The White Room 3 I

I'm a Goner, Somebody Catch My Breath

Key doesn’t remember how he got in the white room. It almost feels like he was tossed into it with no transition or form of entry.

He stands up slowly looking around the empty room, “hello?” He crosses his arms, shivering nervously. He walks aimlessly in the room feeling as though he isn’t making any progress. The more he walks the more helpless he feels. He breaks into a sprint. Running doesn’t calm his nerves, it only makes him more restless.

The scenery never changes. His movement feels motionless. He can feel tears run off his face as he wheezes for breath. He screams into the echoing room. He feels stranded in this blank immense canvas. He trips over himself. He doesn’t get up, instead he curls into himself to whimper quietly.

 

 

Cookies, I love all the comments ^-^ I've never had all of you guys comment for a single chapter. Thank you. I did, DarkScene (._.  ) Moveslikeshinee, sorry that it has to be so sad. I live for sad moments in anything I read or watch. If it can make me cry it's done it's job. Everything I write have have to watch it like a move. I have to see that raw emotion. I have a really tough time translating it into writing, but if my cookies felt it I'm happy :D That would be an easy ending Cocoalatte. I think someone mentioned that same idea. Even if it made the ending easy it would make the rest of the story way more interesting. Lol, my name is Anna. My brothers and cousins call me nanners. My name for this profile is half my name, half chair's. We were given codenames by our uncle. She was the paperbag. I was the package. Some people also call me red because of my gaming name. Feel free to call me anything :3 I accept all names lol Saina96 OH GOD that would be so heartbreaking if he went to visit his grave and just broke down over Minho's headstone! Yamilin I'm sorry for making you cry v.v Sorry for the short chapter cookies. I need to work on this story and my gods story so you might have to deal with a few short chapters.

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Kairi_Moon #1
Chapter 74: That was a good story. Good job.
Engravedintomyskin #2
Chapter 74: TT_TT I will miss you so much I loved this story so much. I hope you have a bright future thank you. XD
thepaperpackage #3
Thank you for giving the story an audience. I really appreciate it cookies. Thank you DarkScene13 I'll miss you too TT^TT
thepaperpackage #4
Saina96, Minho was Key and Key was Minho ... does it make sense? I was afraid it wouldn't v.v
DarkScene13 #5
Chapter 74: Very sad ending, I'll miss this story like no other. Goodbye Author, thanks for all the great times we've shared, maybe there will be a next time.......I'll miss you
Saina96 #6
Chapter 74: Oooo sad ending T__T your writing touched me so much , it was a great mysterious sad story!
I'm also happy because after all of my dumb theories one was true ^_^ remember ? The one I said white rooms were for madhouse or something?!
But there's something I still don't get it...umm at the ending who died?or was it just minho leaving key to work abroad?how can minho and kibum be one person? O_O
thepaperpackage #7
Because they did have to leave, and they did leave. They had some abroad work they were asked to take care of.
moveslikeshinee
#8
Oh god, i can't believe i was right asdfghskajhs
Just one more question! Why were 'Minho' and Jinki always saying that they had to leave?
thepaperpackage #9
I was planning to write shorts to explain your questions further, but I'll have to think it over.
thepaperpackage #10
Moveslikeshinee, yes he was Minho the whole time. Jinki was Minho's (who is Key) co-worker and friend. 'Minho' couldn't shower with Key because of his injury. He would've needed to cover it before getting wet. That man was the guy who Key when he was in the psychiatric facility. The room number Key had for that place was seven.