The Visit 16

I'm a Goner, Somebody Catch My Breath

Key runs out of his in a panic. Minho turns to him with a blank expression. Kibum tackles the confused demon.

“What’s wrong?” Minho coughs.

“Don’t leave me,” Kibum whimpers. The spirit doesn’t speak. “You’re all I have left! I need you! I don’t care that I can’t feel you! I don’t even care if I made you up,” Kibum cries, “you can be a demon a monster, I don’t care. Take my soul. Take my heart. I just want you to stay with me.”

“It’s easy to lose yourself. It’s harder for someone to lose the one they love,” the double answers softly.

“Promise you won’t leave me,” Key moves back to watch Minho’s face. “Swear you won’t leave me!”

Minho’s expression is troubled, “What do you see when you look at me?”

Kibum stops to study him, “You look just like Minho. You’ve asked me that question a couple of times already, why?”

Minho’s eyes cast, “I keep hoping for a different answer.”

“What do you see when you look at me?” Key is filled with a sudden curiosity.

“I don’t know anymore,” Minho answers in a hushed voice.

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Kairi_Moon #1
Chapter 74: That was a good story. Good job.
Engravedintomyskin #2
Chapter 74: TT_TT I will miss you so much I loved this story so much. I hope you have a bright future thank you. XD
thepaperpackage #3
Thank you for giving the story an audience. I really appreciate it cookies. Thank you DarkScene13 I'll miss you too TT^TT
thepaperpackage #4
Saina96, Minho was Key and Key was Minho ... does it make sense? I was afraid it wouldn't v.v
DarkScene13 #5
Chapter 74: Very sad ending, I'll miss this story like no other. Goodbye Author, thanks for all the great times we've shared, maybe there will be a next time.......I'll miss you
Saina96 #6
Chapter 74: Oooo sad ending T__T your writing touched me so much , it was a great mysterious sad story!
I'm also happy because after all of my dumb theories one was true ^_^ remember ? The one I said white rooms were for madhouse or something?!
But there's something I still don't get it...umm at the ending who died?or was it just minho leaving key to work abroad?how can minho and kibum be one person? O_O
thepaperpackage #7
Because they did have to leave, and they did leave. They had some abroad work they were asked to take care of.
moveslikeshinee
#8
Oh god, i can't believe i was right asdfghskajhs
Just one more question! Why were 'Minho' and Jinki always saying that they had to leave?
thepaperpackage #9
I was planning to write shorts to explain your questions further, but I'll have to think it over.
thepaperpackage #10
Moveslikeshinee, yes he was Minho the whole time. Jinki was Minho's (who is Key) co-worker and friend. 'Minho' couldn't shower with Key because of his injury. He would've needed to cover it before getting wet. That man was the guy who Key when he was in the psychiatric facility. The room number Key had for that place was seven.