A new member

Is this fate or a dream ?

They turned their heads in unison looking at me, the mastermind behind all of this 

 

"What are you..."

 

"Come on, you couldn’t possibly have forgotten to take pictures while she’s pregnant right! Dear Donghae! You seriously need to learn, these kinds of things are memorable and important later on in life" I sighed

 

This Pabo really... Why is he called the romantic on in suju? 

 

Hae mi chuckled at the abrupt silence 

 

"Why so serious guys? Let's have fun while we can" she said

 

We all went back to the livelier, happier atmosphere while Alex and Sungmin were taking pictures in the car 

 

 

 

DONGHAE POV 

 

We got out of the car and I helped Hae mi out, both of us were blushing as our hands touched 

 

I held her waist and walked her over to the spot where our picnic would be held 

 

"Hae mi ah, is this a good place?" I asked her 

 

She nodded her head in approval

 

"Today’s a good day" she said stretching her arms up 

 

"Unnie do you want to walk?" 

 

"Sure" she replied 

 

"Uki! Alex I need help" Siwon and Kyuhyun yelled 

 

"Maybe not" Uki said 

 

"Miyanhae unnie" Alex said as they both ran over to Siwon and Kyuhyun 

 

Hae mi pouted 

 

"I'll walk with you" I said offering her my hand 

 

"You guys go on a lovey dovy date and we'll do all the other work" Sungmin said 

 

"Where’s Shindong Hyung?" 

 

"I think he told me that he was going to get Nari Noona" 

 

"Awe" 

 

"We have so many cute couples" 

 

"Kyuhyun and Alex, Donghae and Haemi, Shindong and Nari, Henry and Sammy" Uki said 

 

I stuck my tongue out at them and walked away with Hae mi 

 

 

 

AUTHORS POV/NO ONES POV 

 

 

 

They were walking around the large park, neither of them spoke. Everyone around them could tell how nervous they were 

 

"Um ah are you tired" Donghae asked 

 

"Ani~ this is quite refreshing, seeing how I haven't been at a park since like ever" Hae mi replied casually 

 

Despite her casual reply, she was blushing madly because Donghae was still holding her hand. Not wanting to let go she held on to his hand. 

 

"Then do you think we should head back? Knowing Shindong and Eunhyuk they wouldn’t wait for us and start eating all the food without us" Donghae said thinking of his friends eating all of his food 

 

"Then we better hurry" Hae mi replied playfully 

 

The walked by this playground, which they didn't pay attention to at first, and saw a little boy sitting on the bench, crying 

 

"Omo what's wrong" Hae mi asked the little boy 

 

He didn't reply, he was crying even harder 

 

"Awe it’s okay" Hae mi said sitting down beside the little boy and rubbed his back

 

"Umma" he cried rubbing the tears in his eyes away 

 

"Did you lose your Umma?" 

 

"UMMA" the boy screamed but no one around us paid any attention 

 

"I'll help you find Umma! Don't you worry" Hae mi said hugging the little boy 

 

She picked him up and said soothing words to him until he finally stopped crying 

 

"What’s your name?" Hae mi asked 

 

"l-lee Mi-in Hyuk" he said in-between breaths 

 

"I'm Hae mi, and this is Donghae" 

 

"Don’t worry, Hyung and Noona will find your Umma" 

 

"Donghae call the guys and tell them that we might not be there on time" 

 

"Okay" he said pulling out his phone 

 

"Kyu, something came up and um we have to take care of it so we might come back later than expected, tell the others Arasso" Donghae said 

 

"Arasso but Hyung where are you" 

 

"At the playground on the left" 

 

"We haven't really set up our things since it's only been like what ten minutes so we'll just come to you. Unless you don't want us there" Kyuhyun smirked at the phone 

 

"Ani ani you can come if you want" Donghae defended 

 

"I'll tell the others then" Kyuhyun said ending the call 

 

"What did they say" Hae mi asked, cradling the sleeping boy 

 

"Kyu said that they'll be coming here" 

 

"But wouldn't that be too much of a pain?" 

 

"I tried telling them but they didn't really listen, or rather Kyu didn't listen" 

 

10 minutes later, the gang (suju) came but there seemed to be no sign of the boy’s mother 

 

"Who is this" Kangin asked 

 

"Oh my god Noona you had your baby?" Henry asked 

 

"No no no I met him today too" Hae mi defended 

 

"What happened?" Uki asked 

 

"I think he got lost" Donghae replied 

 

"Donghae I don't think he's lost. He's probably abandoned, seeing how there’s a note on the bench saying 'take care of him' “Uki said 

 

".... Oh my" Donghae responded 

 

"Shisus how can a mother do that?" Siwon sighed pinching the bridge of his nose 

 

"Hey don't tell me you didn't notice the box under the bench" Uki asked as Shindong pulled it out 

 

"Wow. Just, wow." Sungmin said looking at the ton of stuff in the box 

 

Everyone stared at the now sleeping two year old, whose mother had abandoned him just hours earlier while he was most likely playing in the park, while he nuzzled into Hae mi's neck 

 

"Can we take care of him? Please?" 

 

"I think it's best if you figured out who the mother of him is" Ryeowook said

 

"No. They left him behind; I don't think they deserve to have him back" Hae mi said 

 

"I wouldn't ever abandon my child, young old half dead immobile anything!" Alex exclaimed in rage 

 

"How could someone just abandon a helpless child, not even to the orphanage but at a park?" 

 

The little boy woke up, crying after seeing everyone's face. It was as if everyone was a monster to him.

 

Donghae took him from Hae mi's arms and held him so that he could face Hae mi

 

"Minhyuk-ah, Umma can't come anymore so you're going to be staying with me" 

 

The boy stopped crying and listened to Hae mi's sweet voice as she spoke to him 

 

He stopped and then began crying again, looking as if he wanted a hug from Hae mi

 

"Noona I think he wants to be held by you" Ryeowook said 

 

"Looks like he found his new mom" Henry said 

 

We all laughed 

 

"I'll introduce you to ddang and the gang!" Yesung said excitedly 

 

They all stared at Him weirdly 

 

"Ahh I'm getting hungry, let's eat" 

 

"Food" everyone yelled

 

Everyone was now setting up stuff for the picnic 

 

By the time everyone was done eating and heading back to the car, it was sunset

 

"Today was a long day" 

 

"It was wasn’t it" 

 

"And now we have a new member"

 

"Min Hyuk-ah~" Ryeowook said 

 

Minhyuk had gotten close to everyone and seemed especially attached to Hae mi 

 

When they reached home

 

Hae mi and Donghae took care of the sleeping Minhyuk while Leeteuk announced an urgent meeting 

 

"Guys some things have happened and I think we all need a recap." Leeteuk said after everyone was either sitting on the sofas or the floor 

 

"First off we just had another successful hit Bonamana/Mina" 

 

"We moved into Siwon and Uki's mansion" 

 

"Then we have a wedding to prepare for and attend, which is in less than 2 weeks" 

 

"And now we have a new member added to the family.”

 

"Plus we have two more members coming our way" 

 

"As in members to the band or members to the family" 

 

"Family. I don't think I can take care of anymore people in one band" Leeteuk sighed looking at Kyuhyun 

 

"Thank god Uki Alex Sammy and Hae mi are here. I'd be dead by now" 

 

"You know how I feel now" 

 

"They all laughed and talked some more for a bit but in the end everyone left and went to their respected rooms and went to sleep. 

 

~Meanwhile in Hae mi and Donghae’s room~ 

 

"Are you really okay with having him here?" Hae mi asked

 

"Of course! I love children" Donghae said 

 

"More like you are a child" Hae mi laughed and turned her head towards Minhyuk who was sleeping on their bed 

 

 

 

DONGHAE POV 

 

That boy Minhyuk is absolutely the adorablest thing alive! I don't see why anyone wouldn't want him but who cares about that, he's in good hands now. 

 

"Kumawo" Hae mi said as we lay down on the bed on each side of Minhyuk 

 

"For what?" I asked 

 

"For telling me not to abort the babies, for taking care of me, giving me a place to live, feeding me, for marrying someone like me, for accepting Minhyuk and for letting me meet such wonderful people" she said 

 

"Thank you... I guess" I said 

 

I mean appa would come back to life and beat the crap out of me if I didn't take responsibility and I can't just go off and say 'you take care of it, I'm not part of this' and plus, I like kids and I’ve always wanted to settle down and get married to someone I loved

 

I turned my head to face Hae mi but saw Minhyuk cuddling against her, I pouted and for a moment I wished I could’ve been him


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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)