Jinki

I'm a Goner, Somebody Catch My Breath

“You’ve gotten quieter,” the poltergeist hums.

“No, I haven’t,” a second familiar voice speaks, “your skills are regressing.”

“They’re useless skills,” Minho’s voice softly retorts.

“Those ‘useless skills’ are important. They’ll keep you safe,” the voice snaps.

“What if I don’t want to be safe?” Minho sighs.

“As much as I love people disregarding their own safety, it’s not as rewarding when it comes from you,” the voice sounds riled.

“I’m not leaving him,” the demon growls.

“Relax,” the voice sighs, “our next job isn’t set in stone. I’m still waiting for … you know.” Silence. “You’re too attached—

“No one asked you, Jinki,” Minho interrupts.

“Tick tock, old friend,” Jinki threatens, “he doesn’t seem to be improving. Time’s running thin.” Silence. “We can’t save ‘em all,” Jinki whispers, perfunctory.

“He’s different,” Minho snarls.

“He’s a chore,” Jinki insists. Silence. “Look at you, I thought you were soft before, but this is pathetic.”

“There’s nothing wrong with having a little empathy,” the revenant shifts.

“Apathy is so much easier,” Jinki says with a cough.

Minho chuckles, “you really love what we do, don’t you?”

Jinki takes in a deep breath, “I do. I remember a time when you did too.”

Cloth crunches, “you’re thinking of the wrong guy.”

“If he gets better what then?” Jinki queries. Silence. “Your convictions are always unsavory, but it’s why I like keeping you around. You almost make me feel human,” Jinki laughs.

“Now you’re giving me too much credit,” Minho jokes.

“Maybe I should talk to him,” Jinki suggests.

“I’ll kill you if you try,” the words are said lightly, but the aggression can still be felt.

“Touchy, touchy,” the sound of fluttering paper fills the quiet room, “have you read it?”

“No,” Minho admits, “they’re all the same.”

“I thought you said this one was different,” Jinki pokes. Silence. “Why can’t you let things die? Why do you always try to change the inevitable? You know you’re only going to hurt yourself in the end.”

“I can’t help trying,” Minho’s voice is melancholy.

“I’m sorry,” footsteps move away from the bedside, “we’ve been requested for our services.” The haunt sighs.       

 

 

 

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Kairi_Moon #1
Chapter 74: That was a good story. Good job.
Engravedintomyskin #2
Chapter 74: TT_TT I will miss you so much I loved this story so much. I hope you have a bright future thank you. XD
thepaperpackage #3
Thank you for giving the story an audience. I really appreciate it cookies. Thank you DarkScene13 I'll miss you too TT^TT
thepaperpackage #4
Saina96, Minho was Key and Key was Minho ... does it make sense? I was afraid it wouldn't v.v
DarkScene13 #5
Chapter 74: Very sad ending, I'll miss this story like no other. Goodbye Author, thanks for all the great times we've shared, maybe there will be a next time.......I'll miss you
Saina96 #6
Chapter 74: Oooo sad ending T__T your writing touched me so much , it was a great mysterious sad story!
I'm also happy because after all of my dumb theories one was true ^_^ remember ? The one I said white rooms were for madhouse or something?!
But there's something I still don't get it...umm at the ending who died?or was it just minho leaving key to work abroad?how can minho and kibum be one person? O_O
thepaperpackage #7
Because they did have to leave, and they did leave. They had some abroad work they were asked to take care of.
moveslikeshinee
#8
Oh god, i can't believe i was right asdfghskajhs
Just one more question! Why were 'Minho' and Jinki always saying that they had to leave?
thepaperpackage #9
I was planning to write shorts to explain your questions further, but I'll have to think it over.
thepaperpackage #10
Moveslikeshinee, yes he was Minho the whole time. Jinki was Minho's (who is Key) co-worker and friend. 'Minho' couldn't shower with Key because of his injury. He would've needed to cover it before getting wet. That man was the guy who Key when he was in the psychiatric facility. The room number Key had for that place was seven.