30 ★ When You Love Someone

The Star-Crossed Hearts
 
I love you but it’s not so easy 
To make you here with me
I wanna touch and hold you forever 
But you’re still in my dream
 
And I can’t stand to wait your love is coming to my life
But I still have a time to break a silence
 
When you love someone
Just be brave to say
That you want him to be with you
When you hold your love
Don’t ever let it go
Or you will lose your chance
To make your dream come true
 
I used to hide and watch you from a distance
And I knew you realized
I was looking for a time to get closer
At least to say 'hello'
 
And I can’t stand to wait your love is coming to my life
 
When you love someone
Just be brave to say
That you want him to be with you
When you hold your love
Don’t ever let it go
Or you will lose your chance
To make your dream come true
 
I never thought that I'm so strong
I stuck on you and wait so long
But when love comes, it can’t be wrong
Don’t ever give up
Just try and try to get what you want
Cause love will find the way
 
When you love someone
Just be brave to say
That you want him to be with you
When you hold your love
Don’t ever let it go
Or you will lose your chance
To make your dream come true
 
 
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Author's Note:
 
Celebrating 30th chapter for this story! * throws confetti *
Thank you for 137 subscribers and 203 comments up till today~ ^^
It's not a chapter but this is actually one of my favorite songs which I want to present for "Su Riah" in the real life. ;)
 
The song is presented by Endah N Rhesa, an Indonesia duo group. They married on 2009.
 
Hereby I give you the video with lyrics on top of this chapter.
Hope you enjoy it. :)
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inspirit0712 #1
Chapter 40: This story broke my heart a thousand times. It's because this is similar to mine.., falling in love with someone unconditionally, hurting yourself over and over again yet you find no reason not to love him and even if you've convinced yourself you've move on but the moment you saw that person, all those feelings and memories came rushing back...
I just want to ask question though,,is it your own experience too?
I won't force you to answer if you're uncomfortable.
Anyways,,thanks for writing this story..<3
ajnadin #2
Chapter 40: i really really feel hurt
blossomblackandwhite #3
Chapter 40: Okay, all i could say 'THIS STORY SOOO PERFECT!' i believe some of people ever encounter this kind situation (sadly, me too). I even can feel riah sincere for myungsoo... hope she could find someone betrer for her, she deserve more ♡ thank you for writing this beautiful story author-nim...^^
everydaechen #4
Chapter 29: KYAAAAAAAAA MALIQ N D'ESSENTIALS!!! NEVER THOUGHT I'D CAME ACROSS A FIC WITH MALIQ IN IT!!!! /FANGIRLS/
alienjello-dy #5
Chapter 40: i can totally relate myself to Riah's situation in this story
so i kind of understand her pain ...
i cried at the very final chapter though ...
elseiraa- #6
Chapter 39: hey, your story have touched my heart :')
my eyes teared up on almost every chapter, and I know how painful is the pain that Riah feels. been there, done that :"
Wishing all the best for Riah's love life, may you find your true love :3
timcil #7
Chapter 38: the ending is so realistic. its great!
blueskypiz #8
Chapter 29: Untitled - maliq n d'essential
inspirit-beauty #9
Chapter 40: just omg this is really a sad one sided love story! dont worry there will be a "someday" for us, its just that myung happens to be ur first step in loving expirience, i know there will be more :) and u really love him, for letting him and minding his own happiness he is one lucky guy and u r one in a million to love.. i hope ur friendship will still remains, better luck next time i guess but until now im still curious if what myung really thinks! haha i hope for ur fast recovery in ur first heartache? ^-^v
watermelon #10
Chapter 40: It's really heart-wrenching.
I will never be able to do that. Walking in, smiling while seeing him and her together.
The reason you cried for is so pure and kind.
But I guess maybe that's what they call true love, something I haven't experienced before though I've been hurt by a one-sided love before too.
I respect you, and I hope you know that.
One day, you'll meet your destined star too.
And I truly believe he will hold you dearest to him, till infinity and beyond.(':
Just like what I've said before, I really love this story. Because it's true, sincere and lovely.
Simple but yet beautiful. Thank you for sharing.<3
Hope today is a good day for you...(:
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