Hospital day

Is this fate or a dream ?

Hae mi pov

so, we're all in a circle like thing and this is really awkward. (a/n they are all sitting , so that they form a messed up circle around the table)
"ahem, I will now begin explaining myself" Donghae said in a voice full of sarcasm

*my heads hurts* I thought

"you may now begin Donghae" eunhyuk played along

*I feel dizzy*

Donghae was about to speak and the others looked at us intensely everything became blurry, the things around me started to spin and there were white flashes when I blinked so I grabbed Donghae’s arm for support but almost fell to the ground, after that everything went blank.

Donghae's pov

*why is she grabbing my arm* I thought as she grabbed my hand and I turned to face her. Her body leaned back and I put my arm around her waist, the next thing I know she’s unconscious. Her face looks pale and she doesn't have control over her body since I have to put her in place with my arm.

"OH.MY.GOD donghae what are you doing?? Carry her to the van!" Alex yelled

"what if you hurt the baby?" Sammy asked

Suddenly Leeteuk and Heechul took her from my hands and then Leeteuk helped Heechul carry her bridal-style out the door and to the van the rest of us followed them in shock. There were two vans and I got into the one with Heechul and Hae mi

*what the heck just happened? Is she okay? Is she gonna live? What if she gets memory loss? She won't die right? Ohmygod Ohmygod and why is she in Heechul’s arms?????????* I started to sweat like crazy as we admitted her into the hospital

"is she gonna be fine?" I asked

"I hope so" Siwon said and the other guys nodded their heads in agreement

The tension built up and a couple of minutes later the doctor came out. I Jumped out of my seat and ran up to the doctor

"What's wrong with her?" I asked impatiently. Wait. Why am I so impatient…?

"Nothing is wrong, both mother and child are okay don't worry this is normal during pregnancy. Just make sure that she eats and drinks more. She fainted because of dehydration but she's fine now" the doctor said, answering all my questions at once

"Can we go in" I asked

"Only family members as of now, What is your relation to her"  he said

"Her fiancé" I said without thinking twice

"Then you can go in" he said

"Kamsamnida" we all bowed

"Donghae, go quickly she needs you next to her. Call us when she wakes up" Ryeowook said

"Yea you go in, I'll tell manager hyung about this" Leeteuk said

"Ok thanks guys" I smiled, I could always count on these guys if anything goes wrong.

I went in and saw hae mi, laid on the hospital bed

*She looks so... Weak and frail... Her face looks pale and she looks so weak.* tears started to form as I sat down in the chair next to her bed and held her hand.

*I barely know you, but I feel like your important , so please don't leave me* I thought and slowly tears started to slide down my cheeks. Everything that happened this week tired me out, soon my eyes became droopy and I fell asleep.

No one’s POV

"you guys heard what the doctor said 'more food and water' I don't want donghae getting hurt again or losing another person so everyone better be co-operative" Leeteuk said

"he will never fail his job as an umma" Alex said as she looked at Leeteuk.

Leeteuk just smiled back at her

"what do we have to do" Heechul asked

"does that mean you’re gonna help us?"

"Of course!" they all said

“Shhh” an old nurse said as she walked by

"Leeteuk hyung what do we have to do? "

Leeteuk smirked and made a "hehehe" laughing noise

"we'll give them a surprise"

As soon as he said surprise, everyone knew what he meant and everyone else had that awkward smirk on their faces. (Btw Kyuhyuns was the most evil looking one)

~A couple of hours later

Hae mi slowly opened her eyes to see a new place

*Where am I?* she soon recognize that she's at a hospital

*What happened* she thought as she looked around the room. She tried to sit up and she felt Donghae’s hand on hers

*What on earth is he doing here?* she thought

*Awe he looks so... Cute* hae mi thought to herself and felt herself blush

She got up and tried to wake donghae up But really didn't want to because he looked so peaceful and cute.

*Might as well let him get the small amount of sleep he can get* she said thinking about the time she woke up in the middle of the night and saw all of super junior coming home.

----flashback ----

(a/n I didn’t want to keep you guys wondering about what happens that night so I might as well tell you :) and this is a about a week back )

Hae mi pov ---

I came home from school , made myself a snack and finished my homework. Suddenly my phone starts vibrating.

From: Ki Bum oppa
to: hae mi
subject: wanna hang out?
    Hey I don't have a schedule right now.. Do you wanna go to the mall? :)


To: Ki bum
from: hae mi
Subject: reply
    Sure, I just finished my homework. I don't really know this place well so can you pick me up? :P


From: Ki bum
To: hae mi
Subject: reply
   Sure, I'll pick you up in an hour is that okay with you? :)


To: Ki bum
From: hae mi
Subject: reply
    Yea, I'll go get ready, I'm so excited I haven't been able to hang out with you in like years >.<


From: Ki bum
To: hae mi
Subject: reply
     Yea  :) see you later
ㅇㅅㅇ


I put my phone down and went to go take a shower
~ that felt so~ good!!! ヾ (@⌒ー⌒@) ノ I looked at the clock
*it's already been 30 minutes*
I was bored so I started doing a little research on k-pop. I went to my laptop and typed Kpop in the Google search box
I clicked on Wikipedia since it was the first one
Hmm interesting ...my thoughts were Interrupted by the vibration of my phone

From: Ki bum
To: hae mi
Subject: ready?
   I'm outside... are you ready?


To: Ki bum
from: hae mi
Subject: reply
   Yea, hold up let me get my purse and lock the door >.<


I locked the door and went to go look for Ki bum’s car. He was standing outside his car, I saw him but he didn't see me since he was looking left and I was on the right

I snuck up behind him and gave him a hug.

"Oppa I missed you so much" I exclaimed

"Me to" he said hugging me back

I missed him so much, we used to talk so much since we're like siblings.

"Oppa, do you wanna go now?" I ask breaking away from the hug

He just nodded his head and said "kaja" and I got into the car. The ride to the mall was short but fun, we talked so much since we haven't seen each other in forever.

"Oppa remember the necklace you gave me?"

"the one I gave you after I got my first pay, for your birthday?" he says looking at the road

"Yea" I said

"What about it" he says still looking at the road

"I still have it" I say with my brightest smile

He turns his head in astonishment.

"Chongmal? It's been like centuries since I gave it to you!!" He said quickly facing the front again, he was brightly smiling

*she remembered!!! I think she also knows why I'm taking her out today* Ki bum thought

*I bet he forgot that my birthday is in a few weeks* hae mi thought.

We went inside the mall and started shopping. An hour later, the rest of the SHINee members came and we went to a karaoke bar.

Saeng il chuk ha ham ni da
saeng il chuk ha ham ni da
sarang ha neun Hae Mi
saeng il chuk ha ham ni da

They sang for me, Tae min brought out the cake that read happy birthday to our one and only Hae Mi.

"you remembered?" i asked 

"Of course!! what kind of friend forgets a friends birthday??" Ki bum said 

“I… I feel so special right now, but it’s not my birthday yet”

“We know, but we won’t he in Korea for a month so we decided to celebrate early” Jonghyun said

I smiled, I felt so important, this was the first time, in a very long time that I felt like someone cared.

We started to sing and I got to show off my singing ability, but I was no match for them, well then again, this is their profession, now that I think about it, what am I going to do for my career?....

About an hour later Ki bum got a call, and it was his manager saying he had to go back to The Company. He dropped me off at my house and that was it. I slept since I felt tired and fell asleep deprived.

~

Somewhere around 12:30 I woke up feeling thirsty. I went to go get a drink and heard a sound. I hid behind the counter (our living room and kitchen are sort of connected) and peeked from the side and saw some guys coming in. I thought that it was a thief or something and I panicked. I quickly grabbed scissors and stood up. I was still hiding until donghae came to the kitchen looking shocked

"Who..." I cut him off

"Shhh I think there's a thief here"
Donghae pov

I went to the kitchen to get a drink as soon as I came home, but as soon as I entered the kitchen I saw a small figure peaking out from the side

"Who..." I was about to ask but was rudely interrupted by hae mi

"Shhh I think There's a thief here" he whispers, I try to look at what she is seeing but all I see are the other suju members

"Hae mi, do you wear contacts?" I asked

"Nae" she says looking at me in the eye

"ahhh that explains why, Hae mi, those guys are the other suju members" I say

She blushed. opens but no sound comes out.

"Oh...oops" she finally says as I giggle. She gets up and was about to go to the living room with her blue short shorts and red t-shirt. She's showing of soo much skin, does she not realize that she lives in a house full of mainly guys?

"Hae mi" I call out her name *!! What am I doing*

"Hmm?" she says turning around

"... I think... It's better... If... You... Changed..." I said

"..... I was gonna go do that.........." she said back

"Oh.... Never mind then..." I said * crap I feel so stupid right now*

She nods her head and walks to her room and comes back out with black sweatpants on.

"Are you guys hungry?"

"Not really" some guys said and continued to do what they wanted while others came up to her with puppy eyes that were saying "feed me"

She giggled and took out the food she made earlier

"Here you go... Donghae are you going to eat too?" she asked me

"Yea, just a little bit" I replied, we ate and then she went back to sleep on the couch, I had to carry her back to her room. She looked like a peaceful… baby bear. I have no idea why but she just reminds me of a baby bear sometimes… especially now.


------ End of flash back
Hae mi pov

Soon donghae woke up and hugged me to death, saying "You have to eat more properly" and "Don’t stress out" and "Drink slot of water… Do you want water?"

“I’m fine, thank you” I said pulling away from his hug. He looked at me with big puppy eyes, it was the cutest and nicest thing I've ever seen and heard. I feel like he actually cares about me now, I feel like we can actually be a family. But then again, I don’t know what that term really means.

I asked if he told the guys about everything that happened at his moms house and he said he still has to tell them, because he was here with me the entire time (a day)

Soon after that Leeteuk came in.

"Ya donghae I know you like her and all but we were worried too, you know, you could've told us she woke up" he said in a teasingly playful way.

“Hyung, she woke up” he said back in a playful tone,  as I giggled at them.

The other guys came in and filled the empty space in the room and soon there was a lot of chatter.

They each bought like a little get well present and I felt so special until Leeteuk said "this is all for Donghae’s girlfriend"

I smiled but I felt guilty. This isn’t for me, it’s for his girlfriend. I’m not his girlfriend.

"Oh yea weren't you guys going to tell us what happened?" Henry asked 

"Oh yea, about that" Donghae turned to look at me and I just nodded 

"We're.. Getting married" Dognhae said 

"Bwohhh??" Everyone, other than Donghae, and I yelled. 

"Ya donghae you never told me about this" Eunhyuk exclaimed

"I couldn't, I wanted to tell everyone when the time was right, and when I had gotten my mother to approve" Donghae asks

"What are you going to do about the press" Heechul asks

"...Engaged marriage" I said

"What about your previous dating relationships?" Leeteuk asks

"....Only scandals and false statements" Donghae says

"When are you getting married" Sungmin asks

"Soon" Donghae replies

"When are you going to hold a press conference?" Kangin asks

"Tomorrow at 3:00" Donghae says likes he's planned it out

"What????" We all look at Donghae

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Saranghae my readers, thank you for supporting me by reading my fanfic. =) 
ill try to update as ofteb as possible but it seems kind of difficult since im stupid and having a hard time in school. Have you guys seen Nice Guy? best drama ive ever seen, in my life. (thats 14 years) did everyone have an awesome thanks giving break? 

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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)