meeting TVXQ/DBSK

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That was one of the best performances I've ever done so far. Honestly my mind went blank and I just moved to the beat (along with the dance steps) and I tried not to lip sync but I mean who can dance and sing at the same time? Anyway when we finished performing, Hae-mi and Alex went backstage to meet us.
 
"Oh my god, guys that was awesome!!" Hae-mi said. Ha-ha so she finally saw out charismatic side
 
"Glad you liked it" Leeteuk said with a smile
 
"Ani, it was really good. I've been to a lot of concerts but this is so far the best I've ever seen! You hard work has paid off"
 
"Do you know the name of the song?"
 
"Nope but I'm guessing you want to tell me" Hae-mi said 
 
"Hehe yes” Sungmin said, smiling 
 
"It's called bona mana"
 
"Bonamana? That’s an interesting name"
 
"Uhuh"
 
"So Hae-mi ar-" Siwon tried to ask, but was cut off by the manager
 
"Donghae , Eunhyuk, Siwon, Leeteuk, Heechul and Kyuhyun come with me, were heading off for the photo shoot"
 
"Hae-mi, Alex are you coming with us" Donghae said 
 
"Nae"
 
"Siwon come here"
 
"Nae~"
We got inside the car and as started talking right away
 
"You should listen to this song" Heechul said
 
".... (Music plays) !(◎_◎;) where have I been, oh my god this song is so good" Hae-mi said
 
"Hehe thanks" Eunhyuk said
 
"How long do photo-shoots take ? " Hae-mi asked
 
"About an hour or two" Siwon said
 
"Why?" Leeteuk asked
 
"Because I thought you guys would be hungry and so I made you guys a lot of food but I don't know when were all king to be able to sit down and eat"
 
"Oh, let's see, everyone should be there for practice and after half an hour we can eat so Let's just eat then" Heechul said
 
"Yay food" eunhyuk said
 
"You guys are so busy, why don't you guys ever ask for a day off" Hae-mi asked
 
"That’s because were really popular" Heechul said
 
"But doesn't your health matter more than anything?"
 
"Yea it does, but to us our fans mean more than out health"
 
"Awe that's so sweet"
 
"Hae-mi which college do you go to?"
 
"Kyunghee"
 
"Kyuhyun goes there"
 
"He does?"
 
"Yea"
 
"That’s strange, I never noticed him, wait what department is he in ?"
 
"Post-Modern Music"
 
“Guys… I’m right here”
 
“Sorry Kyu” Siwon said 
 
"Oh, I'm in the science and math department"
 
"Really? What do you plan on doing with your future?"
 
"I'm training to become a doctor"
 
"Oh that's like Sammy except she's a nurse"
 
"Really? I didn't know that"
 
"Okay guys were here" the manager said interrupting us
 
"This is my first time at a photo shoot, this is so exciting" Hae-mi said. Whoa, looks like she got comfortable with us, she's talking a lot more now.
 
"Hope you enjoy"
 
"Hehe, I'm sure I will, I'll try not to get in your way"
 
We got in the building and began with work right away. I was so caught up in work, I forgot Hae-mi was there but when I saw her, she was talking to manager hyung
 
"Okay now for the single shots, Heechul your first, Donghae your next, then Leeteuk, then Siwon, then Eunhyuk, then Kyuhyun. After that we'll do pairings" the photographer said
 
Heechul went up and the others took a break.
 
"Hae-mi-shii" Eunhyuk said
 
"Nae, ah you can call me Hae-mi"
 
"Can you dance?"
 
"I used to dance"
 
"Used to?” he asked
 
She pointed to her stomach
 
"Ahhh ~ then maybe after birth you can show me your skills"
 
"Ha-ha sure, I’d love to dance again"
 
"Can you sing?" Kyuhyun asked
 
"I used to be called Beyoncé at my school"
 
"REALLY??"
 
"Uhuh, in all of our year books, in the end where we would collect signatures, everyone always said something about how I sang.”
 
"Whoa, then when we go back to practice after this can you sing a song?"
 
"Sure"
 
"Do you believe in god?" Siwon finally asked
 
"I was on my way to becoming an atheist until I met Donghae"
 
"Really?"
 
"Yes, he gave me courage and I honestly believe that meeting him was gods wish"
 
"Sweet Shisus, thank heavens you met Donghae"
 
"Ha-ha yea"
 
"Donghae you’re up"
 
"Okay" I said going to the photography area
 
"So Hae-mi what did you make?" Leeteuk asked
 
"I made lots and lots and lots of food” Hae-mi said while moving her arms (using body language to show the word lots) (a/n does that even make sense ?)
 
"Ha-ha okay okay"
 
Soon everyone was done and it was already time to go
 
"Kamsamnida you've worked hard today" we said
 
---no one’s POV---
 
"Okay now that everyone's here let's decide on what we want to do" Leeteuk said
 
"I want to eat" Shindong said
 
"Me too"
 
"But you might throw up if you eat and then dance"
 
"True"
 
"Then let's have practice and then"
 
"Yea we have break later"
 
"Okay then let's just eat then. Now let's get to work"
 
"Oh yea Hae-mi said that she would sing"
 
"Not right now, you have to practice, maybe during a five minute break i will"
 
"Okay okay"
 
"Then let's get to practice"
 
"HWAITING" Hae-mi said cheering us on
 
"Hehe thanks" most of us said while the others smiled
 
~10 minutes into practice
 
"Ya you’re not doing this right!"
 
"What am I supposed to do?"
 
"Go like this"
 
"Ani eunhyuk isn't he supposed to go like this?"
 
"Huh?"
 
"Try it"
 
Kyuhyun did as told by Hae-mi
 
"Oh so it's like this not like this?" Kyuhyun said
 
"Uhuh"
 
"When it comes to explaining I'm not the best"
 
"Ha-ha its okay"
 
~ 50 minutes later
 
"Okay guys break"
 
"Whoa, that took a while"
 
"Yea, it's usually like this"
 
"Here I got you water bottles"
 
"Kumawo"
 
"Aniayo, you worked hard, you deserve it"
 
"Kumawo Nuna" Sungmin said in his cute aegyo voice. Wait. Nuna? Isn't he older?
 
"A-ani, w-wait aren’t you older than me" I said
 
"Doesn’t matter! Im calling you Nuna"
 
"I don't like being older" Hae-mi said back in aegyo voice while pouting
 
"Whoa, she's good at aegyo" siwon said looking at Hae-mi
 
Sungmin pouted "fine"
 
"Kumawo oppa" she smiled
 
Sungmin, who was pouting, couldn't help but smile. I can't help but feel a little jealous, my feels -.-
 
"Guys breaks over" Leeteuk said 
 
"Oh hey!" Heechul said facing the door
 
"Hey" Changmin replied
 
"Yunhooooo OPPPPAA!!" Alex said
 
"Alexxxx" Yunho said back
 
"Donghaeee" I said butting in, hehe ~ love being the older brother
 
Alex pouted then turned away from me and went back to talking to Yunho
 
"Oppa, I want you to meet someone!"
 
"Who is it??"
 
"Hae-mi, she's Donghae’s wife to be" Alex said with a smile
 
I looked over at Kyuhyun who was absorbed into his computer. Kyu you have got to watch Alex.
 
Suddenly Kyuhyun got up and walked towards them.
 
"Oh! Its Changmin hyung!!" Kyuhyun said
 
"Kyuhyun!!!!!" Changmin said back
 
We would have continued talking but we had practice, Hae-mi and Alex went to outside with Yunho and Changmin.
 
Hae-mi POV
 
"Hae-mi, you get to meet them earlier than I thought"
 
Who is she talking about??
 
"This is Changmin" she said pointing to one guy
 
"And this is Yunho" she said pointing to the other
 
"Guys this is Hae-mi"
 
I blushed, "An young" I said bowing
 
"Anyoung we are tvxq/dbsk" they said back
 
"Hae-mi, they’re the ones that sang that song about the girl getting married"
 
"REALLY!" Oh my... Oh why must I be a goner for hot guys? Cannot contain my feels 
 
"So I heard that you and Donghae are getting married"
 
"Nae"
 
"Oh by the way, were really close friends, so don't be shy"
 
"Nae~" I said openly
 
"How’s Donghae treating you?"
 
"Pretty good" I said truth to be told, he leaves me alone way too much, that's why I tagged along. I need to socialize!
We talked for a bit but then they had to go.
 
"Aren’t they so cute?"
 
"Ha-ha yea, they are. Alex, I thought there were three other guys"
 
"JYJ (Jaejoong, Yoochun and Junsu) filed law suit against SM entertainment." she said looking sad now
 
"So they left"
 
"I guess"
 
"It’s okay; there will be a day when all of dbsk stands together on stage"
 
"I think so too"
 
"Let’s go back, the guys must be wondering about our whereabouts."
 
"Ha-ha yea, let’s go unni!" Alex said
 
~ I love that child, she is so nice. She's the first one to accept me after all this crap, I just love her like my own little sister. Kyuhyun, you better not hurt my cute dongseng
 
"Unni, have you bought clothes or toys for the baby?" Alex asked
 
"Ani, I want to wait until we can all go"
 
"Awe, that’s so sweet, okay during lunch let's go make plans with the guys, and see if they have a schedule for the rest of the week"
 
"Ani, it's okay if no one can make it, its okay if it's just me, you, uki, Sammy and maybe Donghae"
 
"Okay! Would you mind if the other guys tagged along?"
 
"I would never ever ever mind." I said as I smiled, I like to be around people so the more the merrier.
 
We reached the practice room only to find SHINee and the SuJu members sitting in one huge circle
"What’s going on" Alex asked
 
"Huh oh umm nothing. Just um planning" Donghae said
 
"Really?"
 
"Yea"
 
"What were you talking about?"
 
"Guy stuff" eunhyuk said
 
"Oh it's SHINee! Key oppa, did you eat it yet?"
 
"Ani, we were kind of waiting for you" Key said as he got up.
 
"Awe" Hae-mi said as she went up to hug him.
 
"Then let's eat with everyone"
 
"Of course!"
 
"Wait guys did practice end yet?" Alex asked
 
"Yea, like two minutes ago" yesung said
 
"Let’s go, Hae-mi, so... Did you make chicken"
 
"Jinki oppa why would you ask?" I said sarcastically
 
"Ara ara" (a/n I wanted her to say "I know I know")
 
"Then it's a yes? It's a yes?? Yay CHICKEN!"
 
"Ha-ha, oppa, you’re so weird"
 
"Ya- is this what a dongseng should say to a Sunbae" Heechul started
 
"He’s my older brother" I casually said
 
"WHAT!!" everyone said
 
"Ya! Why did you never tell me? Aish! Ya!!! I'm so pissed how come I didn't know about this??" Key said as he sped up to face me 
 
"Key!? Calm down! It's called a joke"
 
"Ya!"
"He’s my best friend"
 
"Pwahahahaha~ did you guys see Donghae’s face??" Shindong laughed
 
"Priceless! I tell you priceless" eunhyuk said high fiving Shindong, who was almost crying on the ground from laughter
 
"Y-ya!" Donghae said trying to say something
 
"I'm going to eat your food if you don't stop"
 
"Ha-ha guys stop stop, it was meant to be a joke"
 
"Let’s move on"
 
"So I wanted to ask you guys if you guys were free any day sometime this month or well next month”
 
"We’re free on the 15th" the manager hyung said. I really dont know why, but calling him hyung rather than oppa is easier for me.
 
"Really? Yay" Alex said and looked at me with her thumb up
 
I smiled, yay, more bonding time means more time with Donghae, which means me winning the bet because I'll make him fall in love with me instantly. I smiled as we got to the cafeteria, and looked for the biggest table possible to fit at least 25 people.
When we finally found one, everyone opened up the lunch boxes and started eating.
 
"Hae-mi, this is really good"
 
"Kumawo"
 
"Where did you learn to cook this?” 
 
“I saw it somewhere and I thought it would taste good so I made it, and plus, I don’t like eating out a lot and there was no one to make me homemade food so I’ve always had too cook for myself.”
 
“So you’ve been cooking for a really long time?”
 
“13 years, yea”
 
“No wonder you’re so good!”
 
“But it wasn’t just me, Alex, Uki and Sammy make food too”
 
“This is why women are a blessing”
 
“Ya! Is cooking all were meant for?”
 
“Ani! Take Kyuhyun for example, he can’t cook”
 
“I can! It’s just that ionlymakeediblefoodformyself”
 
“What??” 
 
“Nothing, so Hae-mi do you play StarCraft?”
 
“Ani well I mean I know how to play…wae?”
 
“REALLY? Another star crafter!!!”
 
“Ha-ha”
 
“Hae-mi did you and Donghae pick a name for your baby?”
 
“Not yet, well we came up with a list”
 
“Ahhh really”
 
“Yea, do you guys want to go shopping for baby clothes and stuff on the 15th of next month”
 
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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)