Jonghyun Visits 7

I'm a Goner, Somebody Catch My Breath

“I dreamt about something,” Key whispers.

Jonghyun leans forward in his seat, “oh? Enlighten me.”

“A lot of it was hazy … I remember there being a fire. That was the clearest thing,” Kibum’s face glowers as he tries to piece together his dream.

“Was it?” Jonghyun interjects.

“Yes,” Key continues, “it was bright and colorful.”

“How did you know it was a fire?” Jonghyun investigates.

“I remembered it burning me,” Kibum answers.

Jonghyun nods as he sits back, “is that all?”

Key shakes his head, “there was screaming too.”

Jonghyun becomes interested again, “do you remember what the screams said?”

Kibum pouts, “No…”

Jonghyun interlocks his fingers, “I want to play a different game with you today. This game doesn’t have any pieces or necessary items. All I need is you.”

Key nods, “what are we doing?”

Jonghyun smiles, “it’s a word associative game. I’ll tell you a word and you tell me the first thing you think of. Okay?” Kibum nods.

Jonghyun, “name.”

Key, “Kibum.”

Jonghyun, “house.”

Key, “lonely.”

Jonghyun, “memory?”

Kibum, “forgotten.”

Jonghyun, “life.”

Key, “meaningless.”

Jonghyun, “death.”

Kibum, “J—taunting.”

Jonghyun’s eyes narrow, “What was that?”

“Nothing,” Key avoids.

Jonghyun, “Minho.”

Kibum, “dead.”

Jonghyun stares at Key, locked in a glower, “blue.”

“Fire,” Key answers unknowingly. Jonghyun nods, as if expecting that response.

“The fire from your dream,” Jonghyun states.

Kibum slants his body over the side of his couch, “are we done playing?”

“Yes,” Jonghyun replies, “answer the question.”

“Yeah. How did you know?” Key asks.

“Red and blue,” Jonghyun continues, ignoring Key’s question.

“Yes, have I told you this before?” Kibum inquires.

“You have. Tell me more about the lights,” Jonghyun continues to prod.

Kibum grimaces, “They felt like they were burning me. I could feel my body being stung by the flame.”

Jonghyun places a hand on his chin, leaving an index finger over his lip, “are you sure?”

Key stares at Jonghyun, wondering what he’s leading to, “yes?”

“What if you’re misinterpreting your dreams again? Bright red and blue fire isn’t impossible, but the two glowing so closely to each other?” Jonghyun fleshes out his reasoning.

Kibum rolls his eyes, “if you already know; why are you asking me? Why can’t you just tell me? What’s with this constant side-stepping? Stop taunting me and just tell me!”

Jonghyun’s gaze becomes cold, “no.”

“Why? If you’ve already told me before what’s the harm in telling me again? I’ll probably forget anyways!” Kibum argues.

Jonghyun sighs, “I ask you these questions, not because I have forgotten, but so you can remember. It’s obvious I remember these things clearly. I could tell you about your whole life if I wanted to, but I don’t, because it’s not my place to tell you about your life. I'm not here to cast judgement. I'm just here for you. I ask you these questions to try and guide you to the answers you seek. Don’t think that what I’m doing here is meant to taunt you.”      

 

 

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Kairi_Moon #1
Chapter 74: That was a good story. Good job.
Engravedintomyskin #2
Chapter 74: TT_TT I will miss you so much I loved this story so much. I hope you have a bright future thank you. XD
thepaperpackage #3
Thank you for giving the story an audience. I really appreciate it cookies. Thank you DarkScene13 I'll miss you too TT^TT
thepaperpackage #4
Saina96, Minho was Key and Key was Minho ... does it make sense? I was afraid it wouldn't v.v
DarkScene13 #5
Chapter 74: Very sad ending, I'll miss this story like no other. Goodbye Author, thanks for all the great times we've shared, maybe there will be a next time.......I'll miss you
Saina96 #6
Chapter 74: Oooo sad ending T__T your writing touched me so much , it was a great mysterious sad story!
I'm also happy because after all of my dumb theories one was true ^_^ remember ? The one I said white rooms were for madhouse or something?!
But there's something I still don't get it...umm at the ending who died?or was it just minho leaving key to work abroad?how can minho and kibum be one person? O_O
thepaperpackage #7
Because they did have to leave, and they did leave. They had some abroad work they were asked to take care of.
moveslikeshinee
#8
Oh god, i can't believe i was right asdfghskajhs
Just one more question! Why were 'Minho' and Jinki always saying that they had to leave?
thepaperpackage #9
I was planning to write shorts to explain your questions further, but I'll have to think it over.
thepaperpackage #10
Moveslikeshinee, yes he was Minho the whole time. Jinki was Minho's (who is Key) co-worker and friend. 'Minho' couldn't shower with Key because of his injury. He would've needed to cover it before getting wet. That man was the guy who Key when he was in the psychiatric facility. The room number Key had for that place was seven.