Doctors Appointment

Is this fate or a dream ?

 

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Hae mi POV 

 

Finally the day has come; I can finally see my baby through the ultrasound machine. I petted my stomach; I'm going to see you soon. 

 

"Donghae~~ let's goo~ wake up~" 

 

"But I wanna sleep" he said tiredly 

 

"Fine then I'll just see the baby myself, it's okay, I just won't let you see our baby until (s) he’s born" 

 

He got up instantly and started getting ready.  

 

"Hae mi~ where are my socks?" 

 

"Which ones? The black or brown ones" 

 

"The brown ones" 

 

"They’re right next to you" 

 

"Oh... Ha-ha Kumawo" He said smiling, putting them on

 

"Look at those too, being all lovey dovey in front of us" Sungmin said in a pissed of tone leaving the room 

 

"Aish, now I want a girlfriend" Eunhyuk said

 

"There’s one thing I noticed, when are they going to get married?" Shindong added 

 

"Donghae told me it would be sometime next week" Shindong said 

 

"Ya! Donghae why didn't you tell me" Eunhyuk said

 

“What happened, why are you yelling?”

 

“Hyung, did you know that their getting married next week???”

 

Heechul’s eyes were HUGE. They scared me

 

“Ya, why did you tell us earlier?” 

 

"What?" Donghae asked, confused. 

 

"That your weddings next week?" Eunhyuk replied 

 

"SHHHH" 

 

"Ah wae" Eunhyuk and Heechul complained 

 

"I want to surprise you guys, I was gonna say it tonight"

 

"Oh really?" 

 

"Donghaeee lets goo" 

 

"I'm coming, I'm coming" 

 

"Where are you going?" 

 

"We’re going to go to get Hae mi checked up" 

 

"Tell me if it's a girl or a boy" 

 

"I'll tell you, I promise" 

 

"Why don’t we just come along?" Eunhyuk suggested

 

"I can't I have work" Shindong said 

 

“Me too, I wanna go!”

 

"Hae mi, would you mind if we came along with you guys to your appointment?" Eunhyuk asked 

 

"Sure, I don't mind" 

 

"When is it?"

 

"At 10:30"

 

"Then we should start leaving now" 

 

"Yea, are you ready?" 

 

"Ha-ha yea" 

 

So we headed out and went to the doctor’s office where I was going to get my ultra sound. 

 

"I'm so excited" I said, smiling like a fool. 

 

"Wae?" Eunhyuk asked 

 

"Because now I'll be able to see my baby" 

 

"Chongmal?" he replied with a smile plastered onto his face 

 

"Nae" I replied 

 

"Will you be able to find out if it's a girl or boy?"

"Of course! I'm so excited, I'm so happy" 

 

"Hae mi, were here" Donghae said, parking the car.

 

I waited impatiently for the guys to come out of the car. Donghae grabbed my hand as soon as he saw me. 

 

"You’re like a little kid going to a toy store" 

 

"I'm just so exited" We walked to the main entrance and I had finally calmed down.

 

"I have an appointment with my doctor" 

 

"And you are?" 

 

"Sung Hae mi" 

 

"And who is your doctor?" 

 

"Park Ji Ha" 

 

"Room 209" 

 

"Kamsamnida" I said bowing my head.

 

"Room 209" I said to myself. 

 

We got to the room and I knocked

 

"Hae-mi-shii? Come in" I went in, as Donghae, Heechul and Eunhyuk followed 

 

"I'm guessing you’re her husband, nice to meet you" she said shaking Donghae’s hand

 

"Nae" he said in response

 

"Are you her brother?" the doctor asked 

 

"No we’re his brothers" Heechul and Eunhyuk replied pointing to Donghae

 

“Oh okay, nice to meet you, please have a seat over there.”

 

"Okay so this is the fifth month of your pregnancy, your baby has formed toes, nails, fingers and hair, and today we can see if it's a girl or a boy" the doctor said moving on 

 

"Nae sungsaenim" We began the process and finally I got to see my little baby

 

"Congratulations, it looks like you have twins" 

 

I couldn't help but be happy, and smile. I looked at Donghae, who couldn't stop looking at the screen. 

 

"Their twins" 

 

"Are they girls or boys?" Donghae asked

 

"As of now it looks like one of each, but you never really know" 

Donghae has the biggest smile ever, and Im so happy I swear I want to cry 

 

"Twins" I managed to say. 

 

Donghae gave me a proud smile as he turned to face me. 

For the next 20 minutes, she checked my babies’ heart beat and everything. 

 

I turned my head and saw the guys staring and pointing out the little body parts of the baby in the picture. They were smiling like crazy, I found it so cute.

 

"Their twins" I said 

 

"Girl and boy" Donghae said being pulled into a huge hug by Eunhyuk 

 

"Chukka-hae, and Donghae, we were right there." Eunhyuk said patting his back 

 

"We should tell everyone"

 

"I want to tell everyone tonight" I said 

 

"Of course, I can't wait to see their faces" 

 

"Ha-ha me neither" 

 

"Donghae, does the press know about your baby?" 

 

"I don’t know" 

 

"I think you should tell them" 

 

"I don’t know of Hae mi is comfortable with that" 

 

We went back home and the rest of our day just went by like that. I sat in Donghae’s room and found myself thinking 

 

Wa~ I'm going to have two babies now, I wonder who they look like more, Donghae or me? I'm so happy, I know taking care of twins sounds like a lot of work but still. Oh yea, now that I think about it, I don't know Donghae’s honest opinion about the twins. Oh well, he's always away it's not like it'll matter to him. Wait what if he had someone he likes? My eyes widened at the thought. I need to ask him about that tonight I looked at the clock, it's almost dinner time. I went to the kitchen to find Uki and this guy arguing.

 

"What’s wrong?" I asked

 

"Who are you?" the boy rudely asked turning to my direction

 

"Ya!" 

 

"Wae?!" 

 

"She’s your Nuna, and she's also your hyung wife!" 

 

The guy’s eyes were slowly widening...

 

"WHAT?" 

 

"Yes. Hae mi, this is our little devil" 

 

"My names Void. Who are your married to?" 

 

"Donghae, were going to be married"

 

His eyes got wider 

 

"Donghae? He managed to get a girl?" Void asked 

 

This guy is so rude. I started setting the dishes, and suddenly Alex came and took them out of my hands.

 

"Unni don't work too much, your pregnant remember? I'll call you down when diner is ready"

 

"O...okay" I said, did Donghae tell them anything?

 

I heard a knock on the door and I got up to get it. But uki ran towards the door before me. I pouted; they aren't going to let me do much are they?

 

"Who is it Uki?" siwon asked

 

"My friends" Uki said 

 

"By friends you mean big bang?" Leeteuk added on. (Big bang? That sounds familiar) 

 

"Uhuh" 

 

"I'm so glad you guys came"

 

"I'm glad we were invited" a guy, who reminded me of a panda, said as he came in and the others followed. I was all smiles until I saw my nightmare. Jiyong. 

 

Why is he here??? I looked at Donghae, who had a troubled expression on his face. I walked closer to Donghae 

 

"Are... are you okay?" he whispered 

 

I just nodded, fidgeting with my clothes. As soon as Donghae noticed he held my hand firmly which told me that he would help me out today 

 

JUST REALISED THAT IVE BEEN SPELLING JIYONGS NAME WRONG. IT’S NOT JIYOUNG IT’S JIYONG. I FEEL SO STUPID RIGHT NOW. I REALLY DON’T KNOW WHY THIS IS IN CAPS. SORRY

Oh yea, um thanks for subscribing. Cheongmal Kamsamnida *bows* thank you to those who commented last chapter Cheongmal Kamsamnida *bows* oh yea and to my readers who read my blog about that mistake, I fixed it so I hope you’ve forgiven me. Most of you are like WTF are you talking about

Haha. Why must I do this to myself? 

oh yea, i almost forgot, yes Key is younger than Hae mi, but Hae mi still calls him oppa, because she, like heechul and donghae, hates being told that shes old. You can say she has a Peter Pan complex. 

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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)