Girls day

Is this fate or a dream ?

We walked around the huge house and looked around

My feet hurt really badly and I just really wanted to sit down but I couldn't hold up the tour around the house just because of that.

"Hae mi" Donghae turned around while the group continued walked

"Nae" I said (I was in the very back because it hurt to walk)

"Do you need help?" he asked

"Nae?" I questioned

"You look like you're in pain; do you want me to help you?"

"Huh? No I'm fine" I said flashing a fake smile at him

"You don't look like it" he said back

"And that's the end" Siwon said

"Damn! This place is huge" Kangin said

"Guys we have a schedule today, today's a group schedule and all individual schedules are canceled. Today we have three concerts to perform at, a fan meeting and group photo shoots then finally we have an award ceremony to go to “Leeteuk announced reminding everyone

"Let’s go before Hyung gets pissed at us, Arasso?"

"Nae" Everyone said

They all left, leaving the new house to the girls (Henry and Zhou mi went to dance practice and had tier own schedules go attend)

"Unnie" Alex called out

"Nae" I said looking at her

"Unnie you should rest up first, we should go shopping today"

"Shopping for what?"

"For you of course!"

"What do I need?"

"Clothes that aren't skin tight"

"An..." I was cut off by Uki

"Unnie you should listen to Alex. We just want to spend a little girl time together since Sammy and I are going to be busy soon with final exams and Alex is going to start work soon" Uki said

"Okay okay let's go" I laughed

"YAY" the girls cheered

"Let’s eat out okay?" Alex suggested

"Kure" I smiled

It's been a while since I've been out shopping for myself with people

"Unnie rest up for a bit, let's go at 10 okay?" Sammy asked

~

"Unnie unnie let's go" Sammy said

"Let’s go go go" I said with enthusiasm

"Yay it looks like unnie is happy" Uki said to Alex and Sammy

I just laughed along and sat in the car

It was a short and fun ride to the mall

"unnie What did you use to do before you got pregnant?" Sammy asked innocently

"Well, I worked part time at a shop and babysat, while going to college and I lived with my... Aunt I guess”

"I don't know If she's my aunt or not but I still love her"

"Awe"

We arrived at the mall fairly quickly

(While walking to the mall entrance)

"Why is it so hot" Uki complained

"Do you guys have something you want to buy or are you guys just roaming around?" I asked

"Let’s look around" Uki said

We stopped inside one shop that seemed to be selling maternity dresses

"Unnie what about this one? It's so soft and stretchy" Alex said

"What’s your favorite color?" Uki asked

"I like all shades of blue and sea green" I answered

"Then what about this dress?"

"Dress?" I asked

"Wae unnie you don't like dresses"

"Aniayo" I said

"I like them, just not too short" I continued

Honestly no, I don’t like them but how can I say no? They seem to be having so much fun

We picked out many dresses

"Unnie we just bought dresses lets go buy pants and shirts" Alex said, magically knowing that's what I really wanted

"Wait before we go we need unnie to change her outfit"

"Why" I asked

"Because unnie that shirt looks like it's too tight for you along with your pants" she's right. I always walk around in my pajamas so no one notices but the clothes I have are really tight

I didn't even bother arguing, they were right

"Wear this one" Sammy said pulling out a black dress

"Kure" I said going into a nearby bathroom

I changed quickly and when I got out I heard three people clapping

I shyly smiled

"Unnie you look so pretty"

"Aniayo you guys are prettier" I said blushing and moving my hands around, looking at the three of them. These girls were so much more radiant then I.

"Kyeopta" Uki squealed

"Unnie that was so cute" Sammy hugged me

I hugged her back and gave them a confused look

"Unnie you have more aegyo then it looks like" Alex giggled

"Thank you?" I said

We moved on to the next shop and bought a ton of clothes for my babies and I.

After hours of continuous shopping, we sat down in the food court after ordering our food.

"Unnie did you have fun?"

"Of course I did, you have no idea how bored I was getting at home always studying or doing something, never being able to go out"

"I heard it's good to walk when you’re pregnant"

"The thing is I don't want there to be any unnecessary attention on the boys. I don't want them to get in trouble because of me" I said

"But Donghae already announced that you two were going to get married"

"People know that but they don't know I'm pregnant" I said

"Then just tell them"

"No I don't think it's as simple as that, aren't they super popular around here?"

"Most definitely" Uki said pointing to a super junior add

"But now that we moved into Uki and Siwon’s mansion they’ll be a lot of room for unnie to walk" Alex said

"True true"

"What did you think of me when you first met me?" I asked them

"... Why do you ask that" Sammy asked

"Just wondering" I replied casually

"At first I wanted to kill Donghae for getting an innocent girl into such a big mess, I liked you at first, you were nice and you weren't a " Uki said

"Okay truth to be told, Hae mi unnie you don’t have to fake it anymore"

I laughed nervously, tucking my hair behind my left ear

"About what?" I asked

"You’re not his girlfriend. Other than Leeteuk -and us- no one else knows this"

".... How..."

"Come on, we’ve been living with Donghae for a really long time. When he's dating it's obvious, and he’s not the kind of person to hide things like relationships from any of us" Alex said

"I didn't mean to hide it; it's just that well that was what the plan was and all"

"Wait so you being pregnant were part of your plan?"

"WHAT no!! The plan was made after we found out I was pregnant"

"Ohh"

"How did it happen?"

"My friends and I went to a new year’s party and it was at a karaoke bar and everything, I drank for the first time in my entire life that night and next thing I know I wake up with a guy next to me , along with myself. I was ashamed at such a deed, and I thought he would be a douche and leave me after that 'one night stand' -if you want to call it that- but turns out he didn't and he gave me his phone number and told me that even if I wasn't pregnant I Should call him just so that he would know."

"Ohh" they all responded

"Are you in love with him now?" Uki asked me with seriousness written all over her face

Do I? Do I like him?

"I still don't know...”

"Come on! Girl you've been here for almost 5 full months how do you not know?" Uki asked me

"Umm maybe because everyone's always gone and I barely have time to spend with him?" I replied like it was obvious.

"Oh yea... You don't tag along with then like we have to" Uki said 

"Unnie our number was called up let's eat and then go" Alex smiled

"Okay" I replied

----Uki pov---

Hae mi sat inside my car while the three of us- Alex, Sammy and I- had a brief talk outside the car

"Let’s play matchmaker" I said

Alex smirked

"Donghae and Hae mi?" Sammy asked the obvious

"Yep" I replied

"I like where this is going"

"Meeting on the roof at 11:30 Okay" I said before entering my car

Alex and Sammy nodded

An evil smirk played on my lips

Just you wait, I will make sure my fishy is happy I thought to myself as we drove back to the dorm


 

Hehe i updated XD 

idky but i had a really hard time with the opening of this chapter  but its all good now ^^ 


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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)