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Is this fate or a dream ?

 

 

(≧∇≦) 20 chapters already? Thanks for supporting me everyone 

 


 

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No one’s pov 

 

It was another morning, yet it was more laid back 

 

"Is everyone up yet?" Eunhyuk asked

 

"Yea they should be. Wait I don't see Shindong, Eunhyuk can you go get him" Hae-mi asked

 

"Fine~" Eunhyuk said heading towards Shindong’s room 

 

"Hyung are you awake?" Eunhyuk asked knocking at the door 

 

"。。。” No response was heard 

 

Eunhyuk opened the door and made a... A very beautiful face (a/n note sarcasm was used) 

 

"... Hyung. You're a very big piece of sausage" Eunhyuk said 

 

"What do you want??" Shindong said complained getting up

 

"Hyung breakfast is ready, and we have to go shopping today"

 

"Oh...oh yea... Okay I'll be there" Shindong said in a sleepy voice

 

Eunhyuk walked back to find Leeteuk missing 

 

"Is Leeteuk hyung not awake yet?" Eunhyuk asked 

 

"No, Donghae, Heechul, Henry and Siwon just went in his room to wake him up" Hae-mi replied  

 

"I think they’ll need my help, I'm gonna go wake him up okay" Eunhyuk said

 

"Okay" Hae-mi replied

 

"Hyung hyung hyung hyung hyung hyung hyung" Donghae yelled in Leeteuk’s ears excitedly 

 

"Waegure?" Leeteuk sleepily asked 

 

"Wake up wake up wake up" 

 

"...W...a...e..." he asked slowly 

 

"Because~ hyung we have to go shopping today" Siwon said *Leeteuk goes back to snoring*

 

"Guys. I got this" Heechul said shaking Leeteuk until he opened his eyes 

 

"Whoa! It's an earthquake! Everyone hide!!" Leeteuk said in a very drunk like voice. Leeteuk took his blanket and covered his entire body with it and curled into a ball

 

"It’s cold" Leeteuk complains

 

"Hoho that was smart Henry!" Heechul said giving him a thumbs up

 

"The fan" Henry said with a victory sign 

 

"It’s okay let's not wake him up. Let's draw on him instead" Donghae suggested 

 

"The face?" Siwon asked 

 

"Oh yes." Donghae said 

 

"Raccoon?" Eunhyuk asked

 

"I haven't seen that one yet. Sure" Heechul shrugged 

 

"Touch my face and let's see if you can face a camera tomorrow" 

 

"GUYS!! Breakfast is almost ready" Ryeowook yelled 

 

Hae-mi came inside with a glass of water 

 

"Didn’t he spit water on us to wake us up one day?" Eunhyuk said

 

"Payback?" Donghae questioned

 

"Oh yes." Henry said

 

"Everyone?" Hae-mi asked

 

"In this room yea" Donghae said

 

"Is there enough water?" Eunhyuk asked

 

"I think I'll pass" Hae-mi said 

 

1...2...3 

 

The boys spit water on Leeteuk, it was like a water fountain, except the water was coming out of the mouths of these guys.

 

"Aish!!" Leeteuk said covering his face 

 

"Hyung get up already!!! We have to eat and then go ~" Eunhyuk said 

 

"Let’s go help Ryeowook in the kitchen" Hae-mi said

 

"Ani, its okay Alex Sammy, Hankyung and I can help Ryeowook" Uki replied

 

"Andwae. I want to make food. I like making food. Im going to make food." Hae-mi pouted 

 

Uki made a face, turned to Alex, who shrugged

 

"Fine. But don't stress yourself" 

 

"I won't" Hae-mi smiled 

 

"Thanks for caring" *finally something to do* 

 

An hour later 

 

"Guys is Leeteuk up?" Hae-mi asked

 

"Yea" Kyuhyun said

 

"Where is he?" Hae-mi asked

 

"On the couch" yesung said

 

"Doing what" 

 

"He was watching TV last time I saw him"  

 

"Hae-mi he's asleep again" Ryeowook said

 

"Really?" 

 

"Ani ani, I was just closing my eyes" Leeteuk said in defense slowly opening his eyes 

 

"Ha-ha okay, well breakfast is ready" 

 

They ate until everything was gone (all eaten) 

 

"So where are we going to go" Heechul started 

 

"The mall" Zhou mi said  

 

"SHINee members are coming to right?" Kangin asked

 

"Kureumyo" Hae-mi stated

 

"Oh yea, I’ve been wondering, Hae-mi how do you know them?" Kibum asked

 

"Ah, I only know key. He's my best friend from years and years ago ~ that makes me feel old" Hae-mi replied  

 

"Ohhhh" a couple of people said

 

*knock knock* 

 

"Dugusaeyo?" Hae-mi asked

 

"Taemin" the person on the other side answers

 

Hae-mi smiled and let the SHINee boys in.

 

"Anyoung" They bowed

 

"Anyoung" the suju members said back

 

"We were just about to talk about what to buy" Siwon smiled

 

"Really? Perfect timing then huh?" Minho said

 

"Let’s decide on where to go, what to buy, things we need, things we don't need and how much to spend, time, space and money-wise" Leeteuk said 

 

"Okay that seems like a nice plan" Jonghyun said

 

"Where should we go?" Tae min started

 

"Mall?" Kyuhyun suggested

 

"Do you want to get attacked by crazy fan girls?" Hangeng said

 

"..." no response from Kyuhyun

 

"I thought so" Hangeng said

 

"But it's so fun to..." Kyuhyun began

 

"Then what about Happy Baby?" Kangin asked

 

"Is that even a place?" yesung said

 

"I think so" Heechul said

 

"Hae-mi this is so like you. I knew this would happen" key said shaking his head 

 

Hae-mi pouted "oppa then you find it" 

 

"Oppa? Hae-mi he's younger than you" Leeteuk said  

 

"Ara-yo" Hae-mi says  

 

"Then why do you call him oppa" Yesung asked  

 

"Because I don't like being old" Hae-mi replied

 

"But I call you Nuna" kyuhyun and taemin said

 

"That’s because those who call me Nuna are special" Hae-mi smiled  

 

"Really?" Taemin said innocently 

 

"Oh I know! There is this place called baby wonderland. My sister bought things for her babies from there too so I'm guessing it's a pretty good place and plus, it's secluded from the rest of Seoul" Siwon said

 

"How long does it take to get from here to there?" Onew asked

 

"An hour" Siwon replied

 

"It seems fine to me, what about you guys" Donghae said. A couple of nods could be seen

 

"Okay then, baby wonderland it is" Leeteuk and Onew decided

 

"What are we gonna buy?" Shindong asked

 

"Baby stuff" Hae-mi said

 

"That’s way too broad" Minho said

 

"Then a cradle" Donghae added

 

"That’s one thing we need for sure" Hae-mi said

 

"Some clothes" Heechul said

 

"Obviously" Hangeng said

 

"Baby bottles?" Ki bum asked

 

"No doubt" Ryeowook said

 

"Car seats" Jonghyun said

 

"I guess" Hae-mi said

 

"I mean yea we need them because nod travel and you can't just have two babies just sitting there in the back seat” Donghae said

 

"Baby food?" Alex said

 

"Don’t babies usually feed?" Sammy asked

 

"Yea but some babies drink formula milk because of reasons I guess" Uki said  

 

"Is anyone making a list?" Onew asked  

 

"A mental one" Eunhyuk said

 

"No like make a list so that we can see what we need to buy and what we don't need immediately" Key said

 

"I got it" Sungmin said writing down the things we already said

 

"Ready?" Hae-mi asked

 

"Ready" Sungmin replied

 

"Blankets" Kyuhyun said

 

"Toys" Heechul added

 

"Socks" Jonghyun said

 

"Baby books" Minho said

 

"Baby wardrobe" Leeteuk added

 

"That thing you push a baby in" Taemin said

 

"You mean a stroller?" Hae-mi asked

 

"Clothes" Void said joining the conversation last minute 

 

"I think we already said that" Heechul said

 

"Yea we did" Sungmin said

 

"I think that's about all" 

 

"Since I've never had a child before ah but Siwon has a sister who has children so maybe she can help" 

 

"Great I'll call her now" 

 

~~~~ring~~~~~ring 

 

"Yeobuseyo?" 

 

"Ah Nuna, can you help us?"

 

"Sure. Wait it depends with what?"

 

"My friend is going to have a baby soon, she wants to buy stuff for her baby but she doesn't know what to buy. Or at least the essentials" 

 

"I recommend writing this down, is she here?" 

 

"Ah, yea she is, I'll let you talk to her" Siwon said passing the phone to Hae-mi 

 

"Anyounghaseyo" 

 

"Anyoung. I heard you’re having a baby, congratulations"

 

"Kamsamnida" 

 

"This is your first time I'm guessing" 

 

"Nae" 

 

"Are you having one baby or more?"

 

"Two"

 

"Chukkahae, oh and just ask for either doubles or a twin version of everything I saw okay"

 

"Nae chongmal Kamsamnida"

 

"Then let’s get started, first off, sleeping equipment. Babies love to sleep so a crib or a cot." 

 

"Nae" 

 

"You’re going to need a push chair or a stroller" 

 

"Stroller?"

 

"Unless you don't plan to go outside until your babies are able to walk"

 

"Ah okay, Sungmin-oppa, stroller and crib/cot"

 

"Okay, I got that" he said writing everything down. Siwon’s sister gave Hae-mi a list of things to buy for her babies

 

Everyone was exited to go shopping for the babies 

 

"Hey guys if we finish shopping for babies early then maybe we could hang out later" 

 

"Seems like a good idea" 

 

"Then let's go~" 

 

The guys went into their rooms and started putting on weird makeup, hats and other items 

 

"Oppa... What are you doing?" Hae-mi asked 

 

"Since were really popular, our fans might run over you and the other girls to reach us, and plus this is fun to some degree" 

 

"Oh so like a disguise" 

 

Everyone put a mask on while wearing beanies/hats to cover their hair, they wore glasses and weird clothes. 

 

"If you guys wanted to go unnoticed then I think you shouldn't wear those clothes" 

 

"Why"

 

"It makes you stand out." 

 

"I agree with Hae-mi" 

 

"Okay then we'll change out of these but what do we wear" 

 

"Normal clothes" 

 

"。。。"

 

They came back out, looking like a normal group of guys.

 

"Let’s go~" 

 

We went to the parking lot and then it hit us, we have a lot of people with us. Let's see 5+5.... 25 people. Yes Void was forced to come along.

"7 people in each car, so we need about 3 vans and a car." 

 

"SHINee has their own van so that leaves you with 20 people and we can have two more people in the van" Onew said 

 

"So 18 people left" 

 

"The girls are going in one car so that leaves the 13 of us."

 

"Okay and who’s driving" 

 

"I'll drive" 

 

"No. I don't want to die" 

 

"I’ll do it" 

 

"Okay, who knows where 'baby wonderland' is?" 

 

"I do" 

 

"Then you’re leading the way" 

 

"Okay" 

 

"Everyone into the cars" 

 

"Who’s riding SHINee’s car?"

 

"I will" 

 

"So will I" 

 

"Okay then everything is all set"

 

"Let’s go go go" Donghae said 

 

~~ We got there in an hour and a half, the ride was full of random talks and not once was there a moment of silence.

 

"Hae-mi calm down" 

 

"I don't think I can!!" 

 

"Let’s go inside" 

 

We went inside and Donghae held my hand

 

"Let’s look for a crib first" 

 

"Okay" 

 

We were looking through some cribs and Hae-mi found one that she really liked, it was a cute twins crib.

 

"Donghae what about that one?" Hae-mi said gently grabbing Donghae’s arm

 

"Huh... Oh.... Um y..yea sure" he stuttered 

 

"Donghae what’s wrong? Why are you stuttering?" 

 

"Ani, it's nothing" 

 

"Are you sure?"

 

"Yea" 

 

"Guys what about this one?"

 

"Yea it's good but do we have enough room?"

 

"I think so" 

 

"I think we should eat and talk about future housing of Hae-mi and Donghae" 

 

"But..." Hae-mi pouted 

 

"You know he's right Hae-mi" 

 

"Let’s come back once we've figured that bit out" 

 

*sigh* "okay" 

 

"What do you want to eat?" 

 

"... Hmmm... Jajangmyeon"

 

"Really that’s all?" 

 

"I don't know that's all I want what do you guys want to eat?"

"Meat" 

 

"I'll buy jajangmyeon for Hae-mi and you guys go and buy yourselves meat" 

 

"Ani let's just go to a restaurant together" Hae-mi said 

 

"What about jajangmyeon" Donghae asked 

 

"I don’t feel like having it anymore" 

 

"Okay" 

 

"Sorry I made you guys waste your only weekend"

 

"Ani it’s okay" 

 

"Yea don’t worry" 

 

"Hae-mi ah do you want to go shopping with just me?" key offered

 

"Wouldn’t you rather rest?" 

 

"I'd rather hang out with my best friend" 

 

Hae-mi hugged key

 

"So sweet, kumawo oppa" 

 

 

Hae-mi POV

 

We all sat and ate our food. So much food. So much hunger. I swear I probably eat like a pig these days. I'm so much hungrier than I ever was normally. Everyone here is skinnier than me I feel so excluded ~.~ but I'm a pregnant woman I can't help it. I better lose all this weight after birth.

 

"Hae-mi do you want some?" Donghae asked distracting me 

 

"Huh? Oh um yea" 

 

"Are you okay? You seem a little out of it" 

 

"Ha-ha no, I was just thinking about some stuff" 

 

Out of nowhere when the meat finally was set on the grill, we began out discussion. 

 

"Okay everyone we have gathered today to talk about an important matter" 

 

"Wait...what if someone hears about this and there is someone that shouldn't know" I asked 

 

"This is a private restaurant owned by SM for artist like us who want to just hang out and not get killed by a million fans" Heechul said as-a-matter-of-fact-ly 

 

"Really?" I said

 

"Ha-ha yea" Donghae laughed 

 

"So cool" Hae-mi commented 

 

"Okay so moving on" Key said

 

"So as I was saying, Hae-mi is going to bring two new members to the family soon" Leeteuk said

 

"And our problem is living space" Heechul said

 

"I was thinking buying a really big house that fits in all of us" Donghae smiled

 

"I think that'll use up our entire salary" Kangin said  

 

"My parents own a mansion nearby so if you want we could live there" Siwon said 

 

"Aigoo super junior’s rich kid” Leeteuk said

 

"Ha-ha so I guess that solves our problem with housing and space" Jonghyun said  

 

"I don't want to bug your parents though" I said  

 

"My dad won't mind, he doesn't even live there and he just owns it he's never lived in there my parents live in another mansion" Siwon said

 

"How Many mansions do you have!?" Shindong asked 

 

"Not that many, just about five or six" Uki said

 

"He’s our official rich kid" Kangin said

 

"Ha-ha" everyone laughed

 

"How many rooms?" Donghae asked Siwon

 

"I've only been there once and it has about twenty five bedrooms each with their own bathroom, there’s a kitchen, a porch, a backyard, a basement, two stair cases, three elevators, a movie theater, and much much much more" Siwon replied

 

"DAMN~ Siwon you have a lot of Money" Shindong said  

 

"My parents own it not me" Siwon said  

 

"Ask your parents before and then we’ll see" I said

 

“now?” he asked

 

"If you want" I said

 

"Okay I'll just do it now, who knows about the next time I'll be free" he said agreeing 

 

Siwon starts calling his dad 

 

"Yeobuseyo?" Siwon says

 

"Ah is this appa?"

 

"Yea it is, what is it Siwon" 

 

"Appa can I have the mansion that's on XXX road?" 

 

"Ah yea sure why?" 

 

"They guys here are dying from over crowdedness" 

 

"Ah really? Then I'll prepare it so that you can move in by the end of the month" 

 

"Kumawo appa, Saranghaeyo" 

 

"Ha-ha it’s okay, I love you too"

 

"I'm going to hang up" 

 

"Okay bye" 

 

"He said we could move in by the end of the month" Siwon smiled  

 

"Wait so were moving that fast" Uki asked

 

"Yea, appa said he has to prepare the mansion" Siwon said  

 

"Tell appa I'm going to be there too" Uki stated 

 

"Later" Siwon said

 

"Don’t forget" Uki said

 

"I won't" Siwon said

 

"Yaaa~ the meats ready" Shindong said taking a bite

 

"Donghee hyung! Wait for everyone!" Ryeowook complained 

 

"Ani! That piece was going to Burn" Shindong said defending himself

 

"Uhuh sure" Ryeowook squinted

 

"Can we eat now?" Henry asked

 

"I never said we couldn't" Leeteuk shrugged  

 

Everyone took pieces of meat and set it on their plates and began eating.  

 

"This is good" Ryeowook said

 

"Derishuus~" Heechul said in his broken engrish. 

 

"Oppa its delicious not derishuus" I said but it was so cute

 

Everyone started laughing at Heechul’s mistake

 

Heechul stared at me and I looked away.

 

What’s his problem? It’s called a joke and isn't he one of the youngest? Shouldn't he be used to something like this? 

 

"Hyung Kenchana it was a joke" Eunhyuk said

 

Wait aren't Eunhyuk and Donghae the same age? So then if he's Eunhyuk’s hyung then he's Donghae's hyung that means he’s not younger than me but. OLDER????? 

 

"Was I not supposed to correct you? Oppa Miyan hae" I said quietly 

 

"Awe hyung you scared her!" Donghae said 

 

"But I'm not mad" Heechul said

 

"Are you sure?" I asked

 

"Of coursh" Heechul said in English 

 

"Did I say that one correctly?" he asked me 

 

"Nae" I replied. I'm still feeling a little weird... I'm not scared of talking to him, I'm afraid of saying the wrong thing and then being hated by him

 

We ate and chatted for the next half hour and then went home.

 

Donghae was driving and Eunhyuk was next to him while I was in the back with Heechul, Siwon, Hangeng, Kyuhyun and Sungmin. Siwon Kyuhyun and Sungmin sat in the back while Heechul Hangeng and I sat in the middle seat I somehow ended up beside Heechul. I was stiff but slowly drifting off to dreamland and without realizing it I had immediately fallen asleep. 

 

No one pov

 

"What are y...?” Heechul said noticing a head on his shoulder 

 

"Let her sleep she must've been tired" 

 

"Yea but still" 

 

"Heechul just shut up and let it slide" Hangeng said looking at a pouting Heechul 

 

"Waegure?" Donghae asked keeping his eyes on the road 

 

"Your wifey fell asleep on Heechul and Heechul’s whining about it now" Hangeng said 

 

"She what??" 

 

"Fell asleep. Gosh I know my Korean isn't the best but it’s not the worst"

 

"Ani she was so cheerful earlier I didn't think she would’ve fallen asleep" 

 

"Why is it so hard to believe that Hae-mi gets tired to? I mean it's kind of expected since she has to carry about three times her weight" 

 

"Oh... Your right..." Heechul smirked while playing with Hae-mi’s hair 

Donghae looked at the mirror and saw what Heechul was doing. 

 

That feeling is back. Aish someone tell me what the hell this is. Donghae thought

 

"Donghae what’s wrong? Why do you look so angry?" Eunhyuk asked him 

 

"Huh? I'm not angry! Why would I be angry?" Donghae asked

 

"Seolma… Hyung I think our fishy is jealous!" Eunhyuk smirked

 

"Kekekekekekekeke" Heechul giggles making Donghae take his eyes off of the road. 

 

"HYUNG" Donghae complained turning around to face Heechul

"Donghae KEEP YOUR DAMN EYES ON THE ING ROAD GOD DAMN IT” Eunhyuk yelled

 

"Eunhyuk hyung don't say god’s name in the same sentence as that word" Siwon sternly said

 

"Ah - Miyan Siwon" Eunhyuk said

 

"Hyung we know how much you like her, let this slide" Kyuhyun said. Donghae looked through the mirror again and saw Heechul readjusting Hae-mi

 

Aish why is he touching her like that????!??!?!?!??! Calm down Donghae why are you getting so worked up? It's okay, it's okay it's not like she's your girl for real. Aish!! Donghae thought


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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)