Title: 3/10
Honestly speaking, I do not think this title fits your story very well. When I first read the title and the near barren foreword, I was expecting Taehyung and Jungkook to have a cute little discussion about extra-terrestrials under the starry night sky and maybe even a little peck or whatever but instead, there were very very brief mentions of aliens followed by pretty much what I can only call pwp. I just feel like I’ve been misled and that the title should have something a little more ty sounding so that the readers can know what to expect.

Plot: 27.25/35

                5/5: Originality
                Lol, I think getting it on on a rooftop is pretty original and I’ve definitely never read anything of the sort before so full marks!

                4/10: Believability
                The transition from innocently conversing about aliens to more steamy stuff is a bit odd. It just kind of came out of nowhere and well, I guess it could be considered sweet in a way but then again, regardless of the late hour, I don’t think anyone can get away with something like that without being discovered.

                7/10: Narration
                I think you write very well! You never failed to provide detailed descriptions of everything that was going on and considering that isn’t an easy genre to write, you did a rather good job! I’d also like to mention that I really liked the last part where Jungkook thinks to himself that along with the idea of aliens, he himself is also on Taehyung’s mind. ♥

                8.25/10: Setting
                You directly mentioned that they were on a rooftop but you didn’t really go in-depth to describe their surroundings or anything but that’s fine since our focus was more on Taehyung and Jungkook’s conversation and ahem. The reason why I scored you so high regardless was because, quite ironically, you blew me away with this sentence: “Jungkook could barely feel t