Girls are violent.

Is this fate or a dream ?

Uki pov

I know they're in love; it's kinda obvious to everyone. I mean remember the date they went on at the amusement park? Donghae was so jealous it was so cute, and then that whole restaurant thing happened, it was so cute seeing him all defensive like that

"Guys!!!" I shouted, calling everyone out.

It was almost noon, and they were all awake.

One by one they all came to the enormous living room

"What is it Uki?"

"Let’s go to the park" I said

"But I wanna play StarCraft" Kyuhyun whined

"Okay but I'll make sure Alex dresses up so some other guy, who doesn’t give more importance to games, can have her."

"No I'm going" he said quickly "I'm defiantly going"

I could tell he was imagining some weird scenario

"Hey, has anyone seen void?"

"Void?" Hae mi asked

"VOID" I yelled

Oh I think we forgot to tell him about the move

....

"Let’s find void first"

"Hae mi at all costs avoid void"

"Waeyo?" she said tilting her head

"He is evil. Pure evil. So evil that it’s not even evil anymore" Donghae said 

"Ya, now you’re exaggerating"

"He’s not that bad"

"Lies"

"What am I supposed to do? Sell out my friend?" Kyuhyun pouted 

"Kyuhyun has friends?" Sungmin’s said causing everyone to laugh

"In fact I have a girlfriend unlike you guys and I've got more friends than the number of OTP's in suju" Kyuhyun boasted

"Yea, well I have a fiancé and more friends considering the fact that I've lived longer then you" Donghae smirked

I looked at Hae mi; her cheeks that were normally rosy pink were now a deeper shade of red

"Enough, enough" Leeteuk, the peace-maker said

"Let’s find void and then go to the park"

We all got dressed and headed out

"Uki were gonna take your car right?" Siwon asked me

"Well duh, don't we always?"

"Sheesh just asking"

"Okay then, everyone set?"

"Nae~" everyone said, magically being able to fit inside my car

'Operation bring them together has just begun' I smirked

We have like three couples already, Alex and Kyuhyun, Donghae and Hae mi, Sammy and Henry, and as for me? I'm single. Don't wanna go through drama again~

The dorm wasn't too far from the mansion so we reached there quickly

"Who wants to go?"

“And get killed? Are you kidding me? No!”

“Dare defy me and I’ll kill you”

“I’m going, I’m going sheesh” Kyuhyun said walking ahead of everyone

We all chuckled as he grumbled on, walking ahead of us, to the dorm

 

KYUHYUN POV

 

Aish, I sure have some nice friends, pushing me into the angry lion’s den

I knocked on the door a couple of times, hoping he would be there

“Void?” “Anyone home?” I asked

I unlocked the door and found a sleeping figure in the living room

Sheesh this guy and his sleeping habits

“Void wake up” I said nudging him

“mhhm”

“Void”

“No”

“Void” I said as an evil plan formulated in my head

“n- WHO THE DID THAT?” Void yelled after he had fallen to the ground

“None other than your beloved EvilKyu” I said forming a heart with my hands

“Kyu?” he looked at me confused, he got up, blinked a few times and when he could finally see, anger spread across his face.

“YA! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING LEAVING ME WITHOUT A KEY FOR ALMOST TWO DAYS?”

“DON’T YOU DARE THINK YOU’RE GOINGTO LIVE AFTER THIS. I HAD TO GET ATTACKED BY A BUNCH OF CRAZY AND ERTED FANGIRLS, GOT YELLED AT BY ING LEE SOO MAN OR WHATEVER THE HELL HIS NAME IS, JUST TO GET THE ING KEY. DON’T YOU DARE TELL ME TO CALM THE DOWN”

“At least be considerate of the baby” Donghae said walking in

“WHAT BABY? I DON’T SEE A BABY. YA LEE DONGHAE ARE YOU PREGNANT?”

“NO!!! My wife is” he exclaimed

He looked at Donghae with a suspicious look on his face

“SO KYUHYUN IS PREGNANT?”

“SHUT UP ALREADY” Alex said exploding

“Void calm down okay we-“

“CALM DOWN? CALM THE DOWN? YOU GUYS DIDN’T EVEN BOTHER CHECKING YOUR PHONES, AM I CORRECT? I AM SO UTTERLY PISSED THAT YOU GUYS LEFT ME WITHOUT A KEY. I HAD TO WAIT 8 ING HOURS” Void complained

“Shut up. No one cares. You’re hurting my ears” Hae-Mi said walking up to void who looked like he was about to blow up

“Yah who-“ Void was about to say  

“Raise your voice one more time and I’ll have you decapitated”

“But.”

“You guys are wrong too.”

“But Hae miiii” Donghae complained

“What if he got ? What if someone tried to hurt or rob him?”

“He’d escape”

Hae mi glared at Heechul

“Aren’t you his brother?”

“Yea”

“Then act like one”

“Shirro”

“This is a different side of you Hae mi”

“Nope, it’s always been like this, once I’m pissed I’m pissed, and if someone really makes me angry, someone’s going to die or at the very least lose a limb”

“Why are all the girls in this family so violent?” I sighed

“Excuse me? Is there a problem” Uki said glaring at me

“There now everything settled” Hae mi smiled

 “Let’s say what we originally wanted to say” Sungmin tried to make things better

“Wait before anything; I’d like to know where you were for the past few months”

“I told you guys, I was over dealing with some things I had left unfinished”

“Like what?"

"Like something that doesn't concern you"

"Boy shut up before I cut that tongue out"

 

DONGHAE POV

 

She’s being weird, almost like a complete 180 degrees change

After Void had packed his belongings from the dorm and was ready to move into the mansion, we all left the dorm.

"Uki is driving"

"Just because you said that, it doesn’t mean that I'll obey"

"Shut up. I just wanna get to the park and enjoy a little god damned picnic" Alex said

"Picnic" we all looked at her confused

She pouted

"Why do you want a picnic?" I asked

"Hae’s stupid he doesn't remember" she mumbled to herself

"I heard that"

"Maybe you were supposed to"

"Is there any time that you guys are neutral?" Hae mi asked

"I wish" Alex sighed

"Ya!" I pouted

"Stop. Yelling." Uki said impatiently

"Haha- ah appa" Hae mi whispered in pain and rubbed her stomach, which by the way was getting bigger by the day.

"What? What happened!?  Are you okay? Are you dying? Did aliens take over you" I asked worriedly

She smiled weakly "yea, just that they're kicking me"

"Who? Hyung don’t kick her! You might hurt my babies!" I exclaimed

"Ya Ya shut up, she means that the babies are moving around in her stomach"

My mouth formed an 'O'

She smiled at me and took my hand and rubbed her tummy with my hand

I felt a slight kick and instantly smiled, I felt so happy I almost cried

*CLICK*


 

Heyy readers <3 

u guys have no idea hpw much i missed updating !!! Summer is here so i can update all i want without anything (but writers block) stopping me from updating ^^ im so happy 

thanks for waiting <3 

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Thank you SPAMMMMMMMM

 

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i honestly feel like the next chapter is boring.... (ch 29)

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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)