Title 10/10
 As usual, I was confused about the title, because it sounds like a title for a different genre or something else. But this was just too cute, especially if you sold the idea that Dohee is the Little Heart ;)
 
Plot 33/35
          Originality 5/5
                    It was a very good idea. I really loved the plot for this. To be honest, the beginning seemed a bit off, since I wasn’t sure where the story was going to go, but when you added in all the lovingness coupled with the fact that “XX is dating XX” in a brilliantly twisted turn of events, I love it. It was great.
          Believability 8/10
                    I love the fact that in the beginning you had your characters handle the “abandonment child issue” quite well. I love that, that part was realistic. Although, it be a bit of a very large coincidence that Dohee ended up being some celebrity’s daughter, but it wasn’t so far over the top ridiculous that I was turned off. So again, let me say, you handled this as realistically as possible and it’s great~!
          Narration 10/10
                    There wasn’t a much issue here, it was great and it was handle smoothly.
          Setting 10/10
                    You clearly stated where each place was, and I wasn’t confused, so that’s good lol. You followed a great formula to lead the audience along with the characters. Keep up the great work~
 
Characterization 34/35
          Development 10/10
                    With how you introduced Dohee as this “traumatized” child and how you had her talking just a bit is a great development. Now moving along to the main characters, lol, the also made a bit of a development since Sungmin and Kangmin are in a relationship not, nice.
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