Jinki 1

I'm a Goner, Somebody Catch My Breath

“I can’t believe you came back here after all that,” Jinki’s voice pierces through the silence.

“Good, you came. I need you to get me out of here. I can’t feel most of the left side of my body,” Minho’s voice is hoarse and dry.

“You should have stayed where I left you. You’re pushing yourself too hard,” Jinki lectures.

“I would have only been sleep deprived if you hadn’t of done this to me,” Minho omits.

“Don’t treat me like the bad guy,” Jinki raises his voice, “I didn’t betray you, your emotions did. Besides, I said I was sorry.” Minho doesn’t answer, instead he continues to breathe heavily. There’s a high pitched tapping sound, much like the sound of skin being smacked, “when did this run out?”

“A couple of hours before I got here,” Minho breathes.

“You’re cold,” a body shifts loudly, “something’s wrong. Can I check?” There is no audible answer. The sound of a damp, sticky tissue being pulled off a smooth surface is barely noticeable over Minho’s stuttering huffs.

The bed lurches, “I think you’re right.”

There’s more pealing, “I’m always right. We have to get you out of here now.”

“That bad?” Minho asks in a strained voice.

“Do you want something to bite on? We don’t want to wake up your little sleeping buddy. Seeing us like this would be hard to explain,” Jinki laughs.

“Just do it,” Minho growls, exasperated. There’s restrained groaning and excessive movement.

“Of … coarse,” Jinki whispers. Minho’s no longer panting. The room goes completely silent.

 

 

Lovlies! I read the comments. I guess I'm really losing you guys 0.o I thought the last chapter would've given me away >.< It's easy for me to say cause I already know the whole story. That's why I always ask you guys about the story, so I know what you guys know. Chair said the last chapter confused her too lol. I'm a little glad you guys haven't figured it out, it means I'm being good and restraining myself :3 YOU GUYS! I MADE 21 SUBS!!!! I have as many as my last story xD I'm so happy!!! Moveslikeshinee may I ask why you think they are both dead? 0.o Thank you sashaHRH x3

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Kairi_Moon #1
Chapter 74: That was a good story. Good job.
Engravedintomyskin #2
Chapter 74: TT_TT I will miss you so much I loved this story so much. I hope you have a bright future thank you. XD
thepaperpackage #3
Thank you for giving the story an audience. I really appreciate it cookies. Thank you DarkScene13 I'll miss you too TT^TT
thepaperpackage #4
Saina96, Minho was Key and Key was Minho ... does it make sense? I was afraid it wouldn't v.v
DarkScene13 #5
Chapter 74: Very sad ending, I'll miss this story like no other. Goodbye Author, thanks for all the great times we've shared, maybe there will be a next time.......I'll miss you
Saina96 #6
Chapter 74: Oooo sad ending T__T your writing touched me so much , it was a great mysterious sad story!
I'm also happy because after all of my dumb theories one was true ^_^ remember ? The one I said white rooms were for madhouse or something?!
But there's something I still don't get it...umm at the ending who died?or was it just minho leaving key to work abroad?how can minho and kibum be one person? O_O
thepaperpackage #7
Because they did have to leave, and they did leave. They had some abroad work they were asked to take care of.
moveslikeshinee #8
Oh god, i can't believe i was right asdfghskajhs
Just one more question! Why were 'Minho' and Jinki always saying that they had to leave?
thepaperpackage #9
I was planning to write shorts to explain your questions further, but I'll have to think it over.
thepaperpackage #10
Moveslikeshinee, yes he was Minho the whole time. Jinki was Minho's (who is Key) co-worker and friend. 'Minho' couldn't shower with Key because of his injury. He would've needed to cover it before getting wet. That man was the guy who Key when he was in the psychiatric facility. The room number Key had for that place was seven.
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