Later That Night

I'm a Goner, Somebody Catch My Breath

White. He blinks at the blurred image. He’s nauseous, his brain feels like it’s being compressed. He looks into the white slate. He can see something burning in the distance, the colors are vivid and blinding.

He blinks. Figures pulling and carrying him. He can hear screaming, who is that? The shrieking is getting louder. He can hear the desperation in the voice clearly now.

No! Stop!” The screams are terrifying to listen to, who is that? Why is he screaming? The figures drop Key. He wants to move, but can’t seem to move his body. The bright fire is now burning furiously above him. He wants to scream, but can’t. He can only listen to the other voice’s cries. He grimaces. His body begins to burn, the fire’s burning me. Why? Why are they doing this to me? The screams are getting louder. They’re hurting his ears. They’re becoming unbearable. It’s deafening. The cries make his heart race and his mind uneasy. It makes him want to scratch his ears off.

Key screeches uncontrollably, he swings his arms aimlessly trying to pull away from the fire. The apparition grabs him before he can hurt himself, “they were burning me!”

“Who was burning you?” Minho asks nervously.

“The figures! There was screaming! He wouldn’t stop screaming!” Kibum wales. The wraith cradles Key’s head.

He rocks slowly back and forth, “you’re all right now. You’re here now. You’re with me.” Minho kisses his head sweetly, his hair in an attempt to calm Key, “I’m here. I need you to know I’m here.” Key digs his nails into the spook’s back, still unsettled from the dream.

“Don’t leave me,” Kibum whimpers.

Minho rests his cheek against Key’s head, “I won’t leave you. I’ll never leave you.”

 

 

It's short and part of the same night so i thought I should post it.

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Kairi_Moon #1
Chapter 74: That was a good story. Good job.
Engravedintomyskin #2
Chapter 74: TT_TT I will miss you so much I loved this story so much. I hope you have a bright future thank you. XD
thepaperpackage #3
Thank you for giving the story an audience. I really appreciate it cookies. Thank you DarkScene13 I'll miss you too TT^TT
thepaperpackage #4
Saina96, Minho was Key and Key was Minho ... does it make sense? I was afraid it wouldn't v.v
DarkScene13 #5
Chapter 74: Very sad ending, I'll miss this story like no other. Goodbye Author, thanks for all the great times we've shared, maybe there will be a next time.......I'll miss you
Saina96 #6
Chapter 74: Oooo sad ending T__T your writing touched me so much , it was a great mysterious sad story!
I'm also happy because after all of my dumb theories one was true ^_^ remember ? The one I said white rooms were for madhouse or something?!
But there's something I still don't get it...umm at the ending who died?or was it just minho leaving key to work abroad?how can minho and kibum be one person? O_O
thepaperpackage #7
Because they did have to leave, and they did leave. They had some abroad work they were asked to take care of.
moveslikeshinee
#8
Oh god, i can't believe i was right asdfghskajhs
Just one more question! Why were 'Minho' and Jinki always saying that they had to leave?
thepaperpackage #9
I was planning to write shorts to explain your questions further, but I'll have to think it over.
thepaperpackage #10
Moveslikeshinee, yes he was Minho the whole time. Jinki was Minho's (who is Key) co-worker and friend. 'Minho' couldn't shower with Key because of his injury. He would've needed to cover it before getting wet. That man was the guy who Key when he was in the psychiatric facility. The room number Key had for that place was seven.