Crumbling Walls

The Mask
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“What did you name our baby?” Luhan asked boldly as he cuddled with Jinah. They were in a hotel where the two of them could enjoy their privacy and talk about everything. However, Luhan didn’t want to talk about everything.

Jinah felt uncomfortable about talking to Luhan casually. She knew there were so many important things to talk about, but seeing Luhan’s state, she knew better than to stress him out again. His face looked sick and tired. Although he wasn’t showing any signs of sadness and depression, Jinah knew that that wasn’t the case.

When Luhan called it ‘their’ baby, she felt a weird feeling in her stomach. It wasn’t a bad one. She knew it was a good feeling – a feeling she could only experience with Luhan.

“Minah,” she answered quietly.

Luhan raised an eyebrow and continued rubbing Jinah’s stomach. “So you decided to name her after you? What about me? I’m the father!” he whined childishly. “How about Han… Hana? ‘Han’ from Luhan and ‘Na’ from Jinah. Hana would be good!” he cheered in triumph at the name he came up with.

Jinah gave him a funny look and remained silent. She was thinking about his suggestion. “But I’ve been calling her Minah for a long time now. Won’t she get confused when she gets born?”

Luhan bit back his laugh. He couldn’t believe how innocent and naïve Jinah was after everything that had happened. He had the big urge to and make fun of her, but annoying a pregnant woman was a big no-no for him. “No, that wouldn’t happen. Let’s just name her Lu Hana, okay?”

Luhan was hugging Jinah from behind while lying on the bed. Jinah’s head was on top of Luhan’s arm while Luhan’s other arm never stopped making random shapes on Jinah’s stomack. Jinah was in bliss with Luhan.

“What’s with the ‘Lu’?” Jinah asked. “We can’t name her after you when we’re not married. She had to be named after me.”

Luhan kept quiet. For the first time that day, he thanked Jinah’s naivety.

-

For the past few days, Luhan and Jinah had been staying at the hotel. It surprised Jinah that Luhan was able to rest for 3 straight days without being called back to the company. Luhan had been trying his best to fix all the mess that he was in – Kevin, Jinah’s parents and his career.

Luhan walked in the suite hotel room with food in hand. He found Jinah’s weird cravings cute and he never complained about it once. After all, he wasn’t there when Jinah was suffering from the first few stages of pregnancy. He was just making up for it and fulfilling his duties as a boyfriend and as Hana’s father.

“Here’s the roasted duck that you wanted.” Luhan laid the container on the small table and searched for Jinah by looking around. “Jinah?” he called. He heard the bathroom door open and motioned for her to come to him.

Jinah would usually beam whenever she got what she wanted, but not this time because… “I kind of changed my mind,” she mumbled and scratched her head. “I’m not that hungry anymore. Can I eat that later?” she asked cutely.

Luhan turned around and circled his arms around her waist. “You have to eat now. It’s already lunch time.” He kissed Jinah’s forehead and run his hands up and down her back. “Go, take a seat.” Jinah pouted and sat down unwillingly.

“What did you buy for yourself?” she asked. She opened Luhan’s container and her eyes twinkled when she saw the cold noodle soup. She looked at Luhan and Luhan knew what th

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[14/9/29] overlooked a lot of 1st person's POV and forgot to change it to 3rd person's POV. i will work on it soon. sorry for the confusion!

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ettoiscy
#1
Chapter 51: Omg luhan being so frking my ideal boyfriendd aaargh. Omo he's so sweet. I love this story.
Thankyou authornim. Good job.
Oh-Hannah #2
Its look like a good story am going to start to read
tonnettie
#3
Chapter 51: Keep your enemies closer! Dang Kevin is such a great pretender. But never the less they are adorable in their way
pavitraa1998 #4
Chapter 51: the story is so good i'm literally crying
MZ0077 #5
Chapter 44: I knew it was kevin who did that..
But i kinda scared what would he do to luhan if jinah get together again with luhan
Gracegesang #6
Chapter 51: Looove your story... jealous luhan is sòo cute!!!
luexolu726 #7
Chapter 51: Read this for the nth time! This story is just so wonderful and beautifully written! ❤
cortana29 #8
Chapter 9: I normally don't comment about a story but this one is an exception, and what an exception it is. I really loved the characterization of Jinah, the Reds, Luhan and Exo; I felt that you really made Jinah come alive as a character, not only because of your description of her. but by the way you wrote about her dancing, drawing and her thoughts/feelings, made me aware that Jinah was creative, passionate and diligent. I also liked the fact that Luhan and Jinah already knew each but it just took them meeting in Beijing for Luhan to really notice her and take an interest. Wow! This was a really long and embarrassing comment. On a positive note, I really loved this story and I hope you continue to write more. PS: do you still read comments about this story?
mznary #9
Chapter 51: omg!!! cheesy luhan is soooo cute! love this story..this is just..just amazing!
ThatOneLuLuLover
#10
Chapter 25: OMG HOT KIVEN *melts*