

"Maybe later" I said 

 

"Don’t forget" Heechul said

 

"I won't" I reassured him

 

Heechul and I walked out of the car still chatting. 

 

"You guys seem close" Eunhyuk said speaking Donghae’s mind. 

 

"Maybe we are" Heechul said

 

Heechul bent a little towards me and whispered "I think Donghae’s jealous" 

 

I whispered back "I know" and then we looked at each other and I could almost tell what he was thinking. Donghae looks so cute when he's jealous

 

"Oppa let's go inside, I'll massage you now since I'm going with Key oppa later" 

 

Donghae and Eunhyuk walked by us laughing their butts off at someone/thing. Heechul and I looked at each other and followed Donghae and Eunhyuk. 

 

I was in the elevator with the guys and I got a message. 

 

From Key 

Hae-mi ah, I'm so so so so so sorry 

 

To Key 

Waegure? 

 

From Key 

Something came up. I have to leave immediately 

 

To Key 

Is everything okay, is it work related or family related? 

 

From Key

..... Family. Don't worry it's not that much. 

 

To Key 

Is it your uncle again?

 

From Key 

No he moved to Osaka and started a business there 

 

To Key 

Then who? Seolma....

 

From Key 

You guessed it, my cousin is back

 

To Key

Aish, Key oppa I feel so bad for you 

 

From Key 

I haven't seen her since then so hopefully she hasn't gotten worse 

 

To Key 

Didn't she get married like a year ago? 

 

From Key 

I have absolutely no idea that girl and I do not click so we don't keep in touch 

 

To Key 

Ha-ha still the same 

 

From Key 

I'm so sorry ugh I really wanna be with you right now but they sent me to pick her up 

 

To Key

Ani, oppa take care of yourself and watch out for Chae-ri

 

From Key 

Thanks for understanding oppa will take you out soon, bye 

 

I sighed 

 

To Key 

(^∇^) that day better be soon, bye 

 

I sighed again this time louder. Unconsciously louder.

 

Heechul who was next to me heard my sigh 

 

"Waegure" he asked 

 

"Key oppa cancelled our date" I pouted 

 

"Then how about you go on a date with me? I don't want to go to the dorms anyway."

 

Donghae turned around smiling at me 

 

"Hae-mi" Donghae asked

 

"Hmm?" I said

 

"Since you can't go with Key do you want to hang out with me and Eunhyuk?" 

 

"I just made plans with Heechul" 

 

"Then you guys join us, the four of us" 

 

“And where do the rest of us go?”

 

“You guys can come too” Eunhyuk added

 

“I want to sleep~” Hangeng said

 

“I want wine, Sungmin hyung join me” Kyuhyun asked

 

“If I get fat it’s your fault” Sungmin said

 

"Uh" I said looking at Heechul.

 

Donghae what are you trying to do? I finally got on good terms with this guy.

 

"I don't mind hanging out with my cute dongsaengs" Heechul said

 

"Ah but Hae-mi I want my massage" Heechul asked again

 

"I won't forget I promise" I said making a pinky promise with Heechul 

Donghae just watched, he was watching us the entire time. I'm not stupid you know. Aigoo if Donghae’s gonna peek he might as well be good at hiding it. 

 

I shook my head and continued talking to Heechul 

 

Ding

 

"Ah- Jessica what are you doing here?" Sungmin asked

 

"Looking for someone" She replied

 

"Who?" Heechul asked, looking as if he knew the answer

 

"Donghae" she blushed 

 

"Ha-ha you found him" Heechul laughed 

 

Donghae, who was standing behind us, blushed and walked up to the girl

 

"Oppa!" she said hugging him 

 

"Jessica" he said back

 

So he does have someone that he likes 

 

"I still don't get it, how is she still called the ice princess if she's like this around us?" Heechul asked

 

Jessica just gave Heechul a glare but I felt like it was aimed towards me. 

 

"Are you Hae-mi" she said directing her attention to me 

 

"Nae" I said

 

I saw Donghae mouth ''

 

"Anyoung" I added on  

 

"Jessica let's go" another pretty girl said 

 

"But..." 

 

"We have practice. Let's go now" 

 

"Fine" 

 

"Bye oppa" She said as she hugged Donghae once more.

 

I don't know why but that just made me get this tight feeling near my chest. Heartburn maybe. I did eat a lot just now. Wait is heart burn bad for the babies??????? 

 

The elevator door closed and everyone was silent. 

 

"Hae-mi what's wrong?" 

 

"N-nothing my chest feels weird" I said 

 

"Are you okay?"

 

"Yea I think so" 

 

"Are you sure?" 

 

"Oppa I'm fine" 

 

Everyone got out as soon as we reached our floor.

 

"I'll wait outside"

 

"Okay" 

 

Soon we entered ad it was just me and Donghae. Well this is awkward. 

 

"I'm going to be out with Heechul oppa” I said

 

"Okay" he replied

 

"Just thought that I would inform you" I added

 

"Hmm okay" he stared blankly at his phone

 

I pouted. Is he ignoring me? Who was that girl? What's this uneasy, feeling? Oh well, too bad I don't have enough time to think about that.

 

I quickly change my clothes, fix my hair, put on light makeup (in the bathroom) and grab my purse and start to leave. 

 

I walked by our room, well Donghae’s room and I overheard Donghae’s conversation with someone

 

"Oppa, you promised" the person on the other side said, is it Jessica

 

"I know a lot of things happened, so I couldn't" Donghae said

 

"But" she was about to talk again

 

"I'm sorry. That’s all I can say. We’re going to have to break up" Donghae said in a serious tone  

 

"Bu" before she could even say that, Donghae cut her off

 

"Miyan-hae soo yeon" 

 

"Don't think I've forgiven you" she said. I could feel the coldness in her voice.

 

I quickly ran to the main door "Donghae I'm leaving" I yelled and slammed the door shut.

 

I felt angry, but I don't know why.

 

Wait.

 

Was I the reason they broke up? Was it because I'm pregnant with his child that he has to let go of a lot of things?

 

I’ve always wanted to ask, but I've never been able to.

 

So he did have someone he liked, and she liked him back.

 

Should I leave? Maybe I should just disappear from his life.

 

Do I really fit in here?

 

Does he truly accept me or is he just doing this because he feels responsible?

 

"Hae-mi? Are you okay?" Heechul asked, disturbing me from my thoughts

 

"Huh oh yea" I lied putting on my façade 

 

"The let's go~" Heechul smiled

 

At first I was afraid of him, but my first impressions of people are almost always wrong, especially guys. He was scary at first and he is when he’s mad but he’s really cute when he smiles, it gives me this kind of warm feeling.

 

"Okay, okay" I said as we started walking down to the elevator

 

We talked about a bunch of things, turns out were quit similar. Once we got into the car Heechul turned all serious 

 

"Hae-mi something sounds fishy. Are you and Donghae really going out?" Heechul asked with a straight face looking at my, staring into my eyes rather my soul.

 

"Yea of course!" I lied, forcing a smile on

 

"Don’t lie to me. I can see through that façade. Just earlier you were about to cry weren't you?" He asked with his ever so serious face

 

"A-ani" I said looking down, avoiding his piercing eyes.

 

"I overheard your conversation with Ji-yong. Don't hide it from me, I'm trustworthy. I promise I won't tell a soul so please tell me what really happened and how you met Donghae." He asked persistently

 

This guy is just... So unpredictable. Ugh. Should I tell him? He sees right through me though. Can I trust him? What about Donghae? Will Donghae be mad when he finds out I told someone our secret?

 

"It’s okay; I won't tell Donghae or anyone in the entire world. You just have to tell me the truth. I promise" 

 

"Pinky promise with me" I finally said

 

"Okay, yaksukhae" he said, still serious

 

“Oppa change your expression, its putting me under so much pressure, your serious face”

 

“Ha-ha okay okay I will” he said finally breaking his serious face

 

I guess I have to tell him now

 

"Wait before I answer your questions you have to answer mine" i said.  "Let’s switch back and forth" i suggested

 

"I'll start" Heechul smiled

 

"Okay" I said

 

No one’s POV~~~~~~~~~~

 

Just then Heechul got a text from Donghae

 

From Donghae

Hyung, I’m sorry, something came up, Eunhyuk and I can’t go today, maybe some other day? Please take care of Hae-mi for me today. Kumawo hyung ^^

 

To Donghae

It’s okay, Hyung will take care of everything, but are you alright? I was expecting this to happen sooner or later. Aigoo, you’re so lucky only Hyukjae and I know about the details of this. Donghae, Hae-mi is going to tell me the truth. You tell Hyukjae, about what really happened. ^^ 

 

From Donghae

Hyung, how did you…. Was it that day at the rooftop?

 

To Donghae

Maybe~

Im in the middle of something important bye bye~ =P

 

From Donghae

HYUNG!!!! 


HAPPY BIRTHDAY HANGENG 

 

 

 


 

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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)