that bad feeling

Is this fate or a dream ?

 

You know that feeling that you get when something is about to happen? Yea that's what I keep feeling, I'm standing outside his moms door which is weird because I was right behind him and his Mom only let him enter, she probably thought I was a fan girl or something ......

---------Donghae mom pov----------

Omo, I think it's a fan better keep her out if my Donghae’s personal life. 

Well for a fan she's really quiet, normally if it's a fan they won't be quiet keep on squealing or screaming but this one is different... Who knows what if it’s an act? 

I kept thinking to myself and barley heard Donghae all I head was 'we'... We? Whose we? 

"What do you mean; it's only me and you" 

Donghae turned to his left and then to his right and then said 

"I think she's still outside" 

“She?" she ... SHE???? ㅇㅁㅇ otteoke?? Donghae has a girlfriend?? Wait dejavu, why does this sound familiar. 

"Umma?" 

"Nae" 

"This is my girlfriend” 

! (◎_◎ ;) when did she come in...? Wait what....

"Bwohhh????????" 

"Anyounghaseyo" she said as she bowed 

"Ah.... Anyoung..... Please take a seat" I said

"Umma" Donghae said

"Nae" I replied still looking at her

"You’re scaring her" he said

"Wae?" I asked

"You’ve been staring at her for the past five minutes" 

.... It's all coming back me...   I stared at her face for a little bit and i realized She reminds me of them. 

"Donghae!" I said 

"Nae" he said

"I remember her" I said  

"Do you know her from before" he asked with excitement

"No, but you told me about something like this before" I lied we'll the first part is a lie but the second part isn't 

"Yea" he said

"Dejavu" I whispered

"What?" he asked

"I had a dream you would come and bring a girl with you!" I said with a serious expression

"-____-, umma please stop your embarrassing me” he whined

"Ani, if anything is embarrassing it's having a stripper for a son" I joked

"Bwohhh???" he took seriously, the girl silently giggled

"Ha-ha you fell for it" I said

".... Umma that’s not funny" I bet he was thinking about Donghwa, aigoo I know this child so well 

"Okay to what do you want to tell me?" I asked 

"That Hae-mi and I are going out" he replied

"How long" I asked

"Years" he said

"I feel bad for her" I whispered loud enough for him to hear me.  

"Umma why do you keep embarrassing me??" he whined even more

“Yah! Is whining something a guy should do in front of his girlfriend? " 

"...." no reply, victory

“But were dating” he said

"... Do you really think I'd believe that?" 

"Yes because we have" 

"Oh really?" 

"Yea" 

"Hmm... Then prove it" 

"How" he asked me 

"Hug" I said quickly. Donghae wouldn’t just hug anyone, only people he really likes.

"Okay..." he said and hugged her with a smile 

They hugged. No no stay calm. It’s okay, maybe his habit changed or something "kiss" ha-ha I know he won’t kiss just any girl.

"... Kiss??? Umma were too shy to kiss in front of you" 

"If you've been dating I'm pretty sure you can kiss, that is, if you were dating" please I know my son more than anyone, he won't kiss her ev-

*Chu*

ㅇㅁㅇ Omo he just kissed her!!!!

OHMYGODWHATJUSTHAPPENED???? IGEDOPAEZNBIF;DVAPINB NPDBNRE

"Umma we wanted to get your permission" he said nonchalantly 

"For what” I said still shocked 

"Marriage" 

"............." god you have got to be kidding me

"Give me a day to think about It"

"But" 

"No buts" I glared at him. Marriage? That's huge! 

"What about you" I wanna know this girl better 

"Nae, I'm sung Hae-mi, I. 25 years old and im training to become a doctor " sung Hae-mi? Doctor?

"Hmm Hae-mi-shii" 

"Nae?" 

"Why don’t you and Donghae stay for the night? Since it's already evening" 

"Oh yea umma?" 

"Nae" 

"She’s pregnant" 

"... With whose child" oh dear lord please have mercy

"Mine...." 

"Lee Donghae!!!! You have no idea...." 

"I'm sor..." 

"I'm so happy! I can finally see my Donghae start a family" 

"Bwohhh?" 

"Just kidding, Donghae go to your room and until I say you can go, you’re not allowed to leave it" 

"Nae" 

*Donghae walks away* 

"Jisonghaeyo “she said 

"Wae?" 

"Because I feel like I burdened you" 

"It’s not like that at all, tell me what happened" 

"It was an accident" 

"Really" 

"yes, it was a total accident, yes we were dating but we coincidentally saw each other at the Karaoke bar and we were both drunk and his sunbae took us to the closest apartment and just left us there....” she said In one breathe 

"It’s okay, don’t worry" I knew Donghae was clumsy but not this much 

"And what so you want to do with this baby?" 

"I..." she said as she rubbed her tummy and smiled the sweetest smile ever

"I want to keep her/him, not just because he's the produce of our love, he's an innocent child, who didn't do anything wrong and it's not even his fault, I don’t want to kill him and I don't want to be separated from him" 

Awe that's sweet

"Go up the stairs and knock on the door on your right" 

"Nae" 

She looks okay for Donghae but I'll test her and see if she's a perfect fit for him. I don’t want him to be left Hurt like that Jessica girl did, he cried so much, I don't want him to cry I want him to laugh and live his life. I'm glad he made the choice to get married but I don't want him to marry the wrong person. I'm his mom and I know he’s lying about knowing her for years, but that girl she might be the one for him.

"So are you willing to let us get married?" 

"Maybe”

"Umma" 

"Donghae” 

"....." 

"Two can play at this game" 

"Aish!"

"Hae-mi do you want dinner" 

She went down the stairs just to say 

"Aniayo, it’s okay really”

“Andwae, you have to eat, if you want your baby to be healthy that is” 

“Then, would you like me to help you?" 

"But you’re my guest” 

"Ani, please treat me like a cousin or sister or daughter" 

"Then I will…. I've always wanted a daughter like you" I said as I smiled, its true though, I mean I have Alex but Alex was away from me for so long, but I still love her, it’s just I wanted a daughter that’s quiet and kind, not saying Alex isn’t but you know .

"Thank you" she blushed 

"Then I’d appreciate your help"

********************* During diner******************

"Donghae!" 

"Nae~~~" 

"Food" 

"Let’s see here's beef bulgogi, kimchi, (and the list goes on and on)” 

"Waaa umma you made a lot for three people" 

"Four" I said pointing to Hae-mi's stomach

"Ahhh Miyan" he said with a guilty look 

"It’s fine, let's eat" Hae-mi said trying to get rid of the tension in the air.

"Food" Donghae said with excitement 

"Waaa the beef bulgogi tastes soo good" Donghae said 

"Hae-mi made it" 

"Chincha?" 

"Nae" 

"Omo look at your plate, Hae-mi you have to eat more! How is the baby going to be healthy if you don't feed him properly?" I said as Hae-mi looked up 

“So you’ve accepted us?” Donghae asked

"….fill up your plate" I said

"Nae" Hae-mi said obediently

--------- After diner-------

"Umma I'll sleep in my room and Hae-mi can sleep in donghwa’s room”

"Ani, you two sleep in the same room" 

"But..."

"No buts sleep in Donghae’s room”

"..." 

--------- In his room, no one pov------

"Miyan hae" Donghae said 

"Wae?" Hae-mi asked 

"Because... I got you pregnant and we have to go through all of this” Donghae said 

"... I can't say that it’s okay because it’s not since were strangers but since we decided to let this child live, we might as well give him what he needs. What's the point of letting the baby into this world and not taking care of him?" Hae-mi said 

"True but then we don't have any feelings for each other" Donghae asked 

"Well obviously since we barely know each other" Hae-mi said 

"Hmmm" Donghae said

"Im sleepy" Hae-mi randomly said 

“I sleep on the couch" Donghae said 

"... There is none" Hae-mi said looking around

"Oh yea..." 

"It’s okay it's not like anything more could happen" 

"I guess”

I slept on the left side and he slept on the right side of the bed, it was small and really awkward. I turned my back to him and he turned his back to me 

"Hae-mi?" 

"Nae" 

"Miyan hae"

"Wae" 

"Because I brought you into a really big mess"

"It’s okay were only human"

"But still"

"It's okay, I don't mind....." Hae-mi paused as she felt her lips, remembering what had happened earlier. Blushing a bright color of red, like a tomato. 

"Really? Kumawo" he said as he hugged her from behind 

"...." Hae-mi blushed, more than she's ever blushed before, her heart pounded like she ran a marathon and she felt a very queasy and uneasy yet calm and good feeling. 

'Pregnancy side effects I guess' she thought 

~~~~~~Flashback~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 

Donghae mom pov-------

“Eunsoo”

She turned around “nae”

“Omo, what’s this?”

“Will you marry me?” dongwook said

The silence made Dongwook sweat like crazy, he was so nervous for her response

She jumped into his arms and he held her tight.

“Of course”

They smiled the brightest smiles, like there was no tomorrow.

`````months later````````````````````

“I can’t believe he just left me with a baby! Dongwook, come back, I need you!!! I can’t live without you”

“Eunsoo… it’s not okay but he’s gone and you have to take care of yourself”

“Andwae, I can’t take it, if he’s not here then there’s no point in me living”

“Yes there is! For your baby!”

She rubbed her tummy. “How? She won’t have a father, how can I be a good mother?”

“It’s okay; I’ll be there for you”

“But...”

“It’s okay, ill protect you and your baby”

“But…”

“No buts just think about it, you won’t be able to give her all the love she needs”

“I…”

“No Eunsoo”

“Eunsoo-ah just marry him, he was the best for you anyway”

“But I only love dongwook”

“Im not asking you to love me, im just asking you to marry me”

Eunsoo thought for days and days and finally made her decision.

“I’ll marry you”

Suho was sad Eunsoo didn’t love him, but if they could be together than he would be very content.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ two months before Hae-mi was born~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

“Are you leaving me?” I asked 

“Sorry Suho got a new job” Eunsoo replied 

“I won’t be able to see your baby” I frowned 

“I’ll send you pictures” she said optimistically 

“Then I’ll send you some pictures of donghwa and Donghae too”

“Yay” she hugged hyangsuk. Tears ran down their cheeks as they said their last farewell.

“Wait before you go, I want to ask you one thing”

“What is it ?”

“What will you name her”

“Hae…..Sung Hae-mi”

“Really?”

“Yea”

“Don’t change it okay”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~end of flashback~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I lay in bed thinking about Donghae’s girlfriend. I closed my eyes and then suddenly a flash of memories went through my head. Sung Hae-mi, I remember her now; she loved next door to us when Eunsoo was still pregnant with her. Her previous husband had died of cancer and he was the father of Hae-mi. thinking for her child, Eunsoo quickly married Suho, my friend since college. I knew all three of them and we were all friends, both of them loved her (Suho and her previous husband, Dongwook) I've never had feelings for either of them and I've always loved Donghae’s father... I remember her getting pregnant but shortly after her husband died, she had no idea why but he knew he was going to go soon, he just never told her. He loved her so much, so so much. Anyway so before she gave birth she moved away because Suho got a new job, I never saw them again. The only reason I think that this is Eunsoo’s daughter is because she looks so much like her father and she has the same personality as Eunsoo.

------------------------------------- Authors Important note 

To clear up any misunderstandings

Donghae mom feels like she knows Hae-mi, she is reminded of her three best friends since college. She can tell that Hae-mi is dongwook and Eunsoo’s child, and yes her real fathers name is dongwook. 

------Back to story-----

Since she has a similar personality to Eunsoo, Suho and dongwook, she should be a pretty good person. Maybe she’s the one for Donghae.... Well I hope so, cuz the last girl was horrible, breaking up with my Donghae > :( 

--------Hae-mi pov-------

o my god I'm about to die, my heart is beating so fast my face is so hot and red \(//∇//)\ I feel a rush of mixed emotions when he hugged me close to his big and warm body. It reminded me of appa so a couple of tears ran down my cheeks, slowly I felt sleepy we both went to sleep like that. 

A/N 

Sorry if it was confusing

 
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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)