Jinki 5

I'm a Goner, Somebody Catch My Breath

“You’re losing him,” Jinki denotes.

“Shut up, Jinki,” Minho hisses.

A chair creeks as a body shifts, “I can see it in his writing. Would you like to read it?” Jinki lures.

“No, I can’t be second guessing myself. I always second guess myself, look at what that’s brought me. I need to believe that whatever I’m doing this time is going to work,” Minho’s voice is unconvinced.

“I know the way you’ve been handling this time has had a gentle demeanor, but you can’t tell me you’ve never been tempted to be a bit more forceful,” Jinki offers.

Minho doesn’t answer at first, “a few days ago I did … but it would never work. Hurting him intentionally would only taint his image of me.”

Jinki chuckles, “Why have Jonghyun around if you aren’t going to use his advice?”

“Hurting him wasn’t exactly what he meant,” Minho omits.

Jinki breathes, aggravated, “but he implied it. Jonghyun will always tip-toe around the things that need to be said. He was made that way. I was not. I know you weren’t either. You know how I know that? 'Cause you are no different than me."

"Don't ever compare me to you. I'm nothing like you. We are nowhere near the same breed," Minho growls.

Jinki laughs, "Everyone thinks your superior ... I honestly don't see it. It doesn't matter what you or anyone else says. I can see it in you, you know we are the same. I'm just a little wiser."

"Your wisdom is of no use to me, Jinki," Minho hisses.

"Heavy hands aren’t always wanted, but they’re sometimes needed,” Jinki affirms calmly.

 

 

 

Hello lovlies :D Sorry about the hiatus v.v I stopped working on the story for a little while, but lately I've been trying to finish the story. I'm not done with it quite yet. I have to keep revising. I keep giving away too much too soon. I hope you guys understand >.< Moveslikeshinee I'm glad you liked the chapter :D Sorry for taking so long to reply. I was gonna reply as soon as I was done with the story, but I'm too excited to wait xD I want to know what you guys think already! Yamalin >.< can i call you by your name? It's all right. Please don't apologize v.v I hope you're feeling better. I actually thought you were just reading and not commenting. Most of my subs don't really comment. I don't mind it, I just appreciate the audience. I'm a really quiet person myself. I can't even call the attention of a waitor at a restaurant >.< So I get it if people don't want to comment. I hope you feel better. I hope none of my other readers are sick :( Hope you guys like the chapter :D

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Kairi_Moon #1
Chapter 74: That was a good story. Good job.
Engravedintomyskin #2
Chapter 74: TT_TT I will miss you so much I loved this story so much. I hope you have a bright future thank you. XD
thepaperpackage #3
Thank you for giving the story an audience. I really appreciate it cookies. Thank you DarkScene13 I'll miss you too TT^TT
thepaperpackage #4
Saina96, Minho was Key and Key was Minho ... does it make sense? I was afraid it wouldn't v.v
DarkScene13 #5
Chapter 74: Very sad ending, I'll miss this story like no other. Goodbye Author, thanks for all the great times we've shared, maybe there will be a next time.......I'll miss you
Saina96 #6
Chapter 74: Oooo sad ending T__T your writing touched me so much , it was a great mysterious sad story!
I'm also happy because after all of my dumb theories one was true ^_^ remember ? The one I said white rooms were for madhouse or something?!
But there's something I still don't get it...umm at the ending who died?or was it just minho leaving key to work abroad?how can minho and kibum be one person? O_O
thepaperpackage #7
Because they did have to leave, and they did leave. They had some abroad work they were asked to take care of.
moveslikeshinee
#8
Oh god, i can't believe i was right asdfghskajhs
Just one more question! Why were 'Minho' and Jinki always saying that they had to leave?
thepaperpackage #9
I was planning to write shorts to explain your questions further, but I'll have to think it over.
thepaperpackage #10
Moveslikeshinee, yes he was Minho the whole time. Jinki was Minho's (who is Key) co-worker and friend. 'Minho' couldn't shower with Key because of his injury. He would've needed to cover it before getting wet. That man was the guy who Key when he was in the psychiatric facility. The room number Key had for that place was seven.