Kumawo

Is this fate or a dream ?

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"Do you guys want to go shopping for baby clothes and stuff on the 15th?"

"Sure, were free then right?" 

"Yea" Leeteuk said 

"Us too" Onew said 

"Kumawo, this means a lot to me" I said 

"So what are we going to buy?" 

"A cradle, baby clothes, baby toys, baby books, baby shampoo, baby bathtub, baby bag, stroller, so on and so forth all depending on the gender" 

"That's a lot" Sungmin said trying to count everything

"Cute baby stuff!!" Sammy said 

"Uhuh" 

"I would’ve done this myself but I wanted it to be a little special and plus more bonding time" I said blushing but smiling widely

"Uhuh, Nuna that's great" Kyuhyun said  

"When's your next doctor’s appointment?" Shindong asked 

"I checked earlier, it’s a day before the 15" 

"Ah really? Great, I think I'm free then" Donghae said 

"Donghae can I have another spoon? My one fell" Eunhyuk said

"Huh oh yea" 

"Wait what's today?"

"May 7th I think" 

"Oh okay, then it's not that far away

And with that our beautiful lunch ended 

I fell fast asleep after that, sometimes after eating I feel extra sleepy and today was extremely long too

"Hae mi...” someone shook me 

"Hae mi ah" another voice said 

"Andwae umma I want to sleep!" I whined 

"Ya sung Hae mi I found Choco, she’s is here" 

My eyes opened up immediately 

"CHOCO? Where?" 

- Oh yea Choco my puppy that ran away from me two years ago- 

"Wait where's my Choco?" 

"Ha-ha you didn't change a bit"

"Key!! You know I hate it when you do that!" 

"Miyan Miyan, I had to wake you up eventually, Donghae was getting tired" 

"...." I looked around and spotted Donghae looking at me with a tired expression

"Oh my god I'm so sorry" 

"It’s okay, let's go" 

"Kumawo key oppa"

"Bye bye" I said hugging him

"Bye bye" he said hugging me back 

DONGHAE POV

(。-_-。) this entire day I've been feeling this burning feeling in my chest. 

"Anyoung" Hae mi said as she hugged key

"Anyoung" he smirked as he hugged back 

-.- Its back. That burning feeling in my chest is coming back (。-_-。) 

"So Donghae on the 14, I have an appointment at 10:00 am with my doctor" hae mi said. I turned to face her and blushed (I realized I was being extra rude for not holding her bag and not listening) 

"Okay, just remind me the day before" 

"Okay" 

"Here I'll carry that for you, a pregnant woman shouldn't carry heavy things" 

"Aniayo, it's okay, it's not heavy" she said, this is a complete lie and it's so obvious I want to laugh. She's sweating, good lord, what am I going to do with this girl? 

"Andwae!" I said grabbing her bags 

Sweat shisus this is heavy!

"Haemi!! You have to give me the heavy stuff! You can't hurt yourself or put too much pressure on yourself" I said, im so frustrated! Why didn't she just give me the bag? I don't mind carrying a heavy bag. I pouted and hae mi just giggled

"Miyan Miyan" 

"Do you want to sit down?" 

"Just for a bit" Hae mi said looking at a bench

We went to the bench and he sat down and looked up 

"Hmm... not that many stars out tonight" 

I looked up 

"Well we are in Seoul" 

"Yea but last time I was with Ryeowook at night I saw a million stars" she said still looking up. Ryeowook? What was she doing with ryeowook at night?

"We were talking" she said looking at me, I blushed ( she knew what I was thinking) 

"Donghae" she said looking at me in a seducing way

"y-yea" I stuttered. I should really sleep, I know I'm tired, that’s why I'm always stuttering now

"Are... Are you still taking part in the bet?"

Huh? Oh. Yea bet. Forgot about that

"Yea! Of course" 

She just smiled and looked back up

"Let’s go you must be sleepy" hae mi said 

"It’s alright" 

"Then I'm sleepy, let's go" 

"Ha-ha okay, okay" 

"Donghae-shii?" 

"Call me Donghae" -shii makes me feel weird (a/n see what I did there) 

"Okay then you can call me hae mi" 

"We started off with a rocky start didn't we?"

"Ha-ha yea, do you believe in fate/destiny" 

"Not really, I gave up on it a while ago... Why?" 

"Ani- well is it because of what happened after the press conference with Jiyoung?" 

"Ahhh, him" 

"If you don't mind" 

"Yea, I you don't mind" 

"It's okay, well I guess you could say that he used me, tricked me, hurt me, tried to have with me, cheated on me and left me. All in the same year" 

"WHAT?!?!" HE ALMOST HER ??? WHAT IS THIS ? HE MAYBE MY SENIOR BUT THIS IS LIKE A HELL NO!!! I WANT TO FREAKING GAHH WAIT, WHY AM I SO PISSED? 

"Details" she asked distracting me from my thoughts 

"Go on" I said 

"So I met him while I was in the states, we started dating a week after our first meeting, which was at a pool party at my friends house. Anyway, we went out for a year and during that one year he was cheating on me, he was a player. He abused me, he used to hit me when he was mad and he used to yell at me if I didn't do things right and sometimes even for no reason. I have a bruise on my back but it's small and it's slowly fading away"

"Also he dated not just any girl he dated my best friend and that hurt our friend ship because I thought I loved him more, and then finally, despite all the abuse, he never me or abused me or anything but then one day he came over (I lived alone) and he asked me about and I wasn't prepared, not mentally or physically, he left that day, and I thought that he respected my decision but no, he went and told all of his little buddies that I refused to have with him. The next day the entire school knew and pretty much I was so embarrassed that I skipped school for two weeks and then finally move back to Korea. Oh and he only asked me out on a dare, he never really wanted to go out with me, so I figured everything was all a lie. The feelings, the memories, the pictures, the dates, the happiness, the fights, the kisses, the hugs, everything" Hae mi said as tears dripped down her face and she started to wipe them off her face

"At least I know you’re not like that, I mean sure were strangers, and sure we don't know anything about each other but at least your not abusing me and hurting me, at least you look like you care about me" Hae mi said 

I didn’t know what to say. Encouragement? Nah I think it's best to be silent right now. I hugged her and she hugged me back, crying her eyes out for an hour

"Miyan, your shirts wet now because of me" 

"Feeling better?" 

"Uhuh, a lot better, Kumawo" Hae mi said 

"Let's go back" 

"Yea" Hae mi said sleepily. Crying for an hour probably made her tired and sleepy

I put one hand on her waist and we slowly walked back to the dorm

"Shhh" I said as I walked in the dorm, and the few people that were there immediately become quiet after seeing the half asleep Hae mi who was constantly falling over. She looked like a drunk person. Leeteuk hyung took the bag out of my hands and Heechul hyung helped me take Hae mi to my room. 

I lay her down and cover her up with a blanket. I came out and went straight to the living room.

"Uki, Alex, Sammy, I need your help" I said 

"Waegure?" Alex asked 

"I need someone to change her clothes" 

"Why don’t you?" 

"Because I'm not gentle" ha-ha I guess I'm not, plus it's embarrassing, I don't think she wants me to see some stuff

"Ugh fine. Only because she's my unni" Alex said

"Uki and Sammy I need you guys" 

Sammy followed me while Uki gave me a really-your-going-to-bug-me-during-my-drama-time-?-look 

I just nodded; Uki got up and sighed as she walked by me. 

"What am I going to do with you Donghae?" she said under her breath, shaking her head

"You’re going to help him" I said smiling

She went into the room with Sammy and Alex and began to change her clothes. 

I made popcorn and took out a bunch of candies and put them on the small table next to the sofa

"Donghae were... Candies!!!" Alex said 

"Popcorn!!" Sammy said

"MYYYY DRAMAAAA" Uki said 

"Gimme a soda" 

"What? No thank you’s?”

"We helped you"

I just rolled my eyes, gave them soda and went to bed. ~~ I'm so tired ~~ I came into the room and found Hae mi neatly changed into her pajamas and laying on the far end of the bed. I felt myself smile, this is so weird. I feel so weird. She looks so cute when she's asleep.  Maybe I'm just tired. I should probably go to sleep now. I'm hallucinating things now. Overworked? Maybe...~

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Anyoung my readers. :) I'm so happy that you've read this. :)

Please comment and subscribe if you already haven't. Kamsamnida 

I'm going to use sujudork602's tactics. 

Comment or else no Eunhae moments. Ever. 

~kumawo, saranghaeyo my readers 

 

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PhinkLipsThick
#1
Chapter 40: So good! I want a sequel! Fighting authornim!
peiyan #2
Chapter 21: ermm.. may i know the song by ryeowook?
Hawaianlocomoco
#3
Chapter 8: omg im so confuse with the story with so many names!!!
sulminnie #4
Chapter 40: i really had fun with your fanfic.. :) the story is good and the sequencing is all nice and arranged.thanks..keep on writing :)
sulminnie #5
Chapter 28: super love the pics and gifs..:) <3
sulminnie #6
Chapter 3: well, i guess elfs will not going to hurt girls who will be loved by any members of super junior :)
ch3nya #7
Chapter 40: :D i loved this i couldnt stop reading once i started
KKyungMi
#8
Chapter 40: So.. this is over. I'm gonna miss it a lot... i never thought i was gonna love this story so much but it was beautiful. Thank you so much.
KeyLovaSHINeeForeva
#9
POVs:

I advise that you avoid changing POVs in first-person. First-person is meant for one person's thoughts only. First-person omniscient IS possible, but it's rare, and third-person omniscient would make things flow much more smoothly. The sharp and detached changed POVs between each person does not allow for smooth transitions to pass through. Also, when denoting locations, please use sentences in place of using "@ _____'s House", "At The Restaurant", etc.

Vocabulary:

Please avoid including computer language in the fic. If you wish to use Korean, do as your desire commands. Lol. I personally don't to exemplify the beauties and extravagance of English, plus barely of the people on here are Korean. (Note: There is no such thing as "Bwoh?". LOLOL. It's just "Mwoh?".) Your vocabulary has been getting so much better lately, and it shows in the character descriptions of your Foreword. Please fuse those same big words into your story! (: Both the readers and I will love it! (Plus, it makes you look intelligent. Hehe.)

Flow:

I'm kind of confused on this part. Sometimes, it seems as though there are two completely different stories going on with the same people. Otherwise, the flow feels fine. However, I would love it if you would expand upon what the characters are preparing for and how they reach it instead of moving to a completely different scene to start a new plot.

Overall, this story is humorous, enjoyable, and noteworthy, but fixing the grammar would really help gain more professional subscribers (by professional I mean good writers and all). I laughed, I smiled, I took relish in the occasional moments of peace. But for now, this story needs a continuation. Go write!

(P.S. To conclude, I'd like to mention my astonishment at your ability to update so consistently. I am SO temperamental when it comes to writing. It all depends on my mood, fatigue level, and willing to sit for five hours and write, but knowing that you can update so quickly inspires me.)