Part one

Is this fate or a dream ?

Kyuhyun POV

"Jay lets have the hyung's involved too, we'll get things done quicker" 

"True but don't tell them about KJK" 

"Okay okay" 

KJK, that acronym reminds me of so much stuff. So many memories, so many moments. Good time good times. 

One by one I let the hyung’s know about the plan, (SHINee included). Everyone but Donghae and Hae mi knew what was going on, surprisingly no one asked why, they just agreed to help

"Jay everyone knows now" I said to him. Key was on stage performing (I told SHINee first) 

"Okay, did you tell them about the meeting later?" 

"Yep"

"Okay great perfect then"

Hae mi POV 

Jay suddenly left me alone with Donghae and Sungmin, and headed towards Kyuhyun. 

I stayed in place and talked to Donghae, Sungmin tried to explain to me why Donghae was a fish...

Everyone here is an animal. 

"What about Heechul" 

"The cat" 

"Shindong" 

"The cowboy" 

"Eunhyuk?" 

"Anchovy/monkey" 

"Siwon?"

"The horse" 

"..." 

"That’s just how the suju family goes" 

"... I'm not going to ask" 

"It’s actually better if you don't" 

“Logic? we have none”

"Okay then" I said

We continued talking and eventually it was time to leave (for them not me) 

"Jay! Where did you go? You left me in the most awkward-est position ever" 

"Miyan Miyan" he stuck his tongue out 

I pouted but quickly forgave him 

"Where are we going next?" 

"Hmm are you hungry?"

"Not really."

"Hmm then let's go to that gift shop, I'll buy you something"

I smiled, free stuff, my favorite. "Yay let's go" 

We walked over to the gift shop and I was having a hard time picking something 

"Oh Donghae Hyung I thought you were going back to work"

"Donghae?"

"Leeteuk said that we have a couple hours here to have fun" 

"Oh" 

"Jay! Jay I think I found something" I excitedly turned around and showed him the cure hair clip 

"Oh Donghae what are you doing here" 

"Having fun" 

"Okay, Jay do you like it?" 

"Yea it looks good here I'll put it on for you" 

I closed my eyes as jay put the hair clip in my hair 

"It suits you so much" 

"Really? What do you think Donghae?" I asked

"... Huh oh yea it looks beautiful" my heart founded at his words and without intention or force I was smiling/blushing

Jay POV

Part one complete, now I just gotta leave them together and then everything will be done itself 

I texted Kyuhyun 

To Kyu

Ready?

From Kyu

I've been ready 

To Kyu 

Let's get started 

From Kyu 

I’ve been waiting

I like the evilness in this 

Totally my style ^^ 

"Jay where are you going?" 

"Huh oh I got to go to the bathroom. I'll be back ill a few minutes." I lied. Psh girl I won't be back until the very end

"Okay" she smiled 

I quickly left 

Hae mi POV

"Oh Hae mi, Donghae hey" 

"Hey Heechul" 

"Ooh that hairclip looks good on you" Heechul said 

"Ha-ha thanks, jay picked it out for me" 

"Donghae buy it for her, I don't see jay around" 

"Uhh okay" 

"No no no it's okay" 

"I'll just buy it; it looks good on you anyway" 

"But..." 

"Hae mi while he pays for that do you want to eat some cotton candy?" 

"They have cotton candy here?" I asked 

"Yep" 

Donghae came back with two small gift bags. 

"Wait Donghae It was only one hair clip, why are there two bags?" 

"It’s a little something for you. I hope you like it" 

"Thanks" 

"Let’s go get cotton candy" Heechul said like a little kid 

"Cotton candy?" 

"What color do you want Donghae" 

"Hmmmmmmmmm I like pink but I also like blue..." 

"What about you Hae mi" 

"I like pink" 

"Okay, wait I only have enough for two" Heechul pouted

"It’s okay you can share with Donghae or you guys can eat and I won't" I said 

"No I don’t want to share. Donghae you share with Hae mi, I get my own because I'm special like that" 

I looked at Donghae and he looked back at me 

"Do you want to?" 

"Sure"

Heechul bought cotton candy and we started to wander away from Heechul so it was just Donghae and I. 

"And today we have prepared special guests for this event to take place." the first mc said 

"Everyone please welcome five members from super junior" the second mc said 

"Anyounghaseyo we are super junior" Yesung, Eunhyuk, Kyuhyun, and Siwon said 

"So today's event is specifically for couples" 

I looked at the MC's very carefully. They looked so familiar. This place is so weird it's like no one is here like I don't see anyone at all.

"Oh look at that beautiful girl right there!" beautiful girl? Where? I thought looking around 

No one was there... 

Wait me? Me? What? 

"Please come on up"

Wait is that key? That voice is so familiar. 

"So the five members of super junior will have to win these young lady's hearts" the key look Like said 

"If no one is able to win their hearts then we will let all the other boys try" 

"But there's only one girl on stage. The others are

Getting ready" 

Soon four pretty girls came on stage.

They looked really familiar. I wonder why... 

One was wearing a red cheer leading outfit with a short red bob cut; the other was wearing a school uniform with her hair in braids... A student perhaps.. Then a girl with her hair in a bun came out wearing a blue traditional Chinese dress with a brown shawl over her shoulders. And finally a girl wearing red, and long traditional Chinese clothing out with an umbrella saying pabo to everyone she saw.. 

Out of all the guys, when they and to pick yesung got to me first. 

"I'm going to sing to you a ballad, I hope it wins your heart" he sang beautifully but it was a sad song about breaking up... 

Then it was kyuhyuns turn. 

"Do you play StarCraft?"

"No... Not really" 

"Should I cook for you? Actually no, wait, I already prepared it" he said taking out a dish from some table behind us. 

"Try it" 

"Um okay" I said. 

Just as I was about to put the spoon in my mouth one of the girls stopped me. 

"Um no. This is mine, and girl back off, he is my man" the schoolgirl in braids and long socks said. I'll call her school girl as of now and the other one blue and the other two Red and cheerleader. It makes life so much easier. 

"Um okay" I said 

School girl started to eat the food quickly. 

"This is absolutely delicious" school girl said 

It’s okay I thought as I pouted. I had cotton candy... Speaking of which where is it? Ma food~ 

"We have a couple" one of the MC's announced 

Kyuhyun and School girl walked off stage. 

Then Siwon came and we talked but it was awkward, like we talked about... Church. He was so excited I saw sparkles in his eyes and me, being the person I am responded with simple answers. I'm not as religious as him... 

He walked away after his turn was up. Then Eunhyuk came. 

"This dance is for you" he said as he took his position 

He started dancing and I’m not laying my eyes would not leave him. Like he has this mysterious power to make people want to dance with him... If I wasn't pregnant I would've started dancing but I can't and won't risk my babies lives. /my motherly feels. 

"What do you say? Will it be Eunhyuk or is there someone in your heart already"

Well the obvious response is that I have someone in my heart but eunhyuk was just so... So amazing. 

"I have someone in my heart already but eunhyuk if I hadn't met him first I would've, without doubt gone with you" I said hoping that I didn’t hurt his feelings 

"Ha-ha I knew it" he said 

Everyone walked off stage and I saw Donghae waiting for me, smiling. A lot. 

"Are you hungry?" he asked 

"Nae~" I said 

"Let’s go eat food" 

"Oh it's Hae mi" Ki bum said 

"Oh Ki bum you're here too?" 

"Do you mind taking pictures with me?" 

"I don't mind" I smiled 

"B..." Donghae was about to say 

Can't just say no to him 

DONGHAE POV 

"B..." I was about to say 

Wasn't she just hungry? 

blocker 

Wait no what am I thinking. No no no. Donghae. You're just tired. 

We walked into a photo booth 

"Hyung it's a two person thing" 

"Oh okay" I said 

"Can you hold this" Hae mi asked 

"Yea of course" I said smiling 

Why am I smiling? 

"Thanks oppa" she said 

My heart started to beat a hundred times faster and my face was tomato red. I shook my head but my fast heartbeat didn't slow down neither did my red face return to it's normal color. 

After a while I became tired of waiting and looked inside the photo booth. I saw him holding her shoulder and their heads were touching. So close. Too close. My eyes became huge with anger. 

"Ki bum that was so fun" she said 

"Oh Donghae hey" Ki bum said 

"Hae mi are you still hungry" I asked 

"Oh yea, yea I am" she said 

"Let’s go, bye Ki bum" I said quickly grabbing Hae mi's hand and walking away 

"Donghae slow down" Haemi said 

"Sorry" I said 

I realized I was still holding her hand but I don't feel like letting go.

It'll just make the situation awkward

"What do you want to eat" I asked 

"Is seafood okay?" she replied 

"I love seafood" I said as we walked into the restaurant 

No one’s POV 

Ki bum’s thought 

It's heading into the right direction. 

Ki bum called jay 

"They’re going to eat" Ki bum said 

"Okay, good job" Jay replied 


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and last but not least. 

sorry this was just... i had to post this XD 

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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)