Uki-Donghae talk

Is this fate or a dream ?

FLASHBACK

[Back to when Hae mi was first introduced to us] 

"... And I'm pregnant with his child" she said 

I glared at Donghae, giving him the we-need-to-talk-ASAP look

Donghae. You are so dead. Poor girl.

After we ate I signaled Donghae to get his into my room 

I entered first waiting about two minutes until he came, closing the door behind him 

"Ya lee Donghae what is this about?" I Exploded 

"What?" he asked 

"That Hae mi chick" I glared at him 

"My girlfriend" he said cowering under fear 

"Oh really" I said 

"y-yes" he stuttered 

I smirked. He's lying 

"Okay" I said 

He probably did something stupid. 

"Treat her like your unnie okay and don't over work her since she's pregnant" "Donghae it's not that, it's just that, how in the world did you manage to get her pregnant?" 

"Through... Um... A... Contact?" he looked at me 

I looked at him 

"Eww Ya Donghae how old do you think I am? Ugh what I mean to say is that if you announce this you're screwed, and maybe she's screwed too because you just not only put your life in danger but also hers and your child's. You know how crazy some ELFs can get" I said 

"Yea but I mean they respect you and Alex,.." 

"yea because they only know as us as Uki Seohee Choi, choi Siwon’s sister and Alex seohee lee, lee Donghae’s sister, not as Kyuhyun’s girlfriend!!" 

"Oh damn your right" 

"I'm Uki, I'm always right" I smiled 

"But... I mean I don't want it to get ugly later, like imagine my 4 year old child getting hate comments because of his Umma and appa" he said 

This time he's right. 

"Fine. But you have to tell them ASAP" I said

"I have to tell Umma, she's gonna throw a fit about not telling her earlier" 

"Do her parents know?" 

"Yea" 

"okay then when the wedding is" we have busy schedules right now so...." 

"So you’re gonna wait until after promotions to get married?" 

"Yea"

"Seems like a plan, I'm not all that into that kinda stuff so I don't know how she feels about this" 

"Ha-ha so Uki like" 

"Oh hush" 

"Umm can I ask you a favor? Her family lives, well not to close to here, well actually I think they left her to go on a vacation or something, so she can't really see them ...." and he went on and on and on about that forever

"Donghae get to the point already" I state impatiently

"... And oh umm my point? My point is that I don’t wanna see her feeling left out" 

"Not gonna let that happen" 

"I got myself a new unnie and soon to be dongseng no more like a cousin" nahh I like the sound of dongseng better 

He laughed and walked out to go to bed 

 

-End of flashback-

 

-2 hours after both Hae mi and Donghae fell asleep- 

"Ya Donghae wake up" I whispered 

"mufffngmms" 

"I'm gonna kick your sorry if you don't wake up this minute, I'm giving you 60 seconds. 50 more then I usually do, be thankful and wake up" I said 

"I'm up I'm up" Donghae said sleepily looking around to find me with a silver bat in my hand 

I mouthed "follow me" 

He nodded and rubbed his eyes 

I came out first and waited for him to come out

"Wae Uki why'd you wake me up?" he asked upset 

"Cuz! That we clearly need to have a talk" 

"About what?" 

"About you" 

"What about me" 

"You and Hae-mi" 

"Why" 

"I need to know some things since I'm confused" 

"About what" 

"When are you getting married?" 

"Next, next week" 

"When’s her delivery" 

".... In four more months" 

"So in September" 

"Can I go to sleep now?" 

"Rest assured buddy, you got a long day coming your way" 

"What" I said pushing him back to his room


This might be my last update until June 14 thanks to finals, sorry guys =( 

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i honestly feel like the next chapter is boring.... (ch 29)

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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)