Jonghyun Visits 1

I'm a Goner, Somebody Catch My Breath

"How’s the journal going,” Jonghyun asks.

“It’s going,” Key sighs while sitting back on his couch.

Jonghyun pouts, “are you sleeping any better now?”

“Oh definitely, I sleep all the time now,” Key laughs.

Jonghyun gets up and walks around the room, “that’s not good either Key. Try to keep busy. Should I replace your TV?”

Key waves a hand and shakes his head, “no, everything on it is stupid.”

Jonghyun picks up Kibum’s journal, “may I read this?”

Kibum rubs his face, “knock yourself out.” Jonghyun reads each page diligently. In what seems like seconds he reads all the entries.

He sets the book down on the counter, “Key your entries are much too light. Don’t be afraid to write more. Write about your experiences.”

Kibum groans, “I don’t want to write more, can’t I sulk in peace?”

Jonghyun slides the book over too Key, “no. It doesn’t suit you. If I don’t see improvement I won’t bring you anymore food.”

Key smirks, “good, maybe I’ll starve to death.”

Jonghyun scoffs, “oh please. You’re too much of a coward to let yourself wither into nothing.” Jonghyun walks off to put away the groceries. Jonghyun is careful with every product, even with its placement. Key often watched him from afar when he did anything. It was fascinating, he did everything so gently, so quietly, with such finesse. It reminded Kibum of something. Jonghyun coughs while leaning over the counter, “I’m leaving, is there anything you need?”

Kibum rolls onto his side, away from Jonghyun, “no, just leave.” Key can never hear Jonghyun’s footsteps, just the fabric of his clothing. Kibum often tries to focus on the sounds hoping to catch Jonghyun make an intrusive noise for once. Kibum looks back, the room is empty. He didn't even hear the door close. “I guess only his mouth does that,” Key tells himself.

 

 

I posted more! ^-^ hope you guys like it. Tell me what you think. I want to know 0.o But please be gentle >.< I saw that i got some subs. Thank you xD And yes that tag was no joke. I didn't put it chair did. She's the one that knows how to work this site. I'm just going with the flow, and hoping i don't make any typoes. Typos? Typo's? Tiptoes?  (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻    

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Kairi_Moon #1
Chapter 74: That was a good story. Good job.
Engravedintomyskin #2
Chapter 74: TT_TT I will miss you so much I loved this story so much. I hope you have a bright future thank you. XD
thepaperpackage #3
Thank you for giving the story an audience. I really appreciate it cookies. Thank you DarkScene13 I'll miss you too TT^TT
thepaperpackage #4
Saina96, Minho was Key and Key was Minho ... does it make sense? I was afraid it wouldn't v.v
DarkScene13 #5
Chapter 74: Very sad ending, I'll miss this story like no other. Goodbye Author, thanks for all the great times we've shared, maybe there will be a next time.......I'll miss you
Saina96 #6
Chapter 74: Oooo sad ending T__T your writing touched me so much , it was a great mysterious sad story!
I'm also happy because after all of my dumb theories one was true ^_^ remember ? The one I said white rooms were for madhouse or something?!
But there's something I still don't get it...umm at the ending who died?or was it just minho leaving key to work abroad?how can minho and kibum be one person? O_O
thepaperpackage #7
Because they did have to leave, and they did leave. They had some abroad work they were asked to take care of.
moveslikeshinee
#8
Oh god, i can't believe i was right asdfghskajhs
Just one more question! Why were 'Minho' and Jinki always saying that they had to leave?
thepaperpackage #9
I was planning to write shorts to explain your questions further, but I'll have to think it over.
thepaperpackage #10
Moveslikeshinee, yes he was Minho the whole time. Jinki was Minho's (who is Key) co-worker and friend. 'Minho' couldn't shower with Key because of his injury. He would've needed to cover it before getting wet. That man was the guy who Key when he was in the psychiatric facility. The room number Key had for that place was seven.