Jonghyun Visits 2

I'm a Goner, Somebody Catch My Breath

“So,” Jonghyun asks. Key sits on the floor silently rearranging his books. “Any improvement,” Jonghyun pushes. Kibum continues to ignore him. Jonghyun sighs and grabs Key’s book. It takes him a couple of minutes to read. He closes the book, “your last entry was lengthy.” Kibum scoffs while shaking his head and mouthing Jonghyun’s words to mock him. Jonghyun s his cuffs and rolls up his sleeves, “So you think you’re being haunted.”

Key slams a book against the floor, “I am being haunted!”

Jonghyun crosses his arms, “by whom?”

Kibum looks over his shoulder, “can’t you read?”

Jonghyun sits back in his chair, “yes I can. I want to hear you say his name.”

Key turns back around, “Why?”

Jonghyun looks up at the ceiling, “because I’ve visited you countless times and you’ve never once said his name. Who is haunting you Key?”

Key looks down, “I don’t know.”

“Who does he resemble,” Jonghyun prods.

Kibum’s expression harshens, “Minho.”

Jonghyun smiles gently, “very good. You’re doing very well Key. I’ll see you in a couple days.”

“Wait,” Key yells.

Jonghyun stops and looks at Kibum. He’s crying silently, his desperate eyes stare at Jonghyun.

“Please stay,” Kibum whimpers.

Jonghyun checks his watch, “I suppose I could stay for a little while.” Key sniffs, while wiping away tears. Jonghyun sits back down; Kibum walks over to him and sits on his lap. Key balls up and leans onto Jonghyun’s chest.

Kibum closes his eyes, “do you remember when we were younger and I couldn’t sleep.”

“Yes Key,” Jonghyun replies.

“Can you do what you always did,” Kibum whispers. Jonghyun sighs. He then places his hand over Key’s further ear. Jonghyun begins to hum gently, Kibum’s eyes become heavy.

 

 

Last post for the night. I just remembered my promise about the epilogue. ;-; sorry i couldn't keep my promise. It took me longer than expected to type up more of the epilogue and send it to chair. I'm not sure when she'll be able to post. I haven't really asked her about it either. We've been busy with discussions of resting face. The struggle.

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Kairi_Moon #1
Chapter 74: That was a good story. Good job.
Engravedintomyskin #2
Chapter 74: TT_TT I will miss you so much I loved this story so much. I hope you have a bright future thank you. XD
thepaperpackage #3
Thank you for giving the story an audience. I really appreciate it cookies. Thank you DarkScene13 I'll miss you too TT^TT
thepaperpackage #4
Saina96, Minho was Key and Key was Minho ... does it make sense? I was afraid it wouldn't v.v
DarkScene13 #5
Chapter 74: Very sad ending, I'll miss this story like no other. Goodbye Author, thanks for all the great times we've shared, maybe there will be a next time.......I'll miss you
Saina96 #6
Chapter 74: Oooo sad ending T__T your writing touched me so much , it was a great mysterious sad story!
I'm also happy because after all of my dumb theories one was true ^_^ remember ? The one I said white rooms were for madhouse or something?!
But there's something I still don't get it...umm at the ending who died?or was it just minho leaving key to work abroad?how can minho and kibum be one person? O_O
thepaperpackage #7
Because they did have to leave, and they did leave. They had some abroad work they were asked to take care of.
moveslikeshinee
#8
Oh god, i can't believe i was right asdfghskajhs
Just one more question! Why were 'Minho' and Jinki always saying that they had to leave?
thepaperpackage #9
I was planning to write shorts to explain your questions further, but I'll have to think it over.
thepaperpackage #10
Moveslikeshinee, yes he was Minho the whole time. Jinki was Minho's (who is Key) co-worker and friend. 'Minho' couldn't shower with Key because of his injury. He would've needed to cover it before getting wet. That man was the guy who Key when he was in the psychiatric facility. The room number Key had for that place was seven.