That Night 2

I'm a Goner, Somebody Catch My Breath

Kibum is woken up by his body jerking violently off the bed. The spirit is awoken by the disturbance, he switches on the light. Key doesn’t get up, he seems bewildered. He pants against the floor, still completely stunned. He picks himself up slowly, his breath is still heavy and intermittent.

Minho stares at him cautiously, “Are you all right? Look at me. Who do you see?”

“You … look like Minho,” he huffs. Kibum stands up sluggishly, he stumbles towards his night stand.

The spook catches Key and pulls him onto the bed, “what’s wrong? Tell me what happened?”

Kibum becomes more alert, “I couldn’t move.” The haunt nods, continuing to study him. Key begins to tear up, “what if I forget?”

The revenant sits up, “what if you forget what?”

“I’m going crazy aren’t I?” Kibum sobs, “I need to remember.”

Minho frowns, “remember what? Talk to me!”

“I always forget. What makes this time any different?” Kibum becomes more incoherent.

The phantom is still unsure, “Tell me what’s wrong.”

Key’s heart begins to race, “I’m so cold.” He begins to scream violently.

Minho becomes terrified, “What’s wrong! What are you seeing?” Kibum doesn’t respond, he continues to look disjointed. Minho’s expression darkens, “you’re not cold!”

Kibum places a hand over his mouth, “I’m so cold.”

The shade grabs Key by the shoulders and shakes him, “Key! No, you’re not! You’re inside! You’re not cold.” Key grabs Minho’s face. The wraith stops moving.

Kibum begins to cry again, “I can’t feel you. I just want to feel you.”

Minho wraps his arms around Key gently, “I know.” He pulls away from Kibum to look over his expression once more, “did you have dream?” Kibum nods.

Key begins to wipe away his tears, “I’m scared. I feel like I’m gonna forget it.”

Minho Kibum’s hair, “tell me about your dream. It’ll help you remember it.” Key tells him the dream then requests for his book. He stops and stares at the empty page.

The visitant wraps a blanket around Key, “what’s wrong? Did you forget it?”

Kibum shakes his head, “I still remember. It’s just … I don’t want to write it down. I want to talk to Jonghyun in person about this.”

Minho crawls closer to the book, “maybe just put keywords to help jog your memory when you see him.” Kibum nods.

Entry 21

Rain

Minho

Crying

The demon grimaces at the words.

 

 

 

Lovlies! Sorry about this chapter being so short v.v I'm currently typing up the next chapter. It's doubtful that I'll be able to post it tonight. I'm changing the name to the story >.< sorry. It's just I see way too many stories with "the other" somewhere in it. Honestly, I just put that title cause I was put on the spot and didn't know what else I wanted to put. You guys might get the reference if we have the same taste in music. The more i look at it though... it makes the story seem way more angsty, which really wasn't my intention >.< Sorry. Something about listening to Glen Check makes the whole typing thing a lot easier to deal with. Just saying. Anyways, love you guys!

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Kairi_Moon #1
Chapter 74: That was a good story. Good job.
Engravedintomyskin #2
Chapter 74: TT_TT I will miss you so much I loved this story so much. I hope you have a bright future thank you. XD
thepaperpackage #3
Thank you for giving the story an audience. I really appreciate it cookies. Thank you DarkScene13 I'll miss you too TT^TT
thepaperpackage #4
Saina96, Minho was Key and Key was Minho ... does it make sense? I was afraid it wouldn't v.v
DarkScene13 #5
Chapter 74: Very sad ending, I'll miss this story like no other. Goodbye Author, thanks for all the great times we've shared, maybe there will be a next time.......I'll miss you
Saina96 #6
Chapter 74: Oooo sad ending T__T your writing touched me so much , it was a great mysterious sad story!
I'm also happy because after all of my dumb theories one was true ^_^ remember ? The one I said white rooms were for madhouse or something?!
But there's something I still don't get it...umm at the ending who died?or was it just minho leaving key to work abroad?how can minho and kibum be one person? O_O
thepaperpackage #7
Because they did have to leave, and they did leave. They had some abroad work they were asked to take care of.
moveslikeshinee
#8
Oh god, i can't believe i was right asdfghskajhs
Just one more question! Why were 'Minho' and Jinki always saying that they had to leave?
thepaperpackage #9
I was planning to write shorts to explain your questions further, but I'll have to think it over.
thepaperpackage #10
Moveslikeshinee, yes he was Minho the whole time. Jinki was Minho's (who is Key) co-worker and friend. 'Minho' couldn't shower with Key because of his injury. He would've needed to cover it before getting wet. That man was the guy who Key when he was in the psychiatric facility. The room number Key had for that place was seven.