part two~ Rude.

Is this fate or a dream ?

 

DONGHAE POV

We went to a seafood restaurant and sat near the back next to a window.

The waiter came and took our orders.

Why won't that waiter take his eyes off of Hae mi?

"Um excuse me I'm ready to order" I cleared my throat

"Ah yes"

This waiter looked familiar, not only that guy sound familiar too, and acted very suspicious. I'm watching you.

I ordered the first few things I saw on the menu, quickly so he would leave.

"Hae mi?" I said trying to get her attention

Why are you looking at other guys and not me?

"Hmm?" she said not really paying attention

I pouted at my failed attempt

"Hae mi ah" I said softly

"Donghae do you like seafood?" she asked abruptly

"Yea"

"What about sweet stuff" she asked

"Not that much" I answered honestly

"Do you like eating a home cooked meal or at a restaurant?"

"Home cooked... why?"

"I felt like making something special for you…"

"Why"

"You ask to many questions, it's because I was thankful" she said quickly

So cute

I let out a small laugh “it’s okay, don’t over work yourself"  I said

"I'm not over working myself" she pouted

"I don't know from my point of view at times it feels like you’re over working yourself" I honestly said

She looked down while blushing

After that we were both quiet, awkward silence.

"Donghae?" she asked looking up at me, breaking the silence

"Hmm?"

"Food is here" she said making me turn my head

MY FOOD !!!! I would do a happy dance if I could right now

HAE MI POV

When the food arrived Donghae looked like a starving little kid, as soon as the waiter left Donghae literally ate everything with a few minutes

"Donghae slowdown"

He looked up from the great battle with the clam, giving me this innocent look, I chucked at his childishness  

I swear who as such captivating eyes like, I've never seen anyone or met anyone whose eyes made me just sit there and stare

We both laughed at the weird situation

NO ONE POV

"Ya ya Ryeowook you added a hint of alcohol in Donghae's food right?"

"Of course"

"Knowing Donghae it won't be long before he gets drunk"

"So evil master Kyu and Key are going to take Donghae 'to work' and Heechul is going to take Hae mi home, that's part two. Part three if Key and Kyuhyun and I do a good job then everything should end smoothly."

"Remember, Hae mi and Donghae can absolutely not know about this and LSM (Lee Soo Man) and manager Hyungs cannot hear about this" Leeteuk dismissed

"Also last minute thing but Hae mi cannot eat the shrimps, the alcohol is bad for the baby someone come with me" Ryeowook said

Shindong and Yesung came along

"Shindong get your outfit ready Yesung did you wear what I gave you?"

"Ryeowook are you ready yourself?"

"I’ve been waiting for this day." Shindong came out of the bathroom wearing a feminine dress while Yesung came out wearing a suit. And Ryeowook wore a short dress and while they all wore a wig.

"This is going to be perfect"

Let the evilness spread.

HAE MI POV

Donghae and I began to eat the food in front of us as we ate we also talked about a bunch of random things

Thankfully Donghae isn't awkward in this kind of situation, but seriously, why is this place so empty???

"Let’s sit here" a voice said

DONGHAE POV

"Let’s sit here" a manly voice said, making me look away from Hae mi

I though the amusement park was reserved for idols only today. Damn it, someone sneaked or paid their way in here didn't they? As long as they aren't fans

"Here yeobo?" a large woman said looking at Hae mi and I while making a disgusted face

I ignored them while Hae mi looked ticked off

"Here" I said putting shrimp in

"Kumawo" she replied paying attention to me again

"Hae mi what do you want to do after this?"

"Hmmm I want to.... Go to a small arcade" she said shyly

"Aish young couples these days" the large woman who sat next to our table said while eyeing Hae mi from top to bottom

Aish these people have no manners. They're ticking me off, I don't care if they are older than me or not, they can't say that in front of us

"The generations to come are at stake" the lady continued

"Ai..." I was about to say

"Donghae" Hae mi said softly, making me forget the words I was about to say

"Yea" I replied

"Here" she said stuffing food into my mouth

"It’s okay" she mouthed

"There are rude people everywhere” she continued

"Omo omo omo, is she pregnant??" the man said in a failed whisper voice

If you have something to say to us, say it to our faces I thought as my blood boiled

Suddenly to all of our surprise, a skinny lady walked in and looked angrily at the man who was caught in the middle

"Ya! Who is this?" the skinny lady said raising her tone and eyebrows

"Who are you?" the larger woman replied back in the same tone

"What do you mean? I'm his wife" the skinny lady said

"Wife? Are you sure you’re in your right mind? He is clearly my husband"

"What? Ya! You’re the delusional one ajumma"

I changed my seat to guard Hae mi, she looked so scared. We decided to leave our food and walk away from that mess

"Ya! Where do you youngsters think you’re going" the skinny ajumma said

"yea finish your food! Seriously people these days have no manners" the man yelled as we tried to sneak away

What the hell?

"Let’s just finish it." Hae mi said looking down

HAE MI POV

"Ya ajussi, ajumma, this isn't like me to say this but mind your business" he said hotheadedly

"You think you’re so great? Come at me" the man replied

"No I don’t think I'm great but you don't know us so just leave us alone"

Donghae what's wrong with you? Why are you acting so weird?

"Jisonghaeyo" I said lowering my head

"Donghae let's go" I said in a whisper

"Aniiiii~! Why are you saying sorrrrry? Theeey were the ones who staaaarted it" he said a bit … drunkly

"Donghae come to your senses before I have to slap them into you" I said trying to snap him out of it, but he just pouted at me

Why is he acting like a kid? What's gotten into him?

The waiter came and eventually everything became resolved. Turns out the food that Donghae ate, actually was made with soju. I’ve never heard of clams with soju in/on them but then again I don't eat out a lot.

I tugged Donghae towards the bus stop

"Aigoo how much soju did they put in your food?"

"I have something to say" Donghae said

"What is it?" I asked curiously

Suddenly the bus came and stopped in front of us thank god that there was no one on the bus

We sat down in the very back beside each other

"I realized that" he started "I have fallen in love" he said as his head fell on my shoulder

"What are you...” I wanted to say, but I realized he was asleep

I felt my heart clench at his words "I realized that I have fallen in love" those words stabbed me, and silently I let out a sigh.

If he loves someone who am I to stop him? This just means he doesn't need me next to him anymore. Should I just leave?

 


i am so extreamly sorry i havent updated in forever. thank you subscribers and commenters who stuck with me even tho i didnt update that often. im sorry for being so slow~ my computer broke and this was the only time i could safely update my fanfic without any interuptions 

once again im truly sorry. (bows 90 degrees) 


EUNHYUK SPAMMMM as apology 

OPPA WHAT ARE YOU DOING?????? 

omo im married already? oh well as long as its Donghae... or Heechul 


 

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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)