KJK

Is this fate or a dream ?

 

Ch. 25 

After finally reaching the coffee house we entered and I immediately saw Jay

"Jay" I said excitedly

"Hae mi?" he asked confusedly looking around until he spotted me at the entrance

I waved at him and he walked over to me, hugging me immediately

"Let’s go take a seat" 

Donghae POV 

"Jay" she said like some fan girl 

"Hae mi?" he asked 

It was like one of those cliché love stories where the two lovers run to each other and hug. 

He saw us or rather her and hugged her immediately

"Let’s go take a seat" 

Why does this person look familiar? I feel like I’ve seen him before... 

Aish so rude, how do you ignore someone like that? 

I followed them to their seat 

"Excuse me ajussi I know my noona is pretty but don't stalk her like this." the Guy supposedly known as 'Jae' said 

"Ajussi? Ya! I'm her husband" I scoffed

"Aigoo? Really? Then I'm her father, please don't take this too far and just leave right now before I call the cops" 

"Jay he really is my husband" 

".. Is this some kind of joke?" he laughed 

"No... Were engaged, he's the person I wanted you to meet" 

"... Are you... Serious?" 

"Yea why would I lie?" 

"..." 

"..." 

I made an 'I-was-right' face  

He quickly straitened his attitude 

"Jisonghaeyo I'm park Jae beum, Hae mi's unrelated younger brother and best guy friend" 

"She has too many guy friends" I sighed. 

You can't blame me, she does. Last time it was Key and before that it was Jiyong

"Don’t worry it's only you and Key" 

"What about me" I pouted

"You too" she laughed 

God she looks beautiful when she laughs

"Hyung-nim please sit down"

"Ah I have to go now, I'm getting late for work" 

"Oh okay. Anyoung Hyung-nim" 

"Anyoung" I said kissing Hae-mi goodbye on the forehead making her smile 

Jay POV 

Oh dear god that was so awkward, seriously she's getting married now? What is this? I swore that Jiyong would be the only man I would ever let near her but now she's getting married to someone I don't even know 

"What’s his name?" 

"Lee Donghae" 

"Do I even need to ask? Please answer all of my questions" 

"Let’s see we met at a norebang and we both fell in love at first sight. Then on new year’s we met up and I got pregnant" 

"You’re what?"

"Pregnant" 

"Oh my dear heavens how long have you known him?"

"A couple of years" 

"Sung. Hae. Mi. Noona. Are you sure you love him?" 

"Of course why would I do that stuff with someone I don't love?"

Dear lord please forgive me, im about to lie again to another person.

"Do you even want the baby?" 

"I can't take a life" 

".." 

"Plus their the sum of our love" 

"Don’t you dare bring math into this" 

"Ha-ha okay beummie" 

"Did you just say their? There is more than one" 

"Twins" she said. Making a victory sign 

"How did umma react to it" 

"Good enough to let me live with him" 

"That guy looks so familiar" 

"He tells me he's a star" 

Lee Donghae. Lee Donghae. Lee Donghae. 

"Does he by any chance know or live with a person named Kyuhyun"

"Oh! How do you know Kyuhyun?" 

"Friends" 

"So do you know him?" 

"Yea of course! No wonder he looked familiar! He's lee Donghae of super junior" 

"I guess" 

"Don’t tell me you don’t know and your already this far" 

"Don’t know what" 

"That they are like one of the biggest stars in Korea" 

"They are?" she asked 

"Yea, didn't he tell you?" 

"No" 

"I'm guessing he thought you knew" 

"I guess" 

"Let’s order our coffee and begin hae beum day" 

"Okay"

I ordered hot chocolate and he ordered some kind of coffee, and we headed out towards his car. 

"Jay where are we going to go first?" 

"To..." he said trailing off into his thoughts. 

"To that that new theme park that just opened up" 

"Let’s go let's go let's go" she said like an exited little kid 

We got in my car and I the radio and some song just ended. 

"So can I know all the details?" I asked cautiously 

"Of course" she replied

"Are you living with him?" 

"Yep" 

"And his band mates?" 

"Yep" 

"Isn't it a bit crowded for more than 15 people in one apartment?" 

"We're moving to Siwon’s mansion in a few days" 

"Ahhh~" 

"If I go to the amusement park there's going to be a lot of things I won't be able to do" 

"It's okay; I'm not in a roller coaster mood" 

"You just want the cotton candy don't you?" 

"Oh! How did you know?" 

"How wouldn't I know? I'm your noona" 

"Nae~" I said 

"How are things with miso?" 

"We broke up a couple of months ago" 

"By months you mean hours don't you"

"No I mean weeks" 

"What happened?" 

"Um well let’s say that I was a bit too busy with work that I um.. Forgot? About her" 

I got hit on the head by hae mi noona

"Wae~ come on I mean you know how much I love my job"

"Think about the girls feelings too you Pabo" 

"Noona~" I whined 

"Jay~" she said in the same tone 

"Fine, but there's nothing I can do about it now" 

She sighed, "aigoo what am I going to do with you" 

“You’re going to love me like you normally do” he said cutely

“Just drive the car”

Just as we arrived inside, I saw a couple of familiar faces.

“Oh! Is that hae mi?”

“Donghae?”

Is he a stalker? I thought he went to work…

“What are you doing here?” hae mi said

“We’re having a concert here in a few minutes, are you going to watch”

“Let’s watch them” I said quickly.

She smiled quickly in relief, we went together and got seats

“My noona’s in love what do I do” I joked

“Ya” she pouted

“Don’t even try to hide it, I know everything”

“What? What do you know” she panicked

“That you really do love him”

“…”

“…”

“Aish you troll” she said hitting my arm

“Ah wae, it’s the truth, see you’re even blushing right now”

“What no, no way. Im not blushing” she denied.

Is she in denial or something? What’s wrong with her?

“Noona Waegure?”

“Bwohhh? Wae?”

“Um, you’re turning tomato red”

“….”

“…”

“Psh this is my normal face color.” She said

“The concert is starting” I said looking away from her

 

The entire time I swear every time I looked over at her she was staring with sparkles in her eyes. Her eyes seemed to follow only one person. Donghae. That’s it, this is just sad how she doesn’t realize how much in love she is with Donghae, and how Donghae doesn't realize that he's also head over heels in love with hae mi. And this is where masterminds Kyu, Jay and Key comes into the scene. Oh yes. I'm bringing it back. KJK (Kyu Jay Key) why? Because I simply can't watch these lovebirds do this to themselves. 

After the concert was over hae mi and I decided (more like I convinced her to) go backstage and meet up with everyone. Luckily there were only three groups here, Ukiss, Suju and SHINee. Ukiss went up after Suju and then SHINee went up after them. 

"SHINee’s here too, lets meet up with everyone" I said 

As if everyone read my mind, the SHINee and suju members were already in the same room. 

I quickly looked for Kyuhyun and Key. 

"Where's Kyuhyun" I asked hastily

"He's in the back" Ki bum said "over there" he continues pointing to where Kyuhyun was 

I left hae mi with the others and ran to Kyuhyun 

"Yo" I said 

"W-oh Jay" he smiled as he turned around 

I smiled back

"What's up" he asked 

"I'm bringing KJK back" 

His eyes widened

"KJK? I thought that we were to never speak of it until after..." I cut him off

"Forget about that that's like three years ago. Right now we have a new goal” 

"And that is?"

"Hae mi and Donghae" 

"Yea they're getting married what else can we do?"

"I don't think they know that they love each other as much as they really do" 

"Are you thinking what I'm thinking?" 

"No brother Kyu I'm thinking of getting Key" I laughed 

"Oh yea! Isn't he hae mi's old friend?"

"Hohoho that's right" 

"My mind is coming up with plans" 

"Is that evil I smell?" 

"No it's the smell of burning hair"

"Burning hair?" 

"The hair straighteners" 

"I got you let's go to Key" 

Soon the three of us got together and started planning 

"But how do we know for sure that they really like each other?" 

"Look at them it's like as clear and a black stain on a window"

"What do you... Oh I get it" Key said while observing the hae couple 

"Let's code name it" 

"Operation 7858"

"... Where are you getting those numbers?" 

"Then how about operation hey" 

"I like that"

"Let's just keep it as that for now" 

"Oh my god they really are like how you said Jay!" 

"Her eyes won't leave Donghae and his eyes won't leave her but they'll look away whenever they find the other person looking back and they won't talk and when they do its like tomatoes on their faces. They turn so read from blushing so much" Jay ranted 

"You have a lot to say"

"Wait I've wanted to ask, how do you know hae mi?"

"When her parents passed away, my parents took her in and she lived with us since forever and she's like my noona, councilor, buddy, friend person..." 

For the next 15 minutes KJK planned what we were going to go/

Now is not the time to be thinking about the past, I need to make sure my noona stays happy forever and I think Donghae is the right person for her, I don’t know much about their relationship but I know that if Hae mi noona is in love, ill definitely be able to tell.

Time to put this plan into action. 

 


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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)