Finally Married

Is this fate or a dream ?

Ch 37 of FOD 

Wedding

Today's the day huh? 

"Umma Umma do I look cool" Minhyuk asked after changing into his tux

"Whoa so cool!!" I said 

"Umma today you look shupa shupa pretty" he said with his eyes shining

“Awe thanks” I replied 

He’s becoming more and more cheerful, I’m glad that he’s talking a lot more

I was getting ready to walk down the aisle, with every step I took I realized that we were getting closer, I realized that I will become his and he will become mine. My heart was beating out of its cage when I looked up at Donghae who was smiling happily, as if he wanted to get married to me too. My heart beat sped up at the thought. I was now standing in front of him, saying my vows along with him. It was as if it were only Donghae and I

"You may kiss the bride" My heart was beating faster and faster until it completely stopped when Donghae softly kissed me. Everyone was applauding but I couldn't hear anything but my heart pounding against my chest   

We received presents and everything, everyone was saying "congrats" and all and I was really happy. I guess it took a while to get married to him, usually people would marry right away but I think it was because of his schedule. But I really still can’t believe it, I’m married to him now… My heart skipped a beat when Donghae looked at me, I quickly avoided his gaze 

"We have a photo shoot... Umma insisted" he said rubbing the back of his neck

I pouted knowing I at posing "watch me ruin everything" I sighed. He chuckled at my words 

"It’s okay don't think about the camera and have a focus point so you don’t think much about there being a camera on you" he said advising me 

"Omo Hae mi you're good at this" Donghae's mom said 

"Kamsamnida" 

"Donghae hold your son up like this" he said putting Minhyuk on Donghae’s shoulders 

"Um I don't think Minhyuk is comfortable doing that...” I said a bit too quietly 

"Hae mi, stand beside them and hold Minhyuk’s hand and play with him" 

"Minhyuk ah play with your Umma" 

All of us did as told, even Minhyuk to my surprise 

"Aigoo he's so talented" the photographer said looking at Minhyuk 

"Doesn’t he look like lee min ho in a way?" 

"No way!! Lee min ho doesn't have a lover!" 

That's a bit.... No Hae mi... There are many Lee Min Ho's out there!

We got home after a couple of hours 

"Minhyuk Hae mi do you guys wanna eat out" Donghae asked

"Sure why not" I said 

Minhyuk and I got ready while Donghae waited for us 

Since I was in my seventh month of pregnancy my stomach was like a bold and clear siren 

We ate a nice diner with Minhyuk always making a longer conversation than usual between all of us 

Before going to sleep I asked Minhyuk a question

“Minnie, do you want to be a big brother?”

Minhyuk looked confused

“Minhyuk-ah, do you want a little sister and brother?” I rephrased the sentence

He smiled brightly and nodded his head

“Guess what?”

“What?”

“Mommy is bringing home a sister and a brother for you”

“Today?” he asked happily

“Nope not today, not this month but maybe in September” I replied

“Mommy what’s in here” Minhyuk said pointing to my stomach

“A present” I replied watching Minhyuk fall asleep 


its rather short but meh~ 

one more chapter (is what im planning) 

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i honestly feel like the next chapter is boring.... (ch 29)

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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)