Jonghyun 8

I'm a Goner, Somebody Catch My Breath

“You’re early,” Kibum says sharply. He crosses his arms, looking around the living to keep from focusing on Jonghyun’s figure. Jonghyun drags a chair loudly across the floor.

Jonghyun takes a seat directly in front of him, “the circumstances have changed. I’m here for you in your time of need.”

Key glowers, “I don’t need you.”

Jonghyun smiles kindly at the aggressive Key, “yes you do. I’m always watching over you. I know something is wrong. I can see it in your countenance, you’ve been depriving yourself of sleep again. Tell me about the dreams.”

Kibum lies down on the couch, “dreams … What dreams?”

Jonghyun sighs, “stop running from your problems. I can’t help you if you don’t tell me anything.”

Key rolls over to face the back of the couch, “I was in a white room. I didn’t know how big it was, it just seemed so vast … in the room there were two Minho’s. I remember there being an echo in the room, but when one of them spoke … his voice didn’t echo like mine. I remember walking right through the Minho with the echoing voice, but the other one was different. He was my ghost. I could touch him, but I couldn’t feel him. He started bleeding … and I couldn’t stop the blood…”

Jonghyun leans forward, “what did they say?”

Kibum can’t fight the tears from stinging his tired eyes, “my ghost said he was running out of time. The other Minho kept asking about my ring. I kept telling him I didn’t know where it was! But he kept asking! He wouldn’t help! He just kept asking!” Key’s voice becomes more erratic the more he talks.

Jonghyun stands from his seat, “what else happened?”

Kibum gives pained groans between each breath, “The ring came out of my ghost’s mouth. It was covered in blood.” Jonghyun moves next to Key cautiously, “I don’t understand.”

Jonghyun pats Kibum’s head, “you seemed to have done some of the deductive work. You know one of them is your ghost. Who does the other Minho represent? What do you know of that gives the impression of tangibility without having physical form?” Key remains silent, confused by the question. He lies next to Kibum on the small couch, “it may be more abstract than you think.”

Key grabs Jonghyun’s arm and pulls it over his body, “have I told you about this dream before?”

Jonghyun plays with Kibum’s fingers, “no, this is the first time you’ve told me about this dream. It’s very promising.”

 

 

 

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Kairi_Moon #1
Chapter 74: That was a good story. Good job.
Engravedintomyskin #2
Chapter 74: TT_TT I will miss you so much I loved this story so much. I hope you have a bright future thank you. XD
thepaperpackage #3
Thank you for giving the story an audience. I really appreciate it cookies. Thank you DarkScene13 I'll miss you too TT^TT
thepaperpackage #4
Saina96, Minho was Key and Key was Minho ... does it make sense? I was afraid it wouldn't v.v
DarkScene13 #5
Chapter 74: Very sad ending, I'll miss this story like no other. Goodbye Author, thanks for all the great times we've shared, maybe there will be a next time.......I'll miss you
Saina96 #6
Chapter 74: Oooo sad ending T__T your writing touched me so much , it was a great mysterious sad story!
I'm also happy because after all of my dumb theories one was true ^_^ remember ? The one I said white rooms were for madhouse or something?!
But there's something I still don't get it...umm at the ending who died?or was it just minho leaving key to work abroad?how can minho and kibum be one person? O_O
thepaperpackage #7
Because they did have to leave, and they did leave. They had some abroad work they were asked to take care of.
moveslikeshinee
#8
Oh god, i can't believe i was right asdfghskajhs
Just one more question! Why were 'Minho' and Jinki always saying that they had to leave?
thepaperpackage #9
I was planning to write shorts to explain your questions further, but I'll have to think it over.
thepaperpackage #10
Moveslikeshinee, yes he was Minho the whole time. Jinki was Minho's (who is Key) co-worker and friend. 'Minho' couldn't shower with Key because of his injury. He would've needed to cover it before getting wet. That man was the guy who Key when he was in the psychiatric facility. The room number Key had for that place was seven.