A cute necklace

Is this fate or a dream ?

 

Our stop arrived soon and I managed to somehow get Donghae out of the bus. We sat on a bench and waited for the members to pick him up since I clearly could not carry him to the dorm. 

"One day I will buy a house." Donghae started out of the blue “One day, for me" he continued in his sleep "....and you" he whispered 

I saw a familiar van stop in front of us 

"Hae mi? Get in the car, Kangin and the others will take care of this" Sungmin asked removing his shades for a quick second, while pointing to Donghae  

"Nae" I replied. I left Donghae in Siwon and Kangin's care and sat in the car 

"What's wrong? You look down" Eunhyuk asked 

"It's nothing" 

"So... nothing makes you upset?" 

"No" I smiled "I guess I'm just tired" 

"Oh okay, we'll be home in about 5 to ten minutes and since Sungmin is driving I can assure you that no one is going to die" 

"Okay" I chuckled 

The ride was quick and quiet. The entire time I couldn't help but think about the things Donghae said 

Suddenly a phone rang 

"Ah Nae, manager Hyung? ..." Eunhyuk said answering his phone 

"Nae... Kure? (Really) Nae Nae I'll tell Heechul Hyung" 

"What happened?" 

"Something came up so some of us need to go back to the SM building; Heechul isn't required to be there so he can take you home while the rest of us go straight there"

"Looks like me and you get to spend some quality time together" Heechul said 

I smiled at his words. I like Heechul, he's nice and he knows my situation 

"My fiancé!!!!" Donghae yelled in his sleep scaring the crap out of everyone  

"..." 

"Donghae?" 

"Don’t worry Hae mi, he does that in his sleep" Sungmin said as Eunhyuk nodded 

They dropped Heechul and I off near the dorm 

"Wanna look at the new jewelry shop that just opened? Oppa will buy something for you" 

"Oppa?" 

"Yea, oppa, were close now, so you can call me oppa. Call me oppa now" he demanded  asked

"Heechul oppa" I said shyly 

"Good now let's go" 

We walked to the jewelry shop which was surprisingly only three blocks away from where we were. 

I entered the small yet cute jewelry shop and stood there in amazement. 

"Hae mi? You’re going to have to pay if I can't get in" Heechul said tapping my shoulder 

I realized I was standing at the entrance and quickly moved out of his way 

"Sorry" I quickly said 

"It's okay. Let's look around" he said as I replied with a nod

Waaaaaa everything here is so cute I thought as my eyes widened 

"Kyeopta (it’s cute)" I said looking at this cute locket in the Shape of a lock with a key, the lock had the words 'love' written on it

for some reason Hae mi couldn't stop looking at it, it captivated her eyes. 

Heechul saw the sparkly look in Hae mi's eyes and picked up the locket immediately

"Oppa what are you doing" I asked Heechul 

"Do you like it?" 

"It's just cute" 

"Then oppa will buy it for you" 

"But op..." 

"Don't try to stop me now. Oppa has made up his mind" 

I giggled at his childish behavior 

"Okay okay" I said giving up. 

He bought me the locket and put it on me 

"It looks prettier on you than it does on the shelf" Heechul said making me blush 

"Oppaaa~" I complained 

We walked out and he took me home 

"Don't you have a schedule?" 

"Huh? Oh yea... but I still have a spare 30 minutes before I have to be there"

We entered the dorm which was quieter than usual and darker too

I turned around and I couldn’t find Heechul anywhere 

"Um o...okay" I said stuttering 

It was getting darker outside by the minute and it scared the crap out of me because of the eerie atmosphere 

"Where are you people when I need you" I said as I closed the door behind me and the lights 

"I am in the right house right?" I said as the lights  

A couple hours passed and I was in my room when I heard the door open and close loudly 

I went out of my room to see who it was but there was no one in the room 

Maybe I’m just hearing things I thought as I turned around 

Then suddenly something heavy fell on me

I almost crashed to the ground from the sudden impact, but I managed to stay strong and stand still. What if it was the Joker??? 

WHAT THE HE'LL IS THIS? Is someone trying to kill me? 

Aish so heavy 

Aish I'm going to fall if this continues; my babies were enough weight to carry now I've got something on my back. 

Something. Something is on my back and it smelt like alcohol too 

I made a face when I realized that it was soju 

Finally it hit me. 

My eyes widened in fear. Is there a in the dorm?

"Ha...ha Heechul oppa this is very funny. Please get off of me" I laughed nervously as the figure slowly hugged me and laid its chin on my shoulder... (A back hug?) 

"O...ppa?" I asked turning around and found a sleeping Donghae on my back. 

"Holy mother of shisus" I said in relief and shock 

"Donghae-ah" I said 

No answer 

"Donghae Can you get off of me?"

Still no movement 

"Donghae" I said finally giving up and pulling him to the nearest thing, the sofa

I look at Donghae who was wide awake but still drunk. he was forcing himself to stay up on the sofa 

I went to the kitchen and got Donghae a hangover drink to make him sober again 

"Donghae-ah drink this" I said passing the drink to him 

I felt like he was going to drop the drink on the floor any minute and from his expression he looked ticked off 

"Ani! Why don't you call me oppa? You call everyone else oppa... But me? No! Whenever were alone you don't call me oppa" 

"You want me to call you oppa" I said looking at him in the eye

He nodded his head 

"Why?" I asked him who was almost asleep 

"Because I l...." he began talking in his sleep 

"Oppa wake up I'll take you to the room" I said after realizing the time

I got up from the sofa and dragged Donghae (with much difficulty) to our room 

He was sweating a lot so I decided to call someone to ask them to change him 

"Oppa when are you coming home?" I asked Leeteuk oppa 

"Me and the others have to stay here for another two or more hours wae?"

"Ani it's just that Donghae is drunk and he needs to change clothes and I was wondering if someone could change his clothes for me" 

"What’s the big deal? I mean haven't you already seen him once like that? Be careful once he's drunk it's difficult to wake him up" Leeteuk said. I blushed; in reality I've never seen him like that so this would be considered the first time 

"Op..." he hung up on me 

I pouted and looked at the sleeping and uncomfortable Donghae 

"Oppa" I shook him 

"Oppa change your pants" I said as he moved around 

"No" 

"Donghae Oppaaa" I whined 

It took me thirty minutes just to get him to wake up 

"Oppa put these pants on" I said handing him his pajama pants

"Wae?" he asked me 

"Because it’s hot and you’re sweating" I answered 

"Meh." he made an annoyed whinny face 

"Oppa just put on the pants" I said and he quickly unbuckled his belt 

WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!!!! I blushed  

I quickly turned around before I saw anything 

I may not be a but I defiantly act as if I am. I mean I don't even remember my first time so..... 

More a few minutes passed I asked "oppa are you done" but I didn't hear anything so I turned around covering my eyes and peeking just a little bit 

I was disappointed at what I saw. Sure he wore his pants but he went back to sleep. Aish This troll

I decided not to bother waking him up anymore and just changed his shirt for him 

Damn he has abs... I thought he was just... 

I need to stop TT.TT 

A few minutes later I was all done and I went to the kitchen to make food for the others but then I got a call from Ryeowook saying that they already ate so I shouldn't bother cooking for them 

"This just means I can sleep earlier" I sighed out loud 

I went to out room and found Donghae sleeping like a baby cuddling with a pillow... 

"Just like a kid" I said as I lay down next to him 

My back faced him and I began to fall asleep 

I woke up when I felt the babies move in my stomach, I looked around and figured it was around 6:45 in the morning 

I stayed in place, rubbing my stomach gently, while talking to my babies, of course not out loud. 

"Aigoo your moving already? Are you that excited to see us?" 

When it was 6:55 when I got out of bed and took and nice warm shower and got dressed. I went back to the room and Donghae was nowhere to be found 

I just shrugged it off and went to the kitchen, no one was awake yet, or so I thought so I decided to make everyone breakfast. 

One by one Everyone made their way to the table 

I set up breakfast with the help of Hangeng, Ryeowook, Alex, Sammy, Uki, Henry, Sungmin and Siwon.

~ We ate and then everyone got ready to leave 

"When will you be back?" I asked Leeteuk

"We’re going to be together till the end so sometime late" Leeteuk replied 

"Oh okay" I just nodded as they left. Actually the few people that remained were Henry Hangeng and Zhou mi. I understand about Henry and Zhou mi but why is hangeng here not that I don't like him or anything 

"Hangeng don't you have a schedule?" I asked 

"Huh... oh no it got canceled" he stuttered obviously faking a smile 

"You know if something is bothering you, you can always talk to me" I offered 

"Trust me when you talk to her it feels like your talking to your mother" henry said as he ate a panda cracker 

Just then Ryeowook, Leeteuk and Yesung entered 

I pouted and said "ani it's you who acts like such a kid" 

"It really makes a person feel better" 

"Your speaking as of you know" 

"Of course! Remember when I got sick? Hae mi noona stayed with me until I got better and while she was with me she kept talking to me saying it's alright and 'do you need anything'" 

After coming back from his room (Yesung and Leeteuk were waiting for him) Ryeowook came out with his Wallet and phone while overhearing the entire conversation 

"Oh! I remember when some things happened at home so I wasn't eating properly. Noona barely knew me but she could tell something was wrong and somehow she made me confess and tell her what was wrong! It's the first time anyone has ever been able to make me say how I truly truly feel" 

"Ya Kim Ryeowook does that mean you lied to us?" Yesung pouted 

"Ani. I just don’t tell you the entire detail" Ryeowook said as he stuck his tongue out 

"Yaaaa~ I thought we were brothers" Zhou mi whined 

"We are, ha-ha, I was kidding. Only you guys can make me speak my true mind" Ryeowook answered honestly 

"I was scared for a second, like wookie doesn't trust us??? Otteoke" Yesung said 

"Hyung!! Who else do I have beside you guys?" 

We all laughed 

"So Gege you should talk to her if something's on your mind" Zhou mi continued

"He he I'm a counselor in training" I said 

"I thought you were a doctor" Henry asked 

"I'm still deciding"

"ohh~" 

"I feel so envious of you guys. Everyone knows what they are good at and what they want to do" 

"Yea but it didn't just come to us. It was a long and hard process; finally we firmly stand in our places after a long and ongoing battle. " 

"Leeteuk that was beautiful" 

"Speeches are my specialty" he said as we burst out laughing 

"Aish were almost late, bye guys" Ryeowook said as he looked at his watch 

"Anyoung have a safe trip guys best of luck" I said quickly to them as they left and then turned to face Zhou mi Henry and Hangeng 

I cut some fruit while we all talked. We ate the fruit and Henry was imitating Eunhyuk who was all like 'my strawberries' like an old greedy man and his money, I laughed so much at his facial expression. He looked like Heebum (Heechul's cat) I wonder how Eunhyuk looks when his strawberries are taken from him 

~

An hour passed and Hangeng came to me who was in the kitchen 

"Umm... They kind of forced me to... C... Ca... Can we talk?" he asked as he diverted his eyes away from me while looking at the ground fidgeting his fingers. 

"Of course" I said with excitement on my face as I turned off the stoves 

"To the roof?" I asked and he just nodded 

"Hold up I'm going to get a jacket, it's getting chilly out there"

"It’s May..." 

"It is?" 

"Nae" 

"Oh. Ha-ha look at that I forgot what month it was" 

He just looked at me funny

"Let’s pretend that never happened" I said embarrassed causing him to chuckle at my actions 

I just pouted 

"Kaja" I said 

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Mind if i spam u guys with ss5? tobad already done XD 

hes a derp, we all know it by now XD 

WHAT HAPPENED TO SUNGMIN KYU??? WHAT HAPPENED TO THE LOVE OF KYUMIN????????????????????????????????????????????????? 

CAPTION: SUNGMINNIE WHERE ARE YOU???? THAT PICTURE ABOIVE WAS A LIE !!!!!! 

CAPTION: no kyu. its over, you obviously chose her 

CAPTION: Will a kiss do? 

what if suju saw all the werid macro's weve made, by weird i mean erted XD 

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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)