SURFACE 86/100 iBAPbaby - Stop Annoying Me!
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Stop Annoying Me!
written by iBAPbaby
reviewed by Hunniefunnybunny
Title: 9/10
It catches people attentions, I like it.
Plot: 29/35
I like the plot, but you could add some more into it. It's pretty original, I like how you made this into your own story. But there are lot of fabrics or stories where it's a similar case where the two main characters have a hate-love relationship. If you want it be your own I think you should throw some twist in it, something totally your own. Because from reading the summary, I can already tell that at the end they would be together anyways. So, it doesn't really make me believe the story so much. No matter how much you play up that they hate or love each other, just from reading the summary
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